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FIRST OF ALL A BIG AND HUGE THANKS TO ALL MY READERS WHO READ MY FIC "CHAHAT" AND REPLIES ON IT. πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€—

I WANT TO THANK ALL THOSE PEOPLE TOO WHO READ IT AND NEVER REPLIES (SILENT READERS TOO) πŸ€—πŸ€—πŸ€— I AM HAPPY THAT U GUYS SUPPORTED ME AND IN SPITE OF BEING BUSY U HELP ME TO MAKE MY FIC REALLY INTERESTING AND BECAUSE OF ALL OF YOUR LOVE N SUPPORT THIS FIC HAS REACHED UP TO 150 PAGES NOW AND THIS IS MY 3RD FIC WHO HAS ACHIEVED THAT MUCH FAME. πŸ₯³

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Originally posted by: varshita

Lovely precap yeah but ab update kab karegi yaar.
Mujhe Rajveer Vyom k role me jyada cute lagta hai ab.



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Originally posted by: hinal60

really nice precap

i was right all along voym is rajveer



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Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

nice precap.
loved it.
update soon.



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Originally posted by: oliveya

omgggg ! amazing ,,i really enjoy after read the whole story .......omg vertika..........u are one of the brilliant story writer.
i am waiting for ur rocking next update............



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Originally posted by: Sweet-Lioness

main nee karti...tere precap pe comment...ja...

mujhe toh ud chahiye...chahiye...aur chahiye...



ABE YAAR GUSSA KYOUN HOTI HAI MAI KARTI HOON NA UPDATE.

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Originally posted by: arpita25

sorry dear for replying late on precap, i hope u'll undst.
Lovely precap
aur haan mujhe thanks kehna mat bhoolna.
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"I love u too Naina." He said hugging her hard.

"I know."

"Pata hai kitna mushkil hota tha apne aap ko rokna jab tum mere saamne hi hoti thi."

"Haan aap to aise keh rahe hain na jaise mere liye bahut asaan tha." She made a face.

Raj has still hugged her, "Pata hai mujhe ki hum dono me se kisi k liye asaan nahi tha na Naina par hum jahan pe kaam karte hain vahan pe hum ko aise risk aksar uthane hote hain na."

"Haan pata hai, jab mujhe pata laga na ki aap zinda hain tab se le kar aaj tak mai aap se ek bhi din theek se baat nahi kar paayi hoon. Mujhe sab kuch jaana hai Raj ki kaise aap us accident se bache the aur kaise aap ne Army ko yakeen dilaya ki aap ko ek aur chance chahiye apne aap ko prove karne ka."

"Sab bataoonga Naina, abhi filhal tum thoda rest kar lo fir baatein karte hain theek hai." She nodded and he left her. "Jaao"

But this time Naina stopped and asked, "Ek baat poochoon?"

"haan poocho."

"Ab to aap mujhe chod k kahin nahi jaayenge na?"

Naina ka question sun kar Raj dhyaan se dekhta hai us ka face aur Naina k face k expressions bata dete hain Raj ko ki vo bhi dari hue hai abhi tak Raj k khone k dard se. Raj Naina k pass aata hai aur us ka haath apne haathon me le kar kehta hai, "Naina, bharosa hai mujh par tum ko?"

She nodded her head in affirmation. "To fir suno, apne jis Naina k liye mai maut se lad kar bhi vapas aa gaya us Naina ko mai kabhi bhi apne se juda nahi hone de sakta hoon." And he said all this holding her hands in his.

Tabhi Alekh ne knock kiya door ko, "Rajveer sir."

Raj left Naina's hands and opened the door. "Andar aao Alekh."

Naina gave both of them a confused look to which both of them realized and Raj gave his smile to Alekh and Alekh said, "Aise kya dekh raheli hai?"

"Matlab tujhe pata tha?" she asked.

"Haan apun ko pata tha."

"Par tujhe kis ne bataya?"

"Mujhe sir ne hi bataya tha."

"Kab?"

"yaad hai jab hum sab shaadi me Neelu k ghar pehle din gaye the tab."

Now Naina gave a not to be done type look to Rajveer and now he understood that he is dead, jab us ne pehle hi Alekh ko bata diya tha tab to Naina ko naraj hona hi hai aur jyada.

"Listen Naina meri baat suno na." he tried but Naina gusse me muh ghuma k chali gayi.

"Kya kiya ye Alekh?"

"Ab sir apun ko kya pata tha ki Naina naraj ho jaayegi is baat par? Apun to sach hi bol rahela tha na Naina se."

"Ab to meri band baji na, vaise bhi is ka gussa humesha is ki naak pe hota hai aur aaj to meri khair nahi hai." He gave a helpless look to Alekh."Tum ruko mai aata hoon." Raj andar gaya chup ke se. "naina''" he called her name softly.

But she didn't reply. "Naina". He called again and located her near window. "Kya hua aise yahan kyoun khadi ho?"

"Jaaiye yahan se mujhe koi baat nahi karni hai aap se." she said and didn't turn her face.

Raj smiled at her childish behavior, "Kyoun naraj ho accha ye to batao?"

She didn't speak again.

"Oh to meri cadet Naina 'ah ' singh naraj hai mujh se, ye bhi nahi sochti ki mai kitne dino baad mila hoon us se."

"To?"

"Oho Naina batao bhi kya hua?"

"Mujhe chod k sab ko bataya hoga na ki Vyom aur Rajveer ek hi hai." She fired.

Raj grinned, "Nops maine kisi ko nahi bataya sivaay Alekh k. Us ko bhi isliye bataya kyounki mujh se milne k pehle din k baad se se vo mere par najar rakhne laga tha."

Flashback;-

"Jaroor koi locha hai, ye Vyom ho hi nahi sakta aur agar apun ka dimaag keh raha hai ki ye Vyom nahi hai to is ka matlab nahi hai apun ko pata karna padega is ha itihaas ( history) acche se." and than Alekh dialed a number, "haan Lokhande, apun Captain Sharma bol raha hai. Apun ko kuch jaankari chahiye kisi k baare me. Tu apun ko kal sham ko Caf Coffee me mil." And he hung the phone. Us ko nahi pata tha ki vahin kahin chipa hua Vyom (now Rajveer) us ki baatein sun raha tha.

Next day:-

"Ye hai Major Vyom Rathode, apun ko is k baare me sab kuch pata karna hai aur haan acche se. Tu jaanta hai ki Army me bahut saari aise cheejin hain jin k baare me apun k doosre haath ho bhi khabar nahi hoti to dhyaan se." ye keh kar aur photo dekh kar Alekh vahan se chala gaya. Lokhande seedhe Raj k pass aaya.

"Sir ye photo di hai I mean aap ki photo di hai Captain Sharma ne pata lagane k liye."

"Theek hai tum jaao yahan se."

In Army HQ:-

"Mujhe lagta hai sir mujh ko ek baar baat kar leni chahiye Alekh se."

"Par sir kya ye theek hoga, abhi humara plan initial stages me hai aur abhi hum ko risk nahi le sakte hain." Brigedier Dutta asked.

"Aap sahi hain sir par aap ko to pata hai Alekh k baare me in fact mujhe kuch batane ki jaroorat bhi nahi hai aap ko. Aap ko yaad hoga 8 maheene pehle jab kuch dino k liye dushmano ne un ko pakad liya tha tab itna torcher sehne k baad bhi unhone apni jabaan nahi kholi to yahan to aisa nahi hai aur aap behtar tareeke se jaante bhi hain un ko. Aur fir mujhe apni training aur apne cadets pe khud se bhi jyada bharosa hai."

"Major shayad aap sahi keh rahe hain."

"Yes sir"

"But Major, ek baat ka khaas kar k khayal rakhiyega ki kisi bhi halat me kisi aur ko pata nahi chahiye hum theeno k alawa, kab kahan kis ko kya batana hai ye hum par depend karta hai. Ye mission kisi bhi halat me fail nahi hona hai."

"Koi sawal nahi utha hai sir, hum apni jaan de sakte hain aur le bhi sakte hain is k liye."

"Mujhe aap se yahi umeed thi major."

A few hours later:-

"Alekh ye photo tum ne Lokhande ko de thi?"

Alekh was surprised but vo nahi chahta tha ki ye feeling us k face par dikh jaaye, "Haan to?"

"Ye pata karne k liye ki mai kaun hoon, aur mere bare me sab kuch." He turned to Alekh, "Tum ko kya lagta hai mai kaun hoon?"

"Kyoun apun ki soch se kya fark padta hai aap ko?"

"Fark soch se nahi, sach se padta hai Alekh. Main jaana chahta hoon ki mere bare me tum ko kya lagta hai ki mai kaun hoon?"

Alekh ne seedhe kaha,"Agar apun se pooch rahe hain to suniye, apun ko lagta hai ki aap'' apun ka matlab aap koi Vyom Rathode nahi hain. Balki aap humare Captain Rajveer hain. Jab se apun aap se mila hai tab se apun ko aisa lag raha hai, apun ka dil keh raha hai ye. Aur apun jaanta hai apun ka dil aur dimaag kabhi galat nahi hota hai."

"Par agar mai vo nahi hua jo tum mujhe samajh rahe ho to?"

"To bhi kya fark padta hai sir, kaam to hum aap k saath vaise hi karenge jaise kar rahe hain."

Raj gave a big smile, "I am proud of u Cadet Alekh Sharma, mujhe shuruvaat se yakeen tha jab mai aap se pehli baar mila tha tab se le kar aaj tak aapne khud ko humesha sabit kiya. Chahe tab jab aap ko maine orderly banaya aur chahe tab jab Captain Abhimanyu Rai Chauhan ne aap ko shahi sena me liya tha. Aap ek bahut acche insaan hi nahi ek bahut acche sipahi bhi bane hain aur aaj mujhe apni di hue training pe garv ho raha hai."

Kuch der k liye Alekh jaisa khada tha vaisa hi khada raha, shayad sochne aur samajhne ki poori koshish kar raha tha vo. Raj jaanta tha itna asaan nahi hai us k liye sach ko accept kar lena., "Mere liye aap humesha mere cadet hi rahenge Captain Alekh Sharma. Mujhe pata hai ye sach jaane k baad aap shayad bahut jyada naraj honge mujh se ki maine itne saari sacchaiyan aap sab se kyoun chupaayi par yakeen maano Alekh mere liye aur tum sab k liye ye bahut jaroori tha." Itna keh kar Raj intezaar karne laga Alekh k answer ka.

Raj samajh nahi paa raha tha ki ab aage kya kahe kyounki un logon ko jab pata chalega ki Raj itne dino se un k beech reh raha tha fir bhi us ne sach nahi bataya to kaise react karenge sab. Alekh ka bhi us se naraj hona galat nahi tha.

Finally after ten minutes pause Alekh asked, "Bus ek baat poochna chahta hoon aap se sir. Aap ne apna naam kyoun badla?"

Raj smiled he knew only Alekh can do this, bus vo hi ek aisa hai jo Raj ki baaki ki majbooriyan samajhta hai par jo baat us ko sab se jyada pareshaan kar rahi thi us k baare me hi vo baat karna chahta tha. "Kyounki mai Naina se Rajveer k naam se nahi milna chahta tha. Tum ko shayad jaan k hairt hogi is baat ki, ki is mission ka plan jab bana tha tab maine hi tum sab ko select kiya tha; par us samay ek majboori thi mere saamne agar Naina ko ye pata chal jaata to apne jajbaaton pe vo kaboo nahi rakh paati aur kaafi kuch aisa kar ya bol jaati jo shayad sahi nahi rehta aur is k alawa ek sab se jaroori cheej thi Naina k dost Karan se dosti. Agar mai Rajveer k naam se Karan se dosti karta to kabhi na kabhi jikr hota Naina k saamne is naam ka aur vo jhat se pakad leti." Kehte kehte Raj ruk gaya aur sochne laga, 'pakad to us k dil ne pehle se hi liya hai mujhe na.'

"Kya kaha sir aap ne?"

"kuch nahi Alekh,filhal bus yahi kehna chahta hoon ki shayad ek tum hi ho jis ko abhi mai apna raj bata sakta hoon aur jis par mujhe poora yakeen hai ki gusse me impulsive ho k bhi vo kuch nahi kahega." Alekh saw the same trust in those eyes to whom he has already experienced so times ago.

"Kai ko itna bharosa karte hain aap sir apun pe?"

Raj smiled,"kyounki apun jaanta hai cadet ki tu jaisa dikhta hai na vaisa bilkul bhi nahi hai."

His statement gave a smile on Alekh lips, "to ab aap apun ko bolne jaa rahe hain na ki apun Naina ko kuch bhi nahi baatye is baare me?"

"Tabhi to sab kehte hain na cadet ki Alekh baba ki jay ho." And both shared a laugh.

Haste haste aakhein bhar aayi Alekh ki bhi aur Raj ki bhi, finally Alekh ne kaha, "apun ne bahut miss kiya aap ko sir."

"Maine bhi tum sab ko bahut miss kiya Alekh." Ye keh kar Raj ne gale laga liya apne cadet ko aur aaj Alekh ko ye ehsaas ho chuka tha ki kuch khoya hua vapas mil chuka hai.

"Par sir aap jaante ho na ki apun Naina se kuch chupa nahi sakta, vo fauran jaan leti hai na sab kuch."

"Mai jaanta hoon cadet ki asaan nahi hone waala hai ye sab, is k liye aap ko bus ek kaam karna hoga ki Naina ko har pal ye ehsaas dilao ki mai Vyom nahi kuch aur hoon........mai koi aisa hoon jis ko Naina acche se jaante hai aur mai sach chipa raha hoon Naina se."

"par aisa karne se shak nahi badhega us ka aap par?"

Raj gave a smile, "Haan badhega par tum par to nahi karegi na shak vo fir."

Flashback over

"Vaah sir, sab kuch bataya aap ne Alekh ko bus mujhe hi nahi bata paa rahe the na." She accused.

"Naina..............mujhe pata tha na ki jab tum ko sach pata chalega to tum mujhe maar hi daalogi. Sach kahoon to tumhare gusse se dar lagta tha mujhe. Aur mere misin k liye mera zinda rehna bahut jaroori hai na Naina." Raj said smiling.

"Haan itna dar lagta tha tab abhi aap smile kar rahe hain na yahan khade ho k." she said, "Agar Brigadier sir mujhe nahi batate to aap to vaise bhi kabhi nahi batane waale the na kuch."

Raj ko tab kuch yaad aaya, "Are haan ye to mai tum se poochna hi bhool gaya ki Dutta sir ne bataya kya tumhe?"

"Kyoun bataoon mai aap ko, aap mujhe kuch batate hain kya? Jab nahi batate hain to mai bhi nahi bataoongi." She said n tried to leave the room but Raj held her hand tightly and she tried her best to escape but he didn't allow her.

"Itna asaan hai kya meri pakad se bach k nikalna?"

"Chodiye, hatiye mujhe jaane dijiye."

"Aise nahi Naina..", and he pulled her near him and trapped her between him n wall, "to kuch meetha chahiye hoga na mujhe." And he rolled his tongue in his mouth.

"Fir se aap par Vyom ka bhoot chad gaya?" she asked.

Raj smiled wide and said, "Agar nahi bataogi to mai kiss kar loonga." He warned her.

"Acchi dhamki hai par Major mai aap ki dhamkiyon se darti nahi hoon hatiye yahan se." And she pushed her but Raj se bachna itna asan hai kya? He held her closer this time.

"Naina dekho mujhe provogue mat karo, dekho tum acche se jaanti ho ki mai kuch bhi kar sakta hoon."

"Aap kuch nahi kar sakte Major."

"Ye baat hai, to ab jo hoga aage us k liye tum hi ho responsable." And he placed his lips on hers and this time it was not a sweet n gentle kiss, it was a wild n agressive kiss. Naina was realizing the pressure on her lips and she was unable to stop Raj as he was increasing the pressure with each of passing seconds, it seems as if he will tear her lips apart. But soon when Naina joined his wildness over her calmness the kiss bcame gentle and passionate and now Naina was unable to hold the desire in her to kiss him back. They were enjoying their passion and now Raj's hands started moving on her body. His hands were tracing her feminine creatures with his hands and this was new for Naina. When Raj touched her in this way the heat in her risen and the kiss bcame more passioante. His hands captured the most beautiful mounds, touching them and pressing them with his hands with made Naina shiver with ectasay.

Back to Pune ACADEMY:-

"Mujhe pata hai sir, vo log kal shaam tak yahan pahuch jaayenge."

"Tum jaante ho vo Captain Naina yahan aa rahe hain, to un ko kaisa room doge tum samjhe?"

"Jee sir samajh gaya."

"Aur haan Major is baat ka khayal rakhna ki mujhe un k room me CCTV cameras chahiye, mujhe dekhna hai ki sach me vo hain ya yahan bus apne duty karne k liye aa rahi hai ya dikhane k liye. Har pal 24*7 tumhari najar rehni chahiye un par. Mujhe abhi bhi shak hai us k intentions pe."

"Aap fikr na kariye sir vaisa hi hoga jaisa aap chahte hain aur mai aap ko shikayat ka ek bhi mauka nahi doonga."

"Yahi chahte hain hum major aap se varna aap to jaante hain na ki hume nakron ki fauj bana k rakhne ka jara bhi shauk nahi hai."

"Last time jo galti hue thi mere se vo mai nahi repeat karoonga sir kisi bhi halat me."

"yahi umeed hai tum se major."

After hunging the pone he called one of his orderly, "Suno room no 210 facility quarters ka clean kar diya hai?"

"Yes sir vo to kal hi ho gaya tha."

"Theek hai mujhe keys do, mujhe jara check karna hai room aakhir humare subordinates k liye accha arrangement hona chahiye na." And the orderly gave her the keys.

"Pichli baar jo galti hue thi ab vo nahi hogi aur is baar apne welcome k liye ready ho jaao Cadet Naina ah Singh."

Back to Raj n Naina:-

They were very much engrossed in their kiss when Alekh knocked at the door. They parted and Naina was blushing, she was unable to look in Raj's eyes now and Raj was smiling look at her pink cheeks. He opened the door.

"Sir vo sab kuch ready hai, hume jaldi hi madir pahuchna hai. Aur us k baad court. "

"Ok Alekh tum chalo mai aata hoon." Ye keh kar Raj ne door close kar liya aur Alekh chala gaya vahan se.

"Sir ek baat aur karni thi apun ko aap se."

"Kya cadet?"

"Sir vo..............ek minute aap vahar aaiye na?" he requested.

Raj ne Naina ko dekha aur kaha, "ek minute Naina me aaya." And he came out of the room.

"Sir apun kehna chahta tha ki.............kya Naina ko vahan le jaana theek hoga?" he asked with confusin.

"mai samjha nahi Captain?"

"Sir Pune Academy me Major Abhyuday Verma hai jo''''" aage Alekh kuch bol nahi paaya par Raj samajh raha tha ki vo kya kehna chahta tha.

"Mai samajh raha hoon Alekh ki Naina k liye is pal kya mehsoos kar rahe ho tum, Naina ka paste k baar fi rus k saamne hoga aur tab Naina kaise react karegi yahi soch rahe ho na?" to which Alekh gave a nod, "par mujhe yakeen hai Alekh ki Naina apne aap ko samahaal legi aur kuch mushkil hua to hum hain na vahan us k saath. Bus hume kahin bhi Naina ko kamjor nahi padne dena hai vaise to mujhe apne Cadet aur training pe bahut bharosa hai but Naina emotinal bhi bahut hai aur impulisve bhi hai to dhaayn to rakhna hi padega na us ka. "

"Aap fikr mat kariye sir, apun is baat ka khayal rakhega aur ab aap Naina k paas jaaiye aur us ko sab bata dijiye."

A while later Raj was entering in her room, "Naina............", he called her when he found her busy in taking clothes out from her suitcase.

"Yes sir," she replied slowly, now Raj got she was still blushing and that's y she is avoiding to look into Raj's eyes.

"Now stop calling me sir haan." He said.

"Nahi, mai to sir hi kahoongi. Vaise bhi mujhe sir kehna jyada accha lagta hai." She said to tease him.

"Mujhe kya kaho, ye mai kaise bataoon;par koi apne sir ko kiss nahi karta hai na." Raj said it all intentionally to irrtate her.

Naina blushed again rememebring about the moment a few minutes back when she was kissing him, "to kya kahoon?" she asked softly.

"Mera bahut accha sa naam hai u know Rajveer but i think u should call me Vyom otherwise humare upar shak ho sakta hai kisi ko bhi." Raj said that thoughtfully.

"Ok, jaisa aap kahein Raj.............i mean Vyom." She said smiling.

Now Raj has to come up on topic, "Ek baat poochna chahta hoon tum se. Do u trust me?"


Edited by Mahak Sinha - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggg for next asap.
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awesome part dear
plz continue soon
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hi 😊
the up is really good😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
so the confusion is cleared😊😊😊😊😊😊😊 naina finally came to know that vyom is rajveer and we tooπŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰
anyways rajveer told his truth to alekhπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒπŸ˜ƒ but not naina and for this naina got angry😑😑😑😑😑😑😑😑 hona bhi chaheye aakhir woh itna pyaar jo karte haai raj se raj should have told her
i liked the flashback 😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
but sab se pasand aya raj ka romance😳😳😳😳😳😳 wow he kissed naina and naina too responsed πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³πŸ˜³
ab dekhta haai aage kya hota haai
plz cont soon and pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Vertika

Nice part..πŸ‘πŸ‘so the mystery has finally solved now...πŸ˜ƒ
Naina and Raj's confession was simple yet very special..Naina is too scared to loose Raj now..
She was so angry when she comes to know that Raj has shared his secret with Alekh..she was really hurt but when Raj explained her the situation she cud see his point of view..Alekh was among the most balanced cadets of Raj..he reacts according to the situations and he is not at all impulsive unlike Naina who is brave but very stubborn..Raj was worried over this fact and thats why he trusted Alekh..Their confrontation was emotional..
Loved the romance thats brewing between Raj and Naina..πŸ˜‰πŸ˜³ they both were really lost in each other..πŸ˜ƒ
But what is the mystery behind Major Abhyuday Verma? and why is he after Naina?? I hope Raj and Naina doesn't get into trouble this time..
Wat is Raj trying to say to Naina in the last part..??
Pls continue soon
Bye
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Shamli had always envisioned her Prince Charming possessing certain qualities, yet she never found a man who embodied them all. Then, she...

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Posted by: Aleyamma47 Β· 6 years ago

Intro: In the vibrant heart of Chennai, two sisters and two brothers are bound by fate. Mahima and Rajeev's secret love faces societal power and...

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Posted by: Aleyamma47 Β· 8 months ago

Chapter 1 (In Every Birth, Find Me) The night air in Mathura was thick with monsoon rains. In her small room lit only by a flickering diya,...

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Posted by: Koeli Β· 6 years ago

Hey guys, This is the place where you can request for comment migration. Please know that FFEs are going to migrate your comments. Rules - You...

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Posted by: Priyogita Β· 1 years ago

Rishtey the Bond of marriage (new chapter)

Chapter : Melodious Encounter https://www.indiaforums.com/fanfiction/chapter/52348

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