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Posted: 15 years ago
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I am speechless.... The last tearful scene has just shaken me and here is my version of Viren's silent tears...it is a little jumble but that is how I feel rt now...

Tears rolling down I recall
The love you blessed upon me
The shame I bought upon you

Would you hear me if I call your name
Would you hold me even after knowing my shame
Would you believe me if I tell you I want to change for you
Would you accept me for who I was and am going to be
Would you walk with me in all walks of my life
Would you bless me with your love once again

I am losing my mind over the things I have done
Is there anything I can do to make those things be gone

The warmth that I feel I want it for ever
The peace that I can sense would it stay for ever
The love my heart is feeling will it last for ever

Tears rolling down I want to recall
The memories that I want to live once again
The magic amidst us I want to rekindle again
The smiles that I want to put on your face again
The love which will beat in both our heart again....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mythri I am speechless. It's beautiful way to put Viren's feeling in words. Loved it sweetie.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG, Mythri!! Wow, now I am speechless. That is an exceptionally beautiful poem. Loved it dear. You seriously have done a fabulous job narrating Viren's exact thoughts and emotions. Thanks, dear, as always for putting forth your thoughts so beautifully. I have become a huge fan of those..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Ok all I wanted to say is I m speechless after reading ur poem. More emotions then Viren
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Welcome me, I am the new member of the speechless club.
Never read a more apt description of the emotions. Well said.
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- Anju
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mythri wawoo ..heart touching words dear ..awww we all can feel our virens pain and how he badly in love...😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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u have nicely blend the words well written👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mythri, just wonderful. Am speechless
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow beautifully written👏 Absolutely loved it...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG..Mythri now i'm speechless....!! beautiful poem...!! u r fantastic dear..!!

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