TuJoSaathHai (A NivRen Story)..FF..Ch 31/Pg 93 - Page 5

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sonal, that was awesome.... Nivi has a crush on viren? Interesting.... Plz continue soon.... Can't wait to read next part....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#42
Brilliant FF. Absolutely loving every chapter. Keep continue soon , cant wait to read the next 1....😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
#43
great story cont soon n plzz pm me on d next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
#44
Hey sonal that was beautiful. Plzzzzzzzzzz continue soon, can't wait for the next chapter.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#45
wawo sonal Amazing chaptr ..luvd it ..oy hoy nivi b kuch kam nahi nikli ..love NivRen <3
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Posted: 15 years ago
#46
yay, Nivi has a crush on Viren.I like that.😍
Thank you so much.I love YD here,
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sonal.. wonderful... pls continue dear.. 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thanks to all of u guys......for appreciating my work.
And i'm so sorry that i cudnt post anything yesterday.......but today i tried.....n its a very short chapter...........n i hope u guys wont mind.
I'll try to update the next one as soon as i'm done with it......till then i hope u all will like this short chapter 4.
Thnks so much for ur patience.

Chapter 4

Nivi goes to dadaji's room n greets everyone……Vandana comes to Nivi n holds her hand n takes her to where she was sitting……n Nivi sits by her…….Sid talks with Nivi……n asks……Nivi……we had went to this restaurant yesterday n heard some lady call out a girl by name of Nivedita……that girl had broken the heel of her shoes.

Nivi remembers that too……n so she asks suddenly………yes it was me…..was it u who helped me when I was about to fall ??

Sid laughs n says…..no no no…..it was Viren.

Nivi swallowed hard on Viren's name…….she thought to herself…….no wonder his touch was like a shock to me……I cudnt see him but……I guess my heart felt him.

She smiles in herself…….n right then Viren comes n as soon as she sees him….she turns away to hide her face coz she was blushing……but she thinks in herself that she cant be this way whenever he is around……she shudnt let him know….how she feels…..coz he'll again make fun of her…..like he used to in their childhood……coz he never liked her……So she turns towards them again with a normal expression.

Viren n Divya joins them n Viren sits by Sid n puts his hand on his shoulders n asks…….So Sid……what were u talking with ur best friend ???..........he emphasizes on Best…….n then Sid says…….nothing Viren…..I was telling her that the girl we saw in the restaurant……..

Sid cudnt complete his sentence……coz Viren interrupts n looking at Nivi….he asks…….was that her ??.........our Nivi….was the Nivedita in the restaurant ??

To Nivi…..it sounded sarcastic……so she turns immediately n asks……why??......cant I go to a restaurant ??

Viren smiles at her reaction n he says……..its not that u cant……but the question is why were u ??.......are u working ??

Nivi takes a deep breath n says firmly….yes I am…….i work for an event management company……n yesterday…..i had went to the caterers with my boss.

Sid interrupts now n asks……was she ur boss ??.....oh my god……she was so rude.

Nivi smiles to Sid n says……she is nice…..but that time she was mad……coz they had asked us to wait.

Viren who was looking at her from then on……..says……..so our Nivi has actually grown up to have been working……..our darpok Nivi has grown out of our shell ha ??

Nivi gives him a hard look n asks…..why Viren ?? don't u like it that I'm not darpok anymore ??

Viren again smiles at her reaction……actually he was enjoying this kind of reaction from her……so he says……no…infact I like that u r not darpok anymore……but how much…..we'll see later……n with that he winks at her n Nivi makes an angry expression n turns away.

It was an angry expression for Viren…..but for her…..when he winked…..she felt like her heart skipped a beat…….she took a deep breath n smiled lightly.

Viren smiled too…..when he saw that angry look on her face……he was enjoying her reactions……as though she doesnt want to put down her weapons in front of him……..he looked towards her direction n saw her hair had fallen on her shoulders…..n he remembered that girl in the restaurant……n so he says to himself that…….now I'm sure that it was u Nivi…….coz I don't think anyone wud have such beautiful n long hair like u…….i can still feel ur touch on my hand…….the urge I had yesterday to look at ur face…..is still there coz……..even though I had seen u…….I don't know why but I still wanna keep looking at u……..its kinda strange n unexplainable feeling I have for u……..maybe coz we had met after such a long time.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Love it Sonal, Thank you sweets. You are right it is short lol. Will wait eagerly for your update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#50
awww it waz so cute and beautiful update ..plzz cont soon ..thanks hun..😛.

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