Mr. Shravan Jay (updtd-23&24 pg 32-33) - Page 20

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Posted: 14 years ago

Sunaina u t truly the queen of romance...

i got goose bumps when reading this... marvellous, superb, amazingly described by you... i really admire you for the way you write..
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Posted: 14 years ago
Amazing su. What a beautiful description of a wonderful feeling. Wow! Loved it! Specially loved ur intro. Do cont soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow !! i loved everythin of this update!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sunaina02

Precap

Next morning - Dadi comes to Shravans bungalow



Sunaina..When will Daadi Comes? and Only Precap Never says the Full Story Dear😉...Plz Update Soon...Now A Days FFs only more entertaining than original....😆 So Plz Update 😊
Edited by Sandhya.21 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Just now read your update.Really Fantastic!!!😊
You are the best when it comes to romantic writings😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sunaina!!!!!!!!! I just read all the parts at once and OMG what did I miss all this time! You rock! I kept reading and reading, you truly are master in writing! Please continue the story 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago

Precap

Next morning - Dadi comes to Shravans bungalow

Sunaina

After this no news from you😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sunaina.....
could you pretty please continue???????????!!!!!!!!!!
I am missing it!!!!!😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

Continued 20

It was early morning, ladies of Jaiswal manion were already busy with breakfast preparation in the kitchen. Dadi was pacing up and down the living room.
"Koi to mujhe Bittu ke pas le chalo" , muttering to herself.
"Main kaise aap ko le jaun? Mere pas to address bhi nahin hai ." Nidhi said as she was busy feeding her baby .
"Neetu to jaanti hai na " Dadi retorted .
Neetu came out of the kitchen with a plate full of hot parathas.
"Neetu payari- please mujhe le chal Bittu ke pas", dadi almost snatched the paratha plate from Neetus hand .
"Accha dadi breakfast ke baad main aapko le jaungi."
"Breakfast ke baad kyun ? bittu kitne din ho gayes ghar ke parathe nahin khaya"
"Achch baba, thik hai main aap ko abhi le jati hoon: , Neetu gave up.
" Nidhi tu Bittu ke liye tiffin box mein parathe aur sabzi pack kar de," dadi ordred .
So after 15 minutes Neetu and dadi were on their way to Shravan jay's cottage.
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The morning sun entered the room through the window and fell on Shravans face . The warmth of that light woke Shravan up . First he was puzzled and wondered where was he. Thenhe looked to his right and found Sachi sleeping on his arms and herface was hidden in the depth of his armpit.
Sachis white skin glowed in the sunlight ,and he hair was spread all over . There was a half smile on her face sugeesting she had had lovely dreams.
Shravan removed few strands of hair from her forehead and kissed her first on the forhead and then on the lips . Touch of Shravans warm lips on hers woke up Sachi completely . She opened her eyes and snuggled closer to Shravan
"Good morning Sachi :
"Good morning Shravanji" .
Shravan held her tight and rubbed his stubbled cheeks against her face .
The touch and feel of raw skin aroused their desire. Shravan rolled over on top of Sachi and was about to indulge in another love-session when his eyes fell on the alarm clock on the table .
Five minutes passed 8!!
"O teri ki !!!" Shravan blurted out
He quickly jumped up from the bed and began to dress quickly . Shirt tucked out , trousers half- zipped, socks in hand he just shot out of the cottage but not withour planting another kiss on sachis forehead and murmuring in her ears "I will take you to my cottage this evening "
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Neetu braked the car to a screechy stop before shravans cottage .
"Dadi hum aa gaye "
"Yahan shravan rehte hai !!"
They got out of the car and walked to the main entrance door. Neetu pressed the bell .
Shravans man-friday opened the door expecting Shravan had come but his was taken aback by the presence of these two elegant ladies. His eyesand mouth all remeained wide open!
Dadi shoved him aside and went straight inside " Bittu , dadi aa gayi , "
"Bittu kaun? Aap kahan ja rahe hai?
"Aap kaun hai ?
At last man-Friday put up some questions
"Chup kar , mainkaun hoon se , - tera kya lena dena? Chal mujhe Shravan ka kamra dikha"
Edited by sunaina02 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wow Su back with ur FF....thats gr8.......kya love scenes hai..taking me to known places😳😉.....Dadi aa gayi....yeeyyyy....y Shravan is running from there?? Does he know somehitng about Dadi's arrival or is he going to get a jolt of a surprise?? Thanx....

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