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VirMan_ArShi

@VirMan_ArShi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#81

NivRen in d kitchen

Viren says 2 Nivi i have sumthing special 4 u n i want 2 show u dat cum wid me jaan..... Nivi says 2 him Viren i am busy now plz go 4m here............Viren holds her hand tightly n stares at her...... Nivi says Viren what r u doing sumone will cum leave my hand plz.....Viren says so what jaan we r married n i don't care about others.....Nivi says but i do so plz leave me.........Viren says u just cum wid me its urgent......Nivi says plz Viren go 4m here n let me finish my works.......suddenly Nandu cumes n Viren leaves Kitchen

Viren standing silently near d window den Nivi cumes n askes Viren what happened Viren n what do u want 2 show me......Viren is still silent n angry.....Nivi says oh Viren plz don't b angry plz.......Viren doesn't reply n leaves d room.......Nivi becomes sad......she opens d cupboard n finds a gift.....Nivi smiles n opens dis.......dere is a blue saree 4 her......she whiperes its so beautiful thanks Viren.........after sumtimes Viren returnes back in d room n when he was about 2 go 2 d bed Nivi gives him a tight hug 4m his back.......Viren doesn't say anything he just wants 2 feel her presence around him........Nivi says thanks Viren thank u so much.......Viren cotrolls himself n says thanks 4 what go n do ur important works......Nivi says jaan i am so sorry plz try 2 understand.....Viren says i am feeling very tired now so i want 2 sleep ........Nivi holds his hands n starts singing

Yeh mera dil yaar ka deewana
Deewana deewana pyaar ka parwaana
Aata hai mujhko pyaar mein jal jaana
Mushkil hai pyaare tera bachke jaana
Yeh mera dil yaar ka deewana

Deewana deewana pyaar ka parwaana
Viren takes her on his arms....she begins breathing quickly.......he can clearly feel d goosebups that he created on her body.........de both r holding each other very tightly

n d song playing in the background is

Kuch khaas hai,
Kuch paas hai,
Kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai,
Kuch duriyan, nazdikiyan,
Kuch hass padi tanhaiyaan,
Kya yeh khumaar hai, kya aitbaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Haan hai shayad,
Kya yeh bahar hai, kya intezaar hai,
Shayad yeh pyaar hai,
Pyaar hai shayad..

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FrozenRain

@FrozenRain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#82

@skojila---awesome scene yaar..and welcome to this besharam gang....

@diya--loved it....nandu and lajwanti....😆.....

@mim--too good yaar.....love the BG song...without nandu noone makes any scenes lol...😆

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Diya Poonith

@diyaloveskinny

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: sana4kinha
@skojila---awesome scene yaar..and welcome to this besharam gang....

@diya--loved it....nandu and lajwanti....😆.....

@mim--too good yaar.....love the BG song...without nandu noone makes any scenes lol...😆

Yes Dear I thought why not include their romance also, They also need a bit of romantic scenes, and without them how will Nivren realise that they love eachother, after all they are a good means to make each other jealous

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VirMan_ArShi

@VirMan_ArShi

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#84

thanks Sana n Diya

we all love Nivi-Viren-Nandu luv triangle lol

i'll also try 2 make a scene including Nandu d Bandhu 😆😆

Edited by pinkparty - 15 years ago

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FrozenRain

@FrozenRain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Ok mim.....sorry yaar can't be come here much..busy in watching india-england WC match along with studying..........Have fun...and waiting for ur next besharam one.....

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Diya Poonith

@diyaloveskinny

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: sana4kinha
Ok mim.....sorry yaar can't be come here much..busy in watching india-england WC match along with studying..........Have fun...and waiting for ur next besharam one.....

Hey Sana its Ok janu, u watch the match but do inform us who won the match, Ok and wish u good luck with ur studies

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dyhardfan

@dyhardfan

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#87

Lol its really sweet nivi getting jealous for nandu lol.

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Asma

@anjaani07

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#88

Hi everyone, this is my first ever scene on anything, let alone NivRen so I'm not sure if it's any good!! Also I haven't read many other scenes on this thread apart from Moni, Faizuu and Jafrina's so apologies in advance if it's similar to anyone else's! I've been missing NivRen like crazy this weekend and I just woke up and thought of it and was just itching to write it!! It's actually a short scene but with a lot of description....enjoy (hopefully!)

Viren was walking past the kitchen when he heard a scraping noise. There was some sort of event happening in the house with everyone rushing around looking really busy and stressed and Viren was extremely annoyed with that and was trying to escape from the house as quick as possible so the noise barely registered but for some unknown reason he stopped at the kitchen door and looked in. There he saw Nivi, alone and with her back to him. She was standing on a stool which anyone could see wasn't for standing on (eye roll), reaching into one of the higher cabinets and he could see she'd never make it. What was with this girl? All she seemed to do was put herself in dangerous situations...he thought again about getting her a warning sign! These thoughts ran though his mind for a few seconds and then he stood there just taking her in, she was wearing a beautiful blue saree, the same colour as the suit she wore at the evening out on their honeymoon and he couldn't keep his eyes off her. In just a few seconds, all his thoughts about leaving vanished from his mind and all he could think of was Nivi. Without being able to stop himself, he silently moved into the kitchen , closer to her, feeling like he was moving towards the centre of his universe with every step...

Nivi was trying very hard to reach a jar of semolina which she needed to make halva. There was so much to do and she had such little time! She knew the stool was placed a bit too far out but she didn't have time to move it closer and was hoping that she could just about reach...Just then she heard a little noise which made her jump slightly and the already rickety stool toppled out from underneath her and she felt the very familiar sensation of falling! She cried out and closed her eyes waiting for the pain but instead she found herself being held in strong arms which were as familiar to her as her own. Even with her eyes closed she knew who her saviour was and she opened her eyes knowing she would be looking into the beautiful eyes of the only person she wanted to be with for the rest of her life...

Viren was still walking towards Nivi, he knew he should stop but he couldn't. His purple Converse trainers made a slight squeaking noise against the floor and he saw Nivi jerk slightly and almost in slow motion, he could see the stupid stool give out from under her...Instantly there was a sharp stabbing pain in his heart at the thought of Nivi getting hurt and without giving it anymore thought he rushed forward and caught her before she could fall.

She had her eyes closed. Ignoring the urge to hide her away from the world, he opened his mouth to yell at her about how accident prone she was and how saving her was becoming a full time job but before he could get any words out she opened her eyes and looked at him. All the angry thoughts flew out of his mind as he looked into her eyes and felt himself falling into them. Some of her hair had fallen over her face so he gently put her down and keeping his right arm under her he slowly brought his left hand up and moved the hair, strand by strand, away from her face and behind her ear as if in a trance.

Nivi couldn't breathe, she couldn't think, all she could do was feel as Viren slowly moved the hair from off her face, brushing her cheek as he did so and sending electric shocks through her with each touch. She looked into his eyes and saw so much love there that her heart felt like it was about to burst with its own answering love. She felt like she was flying and knew that she would not stop Viren today; she wanted this moment to never end.

Viren had moved all the hair away so her face was clear and the way she was looking at him, he knew he should let go of her and run but he couldn't seem to move. His brain was shouting at him, what are you doing, you want her to hate you remember, not look at you like she's melting!! But she did look like she was melting into him and he couldn't stop himself from moving even closer to her. He couldn't think of anything else except how much he loved her and how hard it was for him to be apart from her, pretending to not care. He was tired of it and wanted there to be nothing between them, he brought his face close to hers so that they were only a few millimetres apart and he felt Nivi's heart beating even faster as his own also sped up at the thought of how close they were. Their noses were touching now and he could feel her breath on his face as he closed his eyes. There were no more thoughts in his mind, all he could think of was the girl in his arms, all he could feel was his love for her pouring out of him. He brought his arms down, his hands trailing her shoulders, until they were around her waist and held her to him. He kissed her lightly on her forehead and then trailed kisses down the side of her face to her cheek. He felt Nivi shiver with every kiss and then brushed his nose against hers softly and moved so that their lips could finally meet...

Suddenly there was a loud crashing sound behind them which bought Viren back down to earth and they both jumped apart. CC was standing there and it was obvious she had just knocked some heavy pots off the counter to distract them. She looked furious and also confused at what she'd just walked in on after the last few days events. Nivi had gone bright red and started rushing around again without meeting Viren's eyes. Viren badly wanted Nivi to look at him but then his mind finally won over and he thought, what am I doing?! He was extremely confused, he didn't know what he was doing or how he'd come so close to ruining all of his plans. He thought again of how danger seemed to follow Nivi but now wondered if the sign next to her should read WARNING: Danger of VIREN falling here!!

He shook his head of all these thoughts and with one last long look at Nivi (he couldn't stop himself because he wouldn't be seeing her again all day...) he put his head down and walked out of the kitchen and away from his one reason for being.

Ok, so what did u girls think? I know its not too besharam really but I wanted to keep it in line with the current story line and I know that we all want to know more of Viren's feelings so hopefully this did that! Let me know what u think! PS: I don't know if u use semolina to make halva, just a guess!!

Edited by anjaani07 - 15 years ago

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jafrina

@-Jafrina-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#89

Jafrina.....loved ur scene.....i love kitchen romance....😊.....and i love ur nivren vms.....i watched some of them.....Pls put all ur vm's link in a seperate thread..bcz no one knows that u r the creator of such beautiful vm's........and hugs for such a cute scene.....😛.......Love u.....

thank u so much sana

ill try 2 put links in seperate thread wen i get time

luv u 2

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jafrina

@-Jafrina-

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#90

Originally posted by: skojla

Ok guyz ive gotta scene

Viren is about to leave and sees that Nivi is on her way to their room. Viren leaves his towel out on the bed and goes to the bathroom. Viren turns on the shower and goes to stand by the door to listen if Nivedita has come yet.

Nivi comes into the room and notices that Viren is in the bathroom. She looks on the bed and sees the towel. She goes and picks it up. "yeh Viren bhi na." Nivi stands outside the bathroom door and knocks.

"Viren tum apna towel bahar hi chorr gaye."

Viren smirks. "Nivedita main naha raha hoon. Tum hi andar rakhdo na."😲

"Viren main kaise?"

"Please Nivedita"

"Ok, main rakh dethi hoon"

Viren smiles. Nivedita opens the door and walks in. From behind Viren quickly closes and locks the door. Nivedita turns around. "Viren yeh tum kya kar rahe ho?" Viren slowly walks toward Nivedita. Both are in a eye-lock. Nivedita slowly steps back. Viren comes closer. Nivedita steps into the shower and Viren follows. Nivedita tries to go around Viren but is unable to. Viren comes closer.

And closer.

And closer. ☺️ 😳

Nivedita begins breathing really hard. She closes her eyes and turns her face away from Viren. Viren gently puts his hand under Nivedita's chin and turns her face toward him so he can see her. "nazarai kyon choraree ho Mrs. Viren Sood?" Nivedita opens her eyes. Dhono puri tharan se bheek chuke hai. Viren kisses Nivedita on the cheeks. And sings:

"Pee loon, main tere neele neele naino se sab rang

Pee loon, tere gheele gheele hoto ki sargam

Pee loon, hai peene ka mossammmm...."

awww that was so sweet

loved it

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