Simply Magic - Spell # 1. - Page 76

Fantastic Mehak.............. Loved it.........😛

Can i get them on KWK in real now.......... 😊........

Mehak!!!!! that was simply outstanding, i read it in one go so i enjoyed it very much. brilliant work! keep it up. no wonder you got BEST FAN FIC writer award.

superb update

WOW>....

First of all, I must say using KWK for ur OS was an awesome idea!!! U've portrayed KJo so well…the dialogues are so much like his.

Part 1

-Everything from the intro of Rati to the comments and descriptions and to the intro of Arjun…I felt like I was really watching KWK epi.

-how u explained her little actions when he mentioned Arjun…dreaming abt ArTi. 😍

Part 2

-the little hug at the beginning, holding her hand, was so 😍

-Everything was so in line with their characteristics like Arjun's playful nature and Rati's reserved sweet nature.

"A..ku rati?..we are seeing na?..

Rati closed her eyes …." Lol and aww..

"A..and u are beautiful, that is what i can say.." - how sweet


Part 3

"KJo..we are just friends..
…A..stop questioning..we dont' want to reveal.." – so true…

"A..my mother really likes her.." – indirect hint…huh?

"rati placed her hand over his hand and he held it and then left it after a second.." – true love…will be with us thru thick and thin…

"KJo..awww..that was sweet..i hope she is listening..

A..she is.." – I can just imagine that.

"R..arjun, mayank misunderstood a lot of times." – awww...Ofcourse Rati would choose Arjun…if it was Nupur, it would be Mayank.

"A..next u will time u will sign..Rati Bijlani.." – Undoubtedly, my FAV line in the whole OS!!!

Thanks for the PM and please do write more...

omg omg i was blushing badly while reading this man☺️
in the end rati bijlani yaar sounds best to my ears😳
what a perfect ending gosh😛
and rati n nupur are same jun we know well don't we😉
all i can say great work sweety🤗

wait.. m speechless after reading the last line!!!!!!!!!! 😆
haye kinzuuuuu!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
soooo cuuuttteeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!
every dialogue,,,,,,, arjun is soooooooo cuteeeeeeeeeeeeeee yar!!!!!!!! *sighs*😍😍😍

i was smiling throughout and rati is sooo sweet!!!!
the rapid fire was the best part !!!!!!!!
simply loved it yar!!!!!!!!!
just one word for this:

beautiful!!!!!!!!!!!!!

😍

mehak i just finshed reaing all the three parts ......aww it was beautiful..........felt like it was happening for real........☺️......loved it lots..........

Wow mehak

wht an os

too gud

rati bijlani sounds amazing

hi aarti....i read ur os it was too gud......
i really enjoyd it..............😃
well m new to forum and want to read ur more ff so do add me in ur pm list..😊

dr maha