New FF Hum Tum & Love? (PART 13 page 68) - Page 24

Originally posted by: Ammu_SunshYn

aww!!....finally shilpa has entered!!...

thnx for the PM noorya!!

yeah even thougt it was in flashback😳

but dont worry she is comin in the next upate😛

Originally posted by: krock

omg norriya i love u yaar what a update just superb yaar. love the whole drunken drama it was so cute shaan and khanak wo bhi drunk my god and the dialog thy wer faboulous yaar............loved this one i dont remember exactly the sexy one why he mind right sexy god i can imagine thes two.............it was really funny and cute and love the shilpa karan love story it was so cute yaar...............loved the way he proposed her oh so cute..............norrya i love ur dialog i can imagine this 5 guyz including rohen ha he was cute also ........................agar jaldi update nahi kiya na to dekh lena fir punga hum sab se hain..............plz i cant wait anymore😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃😃

thanks ankita

Originally posted by: priya_cool_123

loved it noorya... the talli shanak and the cute karan and shilpa.... waiting for the next one...

ok now with the risk of sounding desparate i am asking u... when will shanak fall in love....

thanks priya😳

Originally posted by: rbo_d_best

OMG .. .this was awesome .... Drunk Shanak ... awww cho cute ... reminded me of Tat hotel scene where khanak gets drunk and shaan ends up in lock-up ...

Felt sad for Karan though :( ... get him a gurl yaaar ...

waise SHANAK kabhi ek dooosre ke pyaaar main pagal honge ???

Lovely update ... and thanks for the PM

thanks😆

Originally posted by: k.krithika

Hi Noorya
I really like this FF
Awesome update good job 👏

Thanks
Krithika 😊

thank u soo much dear😳

Originally posted by: shamasallfav

awesome part noorya..!!😳 it ws just too cute....but is baar tumne bht intzaar karvaaya..😆

d bar scene ws really cute n funny...d dialogues r very well written..!!

d flashbak too ws really a gud one...cute confession b/w both..but abhi samajh nhi aa rhi ki thn wat went wrong..🤔....

cont. soon....!!w8in..disp..2 knw more abt karan....😳

luvsss,

shama..

thanks Shama

Originally posted by: shiksha_03

hey noorya dat ws simply brilliant n especially d shanak part in the complete part 5 was gr8 pls continue soon & tanx for d pm pls send it d next tym also if possible

thank u soo much dear

Originally posted by: iluvmanar

wonderful yaar..just luvved it/....

Originally posted by: Deepali88

awesome update noorya🤗very nice all part of it and specialy
karan-khanak conv. regarding shilpa soo cute and karan-shilpa conv.
very sweet..i liked it❤️ waiting for next part.pl update soon😊

Originally posted by: AzaraA

awesome yar loved it completely ............it was something more than a ff i loveddddddddddddddd it soooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much 😉
i really like gaurav so i m happy that he is in ur ff............😊

gud going girl keep writing and keep smiling 😃

n thx for the pm



luv zara😊

thanks Zara🤗