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Posted: 15 years ago
Gr8 update! keep it up!!😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

great update Ka7eela...👏 It was really awesome... I loved how Abhiya share an easy relationship... well not easy exactly, but easy enough... at least they are together and his being a vampire does not affect her in any way, unlike that of the show... i wish Piya had accepted him just like in here..... Anyway, keep writing n keep updating... u r really awesome... n a genius.... n all this time, while reading this, I was jumping n hoppng in my seat....☺️ n seems like Abhay was pretty upset about Kabir...🤣 n congrats, your ff now consists of 100pages... love you n your writings... great job..... keep it up...👍🏼 my best wishes with you......

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Posted: 15 years ago
thank you all for your wonderful and heart warming replies and for your wishes too🤗

yepe the topic reached 100 pages 🥳
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28th- K.O ;)


Piya's throws a quick glance again at Abhay who was marching towards them, gazing Kabir angrily, and she pleads shaking her head very slowly, oh God Abhay please don't! Please don't create a scene! Her eyes filled with anguish, she knew if he shows any slight reaction, everyone will start to think that there is something between them and at this point he wasn't ready to admit their relationship nor she was at least not like this!


Misha notices and she looks at them both puzzled
Abhay senses her worries so he suddenly stops, squints his eyes and then turns around and marches to the other side in a huff!

Misha holds Kabir's arm "choro yaar! She said she was busy na!"
"Busy! What makes her so busy that she can't spare few minutes to call!" says Kabir in an irritated tune, leaving her arms and shaking his head

She sighs and smiles and holds his hand "I am really sorry Kabir I really was so busy that I forgot to call and forgot to charge my phone"
Kabir sighs "Piya we were in a living hell for the past 3 days, we couldn't even enjoy our time that much in Goa! Till we knew that you were fine!"
Her eyes get misty "I am really sorry I didn't think that you guys be so worried about me, I never had anyone to worry about me before! ever since my mom died so I am new to the concept" she smiles sadly as tear roll down her cheek, the only people who worry about me now are you guys and Abhay! She affectionately thought!

"Kabir! look what you have done, you made her cry" says Misha wrapping her arms around Piya

"You girls never seize to use your secret weapon; aka tears to win a battle over boys!" says Kabir shaking his head

"Kabir what are you? A soldier? What weapon and what war Duh?" says Misha giggling

Kabir looks at Piya's tearful eyes and says in a slightly angry voice and a very serious voice:"Ok Piya if you want us to forgive you and let you off the hook, there is something you have to do for us"

Both girls look at him puzzled "any thing Kabir just tell me what?" says Piya softly

"First you have to promise you will never do this again, and now smile! and then sing to us yeh dosti hum nahi chore gay tore gay dum magar tere saat na turay gay!"


He starts to sing the whole song in a funny way making filmy moves around Piya and Misha, jumping and grabbing their hands, both girls giggle and then start to sing the old song along with him and they all start end up laughing

"Kabir you are such a joker for a moment I thought you would ask for something very serious" says Misha
"Ouch! Joker and me! I am a stud babes! And you should know by now that serious and Kabir don't go along well!" he winks smiling flaunting his deep dimples and he was back to his own mischievous self

Piya sighs in relief watching her two friends
"Hey girls I will catch on with you later, I got to get my file from the locker!" he runs Misha and Piya look ate him smilingly
"You know Piya he was very supportive of me when I was worried about you although he was sick worried him self!"
"Misha Kabir is always supportive to you it's like you two are inseparable" Piya says smiling
"He sure is he is my bestest bud!"
"Hey! And what am I then?" says Piya protesting humoring her
"You are too! But he is my childhood friend you know there is nothing that we don't know about each other" Misha giggles and continues "I even know his first crush's name! She was our English teacher at 7th grade Miss kacker!"
"kacker! That sounds like cracker!" says Piya giggling

"Hey Misha! Piya! Guys! come quick!" shouts Ruhi running towards them
"What's the matter?" says Piya worried
"Abhay and Kabir are fighting with each other, near the boys locker room!" says Ruhi in a breathless voice
Oh God! Abhay what have you done! Thought Piya feeling that her heart sinking

Then she runs along with Ruhi and Misha who was hyped now "stupid loser boys" says she

As they reach them, both were using there fists and Abhay falls while Kabir sits on his chest punching his face blood was gushing from both of the boys mouths! Piya covers her mouth in shock! Then Abhay pushes him away and Kabir falls, both engage again standing now, few other boys were trying to break them up, but in vein "Kabir, Abhay stop it you two" shouts Misha loudly

"Break it up!" shouts the principal barging in through the crowd followed by the security guard, and then he yells at both of them "What's going on? This is a college and not a fight club! Stop it you two and now!" And they stop glaring each other with so much anger, Kabir moves towards Abhay again and pushes Abhay away "I will show you!" threatens Kabir

"Sure do that! I will be waiting!" says Abhay sarcastically then he looks at Piya's shocked face, and he smirks wiping the blood of his mouth! And then spits it

That ticks Kabir even more, he tries to go closer to him again to punch him, but Misha holds his arm "don't!"

"Enough! All students should get into their classes now, this is not a circus! and You two March to my office now!" says the irritated principle and both walk in front of the principle
Abhay throws a glance at Piya and she was very agitated now


"What was that all about?" Says Misha as they walk to the class
Oh God! I am sure he fought with him because of me! She thought feeling disturbed as they reach the class "Misha you go ahead I will be back I need to get something from the locker room" and She marches towards the principal office

Kabir opens the door and he marches angrily without noticing her!
She wanted to talk to him but he looked really pissed off as he walks towards the exist gate of the college and soon he was gone!

She shakes her head and soon Abhay was out too! she hears the principle telling him "You two go to the clinic, and put some medicines on those injuries, and I am warning you, if you ever start this again I will expel you two for a week!"

He looks at her "Piya! Why aren't you in your class? You naughty girl trying to bunk out" he says casually like he had done nothing wrong!

She looks at him feeling very irritated "Shut up Abhay!", and then a student walks by looking at them, she gets nervous, she needed to talk to him and know what had happened and what triggered the fight!

"Come you need to go to the clinic as the principle said!"
She holds his arm and drags him he looks at her affectionately as they walk

"Oho! What happened?" says the nurse looking at Abhay's face
"Stupid boys and their stupid fights!" says Piya agitated in a hyped voice

"Who he fought with and why didn't he come?" says the nurse looking at the door
"He is gone!" says she

He grins looking at her with playful eyes amused by her anger
"Stop grinning this is not funny!" she says irritated, the nurse brings some cotton and some antiseptics and bandages, then she gets a call she looks at Piya "hey dear can you manage? I have to go for a while, just clean the cut and apply antiseptic and then stick the bandage" She asks Piya

Piya was more glad to hear that as she needed to be alone with Abhay to know about the fight
As soon as the nurse gets out of the room she hits him on his chest hard "What were you thinking?! I am sure you have started it! How could you do that? Have you forgotten he is no match to you? you could have killed him you stupid jerk! Why did you fight?"
"Killed him! I barely touched him!" then he continues in a filmy way "you hurt me now cause you are not concerned about me, its Kabir you care for, how could you do that? I thought you were my girl" he says teasing her

"Shut up Abhay! He is no match for you! And my concern is for both of you! how do you think I would feel if my love ends up hurting my friend?" she says with tearful eyes avoiding looking at him then damps a cotton with antiseptic

He holds her arms still sitting on the bed "I couldn't help it! I didn't like how he manhandleed you and shouted at you! I had to let the steam out! So I pumped at him and started a fight! Beside I didn't use my power! I couldn't do that! All I had to do is think of you, and then I start to behave like a normal human! So the Abhay you saw fighting with Kabir and getting beaten was a normal boy with normal boy's strength, and it felt good to have that feeling again, to fight with a human again at the same level " he says in an emotional voice then continues "
"by the way Kabir is strong for a normal boy!"

She shakes her head "you are unbelievable! you are such a kid! That's why you were grinning! But Kabir didn't hurt me he is such sweet boy he was just worried about me!"

"I know! but I can't help it! Really, I try but I can't handle anyone touching you!" he says agitated

"Touching me! he was just holding my arms Abhay! Kabir is not a molester you know!" she shakes her head "Abhay it means allot to me if you two get along well"

"Piya how could you ask me that? You know that he has feelings for you, and he admitted them too!"
"How do you know?! Oh God you were spying on us that day when he told me!"
He grins "spying! I was just there to make sure you are ok!"

She hits his chest "urgh! I don't believe this! Anyhow yes he said that but that was like a month ago! And ever since he never mentioned it again"

"Piya it's so obvious that he hates me because he senses that there is something between us, you should have seen the way he beat me! It's like he just needed a chance!"

"Well you started it and you were doing the same! Abhay please I don't want you to hurt each other, at least for my sake try to be friendly and if you can't just stay away from each other for the time being and don't instigate him!"

"Ok but I won't promise! What if he instigates me!" he says

She sighs and then wipes the cut on his face with the cotton
"Hey that burns! What did you do that for? You know I don't need any medicine I will heal on my own" he shrieks
"Serves you right you big bully!" says she agitated

"Now you are just being mean! Your boyfriend is bruised and cut and instead of showering him with tender loving care you are taunting him" he says making a sad face

He was sitting on the bed and she was standing facing him she twitches her lips and narrows he eyes and says "Abhay you brought this on your self, so don't expect me to feel sympathy for you, when you start the fights"


He looks fondly at her worked up face and then he grabs her from her waist "I need a hug now! I am broken hearted" he says in a playful tune teasing her and then pulls her embracing her and resting his head on her chest.
She holds his head and tries to push him away her heart beat racing "Abhay what are you doing? The nurse might barge in any time!" she says with a quivering voice

He raises his head and gently moves her away then jumps out the bed and quickly locks the door, she looks at him feeling a tingling feeling in her guts, he slowly walks towards her smiling and flaunting his deep dimples.

She back off "Abhay we are inside the college, inside the clinic and the nurse might come back any time" she says backing off

"Don't worry I will open the door before she could even notice!" he says with a playful voice

She backs off till her back hits the wall and he was inches away from her trapping her as he stretches his arms around her, his hands resting on the walls

"I missed you last night, and today morning" he whispers very softly gazing her then he caresses her face very gently with back of his hand, and then traces it with his fingers

"I, the nurse you.. " she mumbles and swallows all her anger gone
"Tell me Piya did you miss me?" he says very softly, his fingers caressing her lips very tenderly like he was drawing them.


She closes her eyes, his closeness, scent and touch affecting her and making her breathless and she says in a broken voice "I did, I missed you"

His lips curl in satisfied smile and he says "you smell so good" and then he leans and kisses her on her forehead, then his mouth shifts to her closed eye lids kissing them very gently and she whispers his name

His gaze shifts to her parted lips and as he bends to kiss her, he senses foot steps coming towards them and he backs off unlocking the door quickly and then he sits on the bed trying to catch his breath, and she opens her eyes as soon as the nurse gets inside,

She bites her lips feeling disappointed and looks at him; he was behaving normally and was busy attaching a bandage on his arm

The nurse looks at them both "Are you done?"
He looks at her mischievously "Are we Piya?"
She looks shyly at him pushing away a strand of her hair behind her ear and then she walks out of the clinic. He follows her with a huge smile and soon both get into their own classes

In the lunch break, Piya was sitting with Misha, both enjoying their sandwiches, Abhay has messaged her, that he had to go somewhere and that he will be back after the lunch break, when suddenly she hears a familiar voice "Hi Simran! We meet again; indeed it's a small world!"

She turns around and gets stunned as she sees James de' Silva walking towards their table with a mischievous smile on his face! While everyone else including Misha were looking at the tall handsome guy wondering who he was!

Edited by ka7eela - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it dear keep it up
cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Jealousy abhay starting fight with kabir.that too humanly fight.tat was good.otherwise as pia said abhay is no match to kabir n v shud hav pitied for kabir.
who is this James?
very eager to know.
but pls dont take a very long time in updating.els ur thread will get spammed with update it soon msges.i think d other FF thread is facing such situation.its just reached 8th update n it is reaching 50 pages.so update soon.
Edited by RB81 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome update.........................but now AbhIya r in trouble.......................

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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome update sweets..but whose this james..and why din he call her simran..ouch...trouble for abhiya..sigh..am scared... Hehe kabir and abhay fight...i wish abhay would have beat him...no no..just kidding..and inside the clinic..pia says..i nurse you...lmao...lost of words..poor angel...i am scared for next part..i hope abhay senses this james as a problem.. Is he a werewolf..or is he the master of vampire clan...am so scared..i am so happy ...yay..you updated.. Arae kaheela..buddy..do one thing:) add all your ff readers to your buddy list and make a pm list of them..and then you can pm them all in one go...try this...it will reduce the time loss..... :) :) . ...eagerly waiting for your updating the next ff..till then tc..sayo nara...happy weekend.:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
brilliant update as always...👏 abhay was so sweet n playful in dis chp teasing pia constantly with his words n *ahem* actions 😉 thank God i thot abhay was gonna go totally bonkers n moody with jealousy😊 u write so well that im totally hooked to both ur ffs..👏 its such a relief to read abhay n pia's relationship here wich is consistent romantic n so passionate unlike d show where there's well no relationshp btwn them yet due to d constant twists... 😕 thank u so much for this...🤗 n pls continue d outstanding work dear👍🏼 ur so so....good at this!!😃 thanks fr d pm 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
loved it
do continue soon ya

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