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Posted: 15 years ago
chapter 34

dutta is shown stood outside his house he luks around in thought as he walks near his car his driver opens da car door 4 him but dutta stops him da driver moves bk wid his head dwn as dutta says aaj mein khud garey chaloon ga mujhe koi zaroori kaam hain da driver nods ji bhau just den baaji is shown striding upto dutta and speaks bhau kahan jaa rahey hoon bhool gaye aaj humarey zaroori meeting hain dutta luks at him calmly and says baaji meeting cancel kardo baaji luks taken aback lekhin bhau yeh meeting toh important hain aur mainey tumhey is key baarey mein ek haafta phele bataya ta dutta luks at baaji and baaji says teek hain bhau dutta leaves in his car leaving baaji luking shocked he speaks out loud dat 4 da first time has bhau ever cancelled a meeting wat cud be mre important he shakes his head and leaves frm der

scene shifts 2 gauri and ram

ram has pooped out of his house leaving gauri alone she sits dwn on da chair and holds her head these past few days have left her mind in turmoil she sighs and rubs her temple's wen suddenly she hears a loud knock on da door which makes her jump wid a start she luks bk at da door wid a frightned luk thinkin da dreaded place she had escaped had finally found her ,she stands up rooted 2 da spot nt being able 2 move wen da knocking gets louder she fidgets wid her clothes untill she gets da courouge 2 walk she slowly opens da door and peeks she seems suprised wen she is confronted wid an old man she opens da door wide open 2 be faced wid da basti waley her heart races fast knwing why they were here she thinks in her mind she shudnt have stayed her ram had bin kind enough 2 save her da oder night brought her bk she shud have refused his offer 2 stay here but luking bk he wudnt have let her refused

gauri cums bk out of her sense wen da old man speaks in a harsh way ram kahan hain ladki gauri dsnt knw wat 2 say instead says woh woh da old man says yeh woh woh kya lagey rakha hain ram kahan hain gauri shakes her head saying maloom nahin da old man luks bk at da basti people as harsh words are thrown at gauri yeh kaisey jaan saktey hain a women speaks another says in jaisey ladkion ko ko kaisey pata ho sakta hain key jis key saath rehtey hain un ka naam aur kaam kya hota hain da words sting gauri which suprises her at da khota where she stayed 4 many years she had gttn used 2 abuse but it never bothered her since she new her place but these people abusing her and thinking such things of ram it hurt her deep inside they cud say all they wanted about her but ram he was and is innocent she thinks she gets out of her thoughts as an other says in jaisey ladkion ki wajey sey hamarey bachoon par kaisey asar par sakta hain chiii
gauri tries speaking suniyah aap galat soch rahey hain aisa kuch nahin hain all da basti walen get angry and scream ab chuut bol rahey hoon hum jaantey hain tum kaisey kisam ki ladki hoon chi sharam nahin aati gauris eyes fill wid tears but still da basti waley dnt leave her aab yeh jhootey ansoon de ka kar kya faida ab humey sach batoon tum yaha ram key ghar mein kya kar rahey hoon

gauri dsnt knw wat 2 say and keeps silent as another basti wala dis time a man says humey ram sey yeh umeed nahin ti yaha par kuch mahiney phele aaya ta shraab peeta hain lekhin khabhi koi ladki ko yaha nahin lekhar aaya another women hurls abuse at her as she grabs gauri's arm and puklls her into da mob gauri tries freeing her arm but cant as all eyes r on her gauri cant stop da tears dat flow out of her eyes da women spits venom out and says hamarey basti sey bahar nikhal jaa chori warna gauri tries speaking dekh yeh aap merey barey mein jo sochna chahtey hain sochlejiyeh mujhe koi farq nahin parta lekhin ram key barey mein gauri cant finish her sentence off as da women flings her gauri is about 2 fall wen suddenly sumone catches her everyone luks in gauris direction shocked as gauri luks up 2 be faced wid ram her tears proof of her ordeal ram luks at gauri den bk at da basti waley wid a furious luk as he makes her stand next 2 him wid his arm infrnt of her 2 protect her

scene shifts 2 dutta

dutta has bin asking around about ram as he has no picture in his hand he drives near nakusha's old basti nt wanting 2 draw attention 2 himself he ask's about ram sum people near da basti dnt knw who he is sum people in anger say yaha ab nahin rehta dutta is about 2 give up wen suddenly he see's an old man he thinks 2 ask him wen dutta ask's him about ram who used 2 live here wid his siter da old man sighs in sadness haan beta he speaks 2 dutta coughing yaha par ram paas waley basti mein rehta ta apni behen key saath lekhin dutta luks dwn as da man stops as dutta says lekhin kaka aap ko pata hain ab woh kahan rehta hain kahan hain da old man luks at dutta kyun beta tum kyun pooch rahey hoon us key barey mein dutta luks mein woh mein us ko dhoond na chahta hoon koi kaam hain da old man luks at him curiously as well as suspiciously b4 dutta says nahin kaka mein usey koi nuksaan nahin doon ga sirf usey milna chahta hoon woh uskey behen da old man luks up in suprise nakusha dutta nods haan nakusha woh apney bhai ko dhoond rahey hain aur mein uski madat kar raha hoon da old man smiles shukar hain woh bachi teek hain lekhin beta tum kaun hoon dutta is lost 4 words as he says woh kaka woh yahey samjhe lo key mein un ka ham dard hoon da old man nods and says merey nazar dhooka nahin kaaha saktey hain beta aaj kal apney rishtey kaam nahin detey aur aajnaabi itna kuch kar detey hain

dutta luks away nt knwing wat 2 say 2 him he wasnt used 2 speaking so much anymre unless it was about buisness kaka dutta spoke apney ram ko dey ka hain kahan hain woh da old man shakes his head us ka koi teekana hain pata nahin lekin yeh jaanta hoon jis raat woh yaha sey chala gaye lagta hain woh mumbai ki kisi jaga par chala gaya hoga apney behen ko dhoond ney dutta nods and thinks mumbai itni barey jaaga hain kaha dhoondo usey dutta thnks da old man and is about 2 leave wen da old man says khuda tumhey hamesha kush rakey beta dutta turns bk in suprise as da old man says meri nazar dhooka nahin kaa saktey mein jaanta hoonn shahid tum nakusha ki madat is liyeh kar rahey hoon key tum ek achey insaan hoon lekhin jab tak tum khud key jazbaat ko samjhe nahin paaogey tumhey sach nahin pata chaleyga dutta luks at him confused and says mein kuch samjha nahin hoon kaka as da old man says tumharey aankhein sab bata rahey hain jo tum nahin samjhe pa rahey hoon dutta shakes his head and leaves in his car thinking over wat da old man was saying wat did he mean by dat dutta thought wat an strange man so nw da only clue 2 finding ram was in mumbai as if dat was easy

ok guys i am finished wasnt going 2 update as gt things going on but do hope u like it as usual wen i type afta ages i kinda lose da knack how 2 rite and thnk u 4 all da previous comments i gt 2 much appriciated😛i knw i have 2 update phys ff 2 will do dat 2 dis week at sum point



Edited by sana786a - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow.....finally gt dis FF's update😛 aww i missed last update😳......Both part wer awesome....Loved it😛😛😛
Thnks 4 wonderful update n PM🤗
Edited by --SONEE-- - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

sana.... nice update

i enjoyed it although it was short ..... our gadha couldn't understand what the old man said .... please update other one also
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Posted: 15 years ago
GR8 update. next part plz update as soon as possible cause u do know how much i loved yore both ff. plz 2nd one also update fast...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yippie, you updated...
Hailaaa, Dutta cancelled a meeting for Nakku, just to look for her brother, ahh he's sooo sweet. Sigh😍
ARGH, those basti wale are so annoying, how dare they pull her out and insult her like that.. Thank god Ram came and protected her.
Ok i have a feeling basti wale will force them to get married lol.. Well that's what my khopri is thinking, mayb i shud stop predicting lol.. 😆
So Dutta back to Nakku's basti and hailaaa even i didnt understand what the old man ment exactly lol.. im as confused as dutta hehe... n he said Ram is in mumbai.. arre yaar, where will Dutta find him now? Gona be hard and on top of that, they don't have a picture of Ram..
TaSha bhi dikhao humein... and y is this baaji on silent mode, he doesnt even speak, thats not like him lol.. 😆
Great update Sana.. Yay i will wait for phys =)
Continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG!!!!!!! u updted...........short but sweet........the bastiwallas are against gauri staying at Rams place ..........Ram will save Gauri frm their wrath..........Dutta cant understand anything what the old man said..............but the old man read evrything in Duttaseyes................No wonder he ( dutta) is called mahagadhaaaa............... continue soooooooon...........
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey hun u k...lovey update...awhh D on a mission!! Bles hm..rli likd convo b/n hm n old man..D needs 2 undrstnd soon so we D+N cn finali b tasha ;-)

omg w*f yeh basti wale kisnt kam**ne hai!! ..mind my language bt cudn help it..dey wer soo rude...so glad ram cme jus in tym!!

Thnx 4 pm hun..upd8 jaldi karna nxt tym plzz.x

Edited by mIsHeZ.x - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Sana thanx alot for the wonderful update and PM🤗Thanx finally u updated 👍🏼....
Wow dutta cancelled his meeting for naku😍 he is helping her look for her bro...😉...
Gosh can"t this basatiwalla"s get a life and mind there own business😡.....leave gauri and ram alone....Iam also confused what that old man meant😆...i hope dutta finds ram soon .....i wanna see more of naku and dutta...pls show some romance😉
waiting for the nxt part eagerly ...pls jaldi update karna ....👍🏼👏🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update dear...........
poor gauri all r scolding her n ram na.............
n the old man something nice to dutta................
looking fwd,..............

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Posted: 15 years ago
yay sana dear i am so happy u updated awesome update as usual even after so long u manageed to deliver awesome update tank u dear love it, aww poor gauri this basti ppl they drove naku & now guari i hope her ordeal finishes soon so good of ram at least he is on her side & D he is doing e/thing to find ram atleast he got a clue now. pls continue when u can dear i understand though if u can't!😊

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