^^Love Knows No Boundaries^^ MoNaya FF (completed) - Page 27

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PART- 11

Sanaya was waiting for mohit in night club. Every second she was looking at the entrance door just to see whether mohit came or not.

S- nisha, mohit abhi tak nahi aaya.

N- chill yaar! Kabhi kabhi to use aane mein der hoti hai na?

S- haan par?.itna late kabhi nahi hua! I mean main pichhle ek ghante se uska wait kar rahi hoon.

N- (thinks) kahin aaj ka khana kha kar usne sanaya se break-up karne ko to nahi soch liya?

S- tum kya soch rahi ho?

N- a?b?shayad?.use koi?zaruri kaam yaad aa gaya ho.

Sanaya called on mohit's cell nearly 4-5 times. But no one received the call. Finally, when she called another time, kamini received the call. But before she could say anything, sanaya spoke quickly.

S- mohit tum kahan ho? kabse tumhara wait kar rahi hun lekin tum abhi tak aaye hi nahi! Tum theek to ho na? tum kisi zaruri kaam mein busy ho?

K- beta?wo?main

S- (bitting her tongue) oops! Sorry...i mean?.namaste aunty?.

K- are beta ghabrao mat. Wo actually mohit so raha hai.

S- so raha hai??

K- haan. Abhi aadhe ghante pehle hi office se aaya hai.

S- uski tabiyat to theek hai na?

K- mujhe bhi yehi doubt hai. kyunki use 3-4 baar vomiting bhi hui hai!

S- vomiting??? Aunty main abhi usse milne aati hun.

K- are nahi beta, itni raat ko tum kaise?.

S- agar aapko mere aane se koi problem ho to?.

K- mujhe kyun problem hoga? Balki mujhe to achha lagega ki tum use dekhne aaogi. Lekin tum itni raat ko kaise aaogi beta?

S- aunty aap meri fikar mat kijiye. Main bas thodi der mein wahan aati hun.

K- theek hai.

Sanaya cuts the call and keeps her soft-drink on the table. Nisha looked at her in surprise.

N- tum pagal ho kya? Itni raat ko akeli uske ghar jaogi?

S- akela kaun jayega? Tum chal rahi ho saath mein.

N- no ways! Main kahin nahi jaungi. Ek to waise hi mere mom dad mujhe yahan aane ki permission bahut mushkil se dete hain, aur tu hai ki mujhe kahin aur le jaa rahi hai?

S- mere liye itna nahi kar sakti??

N- nahi. Mohit tumhara bf hai, to tum jaakar milo na usse! Mujhe kyun saath leke jaana chahti ho? main nahi aaungi.

Sanaya saw that nisha was firm on her decision. So she made a sad puppy face and went near nisha.

S- agar mohit mera bf hai, to tumhara jiju hoga na?

N- (confused) jiju??

S- I mean?.future jiju? Tumhare jiju ki tabiyat theek nahi hai, to kya tum unse milne bhi nahi chalogi?

N- a?w?wo?main?.

S- please???????

N- a?theek?hai par?.

S- that's great chalo!

Sanaya pulled nisha out of the night club.

Within half an hour, both the girls reached at mohit's place. It was quite dark and cold.

N- yaar yahan kitna andhera aur kitni thand hai! mujhe darr lag raha hai.

S- agar tumhara boyfriend bimaar hota to tum bhaagi bhaagi chali aati.

N- haan, tab baat alag hoti!

S- shut-up! Andar chalo.

They go at the door and ring the door bell. Kamini opens the door.

K- aao beta, main tumhara hi wait kar rahi thi?.

S- aunty?.

Sanaya noticed that kamini was looking at nisha confusingly.

S- aunty ye meri?.dost hai, nisha.

N- main actually apne jiju?.a?.mera matlab hai ki?.mohit se milne aayi hun.

K- aao na andar.

They get in. Kamini takes them in mohit's room, where he was sleeping.

S- mohit to gehri neend mein hai.

K- are nahi. Wo jag jayega. Tum log yahin raho main abhi aati hun.

Kamini goes from there. Nisha looks around the room in amazement.

N- wow! Room ko kitna neat and clean rakha hai! aur ek tum ho, saara ka saara kapda bed pe bikhra ke rakhti ho.

S- chup kar!

While these girls were whispering, mohit got disturbed and opened his eyes clumsily. He saw sanaya sitting in front of him and smiled. But when he saw nisha, his smile changed into confusion.

M- (slowly) mere sapne mein sirf sanaya aati hai, aaj nisha saath mein kaise aa gayi?

S- (blushes) kyunki ye sapna nahi sach hai!

Mohit quickly got up and rubbed his eyes properly.

M- tum dono?.yahan kaise?

N- actually aunty ne hume bataya ki tumhari tabiyat theek nahi hai. isliye hum milne aa gaye.

S- tumhe vomiting bhi hui hai na?

M- haan bas, thodi si.

S- kya thodi si? Doctor ke paas kyun nahi gaye?

M- ab itni chhoti si baat ke liye doctor ko kyun disturb karta? Main thoda sa araam karunga to better feel karunga.

N- one second, give me a break! Isliye main boyfriend nahi banati hun!

Sanaya looked at nisha angrily, while mohit smiled slightly.

N- a?i?mean?tum dono?baatein karo main?.jaati hun.

Nisha goes out of the room.

S- ek baat batao, aaj dopahar ka khana kaisa tha?

M- a?.b?.theek?.nahi, bahut achha tha.

S- jhoot!

M- main jhoot kyun bolunga? Khana sach mein tasty tha!

S- achha? To fir wo khana khane ke baad hi tumhe vomiting kyun hui? Dekho, agar tum mujhse jhoot bologe, to main jaa rahi hun?.

Sanaya gets up and was about to leave, but mohit holds her hand.

M- please aise mat jao!

S- kya fayeda, tum to mujhse jhoot hi bologe.

M- nahi. Main jhoot nahi bolunga.

Sanaya sits quietly.

M- ab meri baat dhyaan se suno. Wo khana bahut tasty tha?.sirf mere liye. Haan, agar koi aur wo khana khata to use zarur kharab lagta. Kyunki?.

S- kyunki usme namak nahi tha.

M- tumhe?.kaise pata?

S- kyunki ghar pe thoda sa khana bacha tha. Maine taste kiya aur?.tab mujhe realize hua ki...main kitni buri cook hoon.

M- nahi. Aisa nahi hai. mujhe wo khana sach mein achha laga. Pata hai kyun? Kyunki kisi ne bahut pyaar se mere liye wo khana banaya tha!

Mohit smiled to sanaya, but she was upset.

M- kya hua? Main sach keh raha hun.

S- tum mujhse itna pyaar kyun karte ho? mere haath ka bana itna kharab khana tumne kha liya? Aur bina kisi shikayat ke?

M- kyunki main tumhara dil nahi todna chahta tha. Tumne pehli baar khana banaya, aur wo bhi mere liye, to main bina khaye kaise rehta?

S- (smiles) tumhare liye main kuchh bhi kar sakti hun. I love you!

M- I love you too!

They hug each other. But mohit remembers something and breaks the hug aftr a moment. Sanaya was quite confused with this behaviour.

S- kya hua?

M- mujhe tumhe?.kuchh batana hai.

S- kya batana hai? koi problem hai kya?

M- actually mujhe?.Delhi jaana hoga.

S- D?.Delhi? kyun?

M- wahan ek meeting mein mujhe presentation dena hai. Monday ki flight se jaana hoga. Shayad, do din mein wapas aa jaun.

Hearing this, sanaya was upset and goes towards the window and stands there quietly. Mohit goes to her and holds her from shoulders gently.

M- plz tum udaas mat ho. main bas do din baad aa jaunga na!

S- bas do din? Tumhare liye ye bas do din hoga, lekin mere liye ye do saal ke barabar hai. main tumhe dekhe bina ek din bhi nahi reh sakti hun, fir tumne ye kaise soch liya ki ye do din main tumhare bina reh loongi?

M- main Delhi hi to jaa raha hun, kahin door to nahi na? hum phone pe bhi to baat karenge.

S- lekin main tumhe dekhe bina kaise rahungi mohit? Please tum papa se kaho na ki tumhare jagah kisi aur ko bhej dein! But please tum mat jao.

M- agar main aisa kar sakta to main zarur karta sanaya. Lekin tum achhe se jaanti ho ki wo mujhpar kitna trust karte hain. Aur ye business deal mere liye bhi bahut important hai.

S- aur main? Kya main tumhare liye important nahi hun?

M- tum mere liye sabse zyada important ho. lekin ye sab bhi to main sirf tumhare liye kar raha hun na? taaki humara future achha rahe?

Mohit noticed that sanaya was crying.

M- tum ro kyun rahi ho?? dekho, sirf do din ki baat hai.

S- (still crying) plz tum kahin mat jao na! mujhe darr lagta hai, agar kuchh bura ho?.

Mohit quickly placed his finger on her lips.

M- ssshhhhhhh..... (he wipes her tears and cups her face) tumhe pata bhi nahi chalega ki ye do din kaise beet jayenge.

Sanaya could not control herself anymore, so she hugged mohit very tightly. He too hugged her back. They both remained like this for sometime.

"ahem ahem!" nisha cleared her throat. "future Mr. and Mrs. Sehgal, agar aap dono ki baatein khatam ho gayi ho to kya main andar aa jaun?"

"budhhu, tum andar aa chuki ho!" sanaya smiled, breaking the hug.

"ab better feel kar rahi ho na?" mohit asked, cupping sanaya's face again.

"hmmmm?.tumhare kareeb rehkar achha feel karti hun!" sanaya smiled.

"aayyee haaayyee?kya pyaar hai!" nisha teased them.

"waise abhi tum dono ko jana chahiye, kaafi raat ho gayi hai." mohit changed the topic.

S- haan. Theek hai.

N- take care mohit! Bye!

S- bye!

Nisha went out of the room. Sanaya was about to leave the room, but she turned back to mohit.

S- agar main tumse kuchh maangun to mujhe doge na?

M- aisa kabhi hua hai ki tumne mujhse kuchh maanga ho aur main mana kar doon?

S- nahi!

M- to bolo, kya chahiye?

S- sirf ek din.

M- ek din?

S- haan. Main chahti hun ki tum Delhi jaane se pehle ek poora din mere saath spend karo. Bolo, kya mujhe ek din doge?

M- (smiles) bas itni si baat? Next Sunday main poora din sirf aur sirf apni jaan ke saath spend karunga! Khush?

S- (blushes) hmmm?..waise, tumhe hamesha mere sapne aate hain kya?

M- tumhare sapne?

S- haan?.wo?.tumne hi kaha tha ki?.tumhare sapno mein hamesha main aati hun?.

M- hmmm?.ab tum sapno mein bhi mujhe pareshaan karti ho?

S- (hitting his chest) mohit!!!!!

M- achha baba sorry!! Waise ab tumhe jana chahiye. Nisha wait kar rahi hogi.

S- byee?good night! Love youu!!

M- love you too!

She leaves from there.

PRECAP- not decided!😆

i hope u all liked this part.....plz do press like tab n comment!

Edited by ria_lovesajan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

yayyyyyyyyyyyy me 1st woohoooo lol n yayy u updated was so waiting for dis update anyways awwwwwwwwww mohit sick oh noooooo bt how sweet sanaya n nisa(emotional blackmail karke😆) n den wen sanaya n nisa came to mohit house mohit thought its a dream hehehehe dat was funny part n den i lovee how sanaya was all concerned n she got to knw dat da food didnt had salt awww bt i loveee wat mohit said hayeee so dreamy his dialogues to sanaya abt da food n den sanaya all sad n crying coz mohit going delhi😔 bt i lovee how mohit calm her down n hayeeeeeeeeee dey gonna spend one whole day together☺️😍 do continue soooooooooooon now

Edited by Anu_sajan4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

RESERVED!

*Edited*
Hey Ria
Sorry for editing soooo late!
But firstly no need to say thanks Im always ready to help!
Just a scrap away!
and Loved this line

N- (thinks) kahin aaj ka khana kha kar usne sanaya se break-up karne ko to nahi soch liya?

hahah!! It was hilarious! nd you know what! when I read 'kamini' picked up the phone I thought u wrote 'kameeeni' picked up the phone! hahah! I din know her name was Kamini! LOL!
Ok jokes apart I loved the whole update! Awesome work!
Well i knew what was going to happen but still.. you explained it perfectly!
Lovely work Ria!
And I just loved the way Mohit teased sanaya! and Sanaya's foood! LOL!
it was funny!
and Nisha and her jiju! LOL!
Awesome!
Love Youuu
manjari
Edited by SajanRox11 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wao yar awsm updt yar.updt ws vry vry sweet.luv d updt yar.
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz cnt wid nxt part soon asap,i jus cant w8 plz updt soon swty.
luv u
vritika
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww.. Poor Mohit he was not feeling well.. But Sanaya and Nisha went to meet him.. I like that part wen Mohit was sleeping he see's Sanaya and Nisha den he says k Sanaya to harooz meray dreams mein ati hai.. Aj Nisha kaise agaye..😆.. Poor Sanaya she cried bcz Mohit is going Delhi for 2 days..
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Posted: 15 years ago
so ria finally j updsted.......
It was fabulas part........
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow ria
awsome update
loved it
monaya were so cute
awww mohit ko ultiya😒
hayye mohit ko roz sanaya ke sapne atei hai😳
loved their convo aww woh usse do din bhi dhur nahi reh sakti
just loved monaya
cant wait for the precap
even though its not decided yet😆 😆
cont soon
love
tanzeel
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Posted: 15 years ago
updated my comment in page 38
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update.....monaya are soo cute....cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwiiieeee so adorable....mind blowing Update...loved it..awww poor Mohit ate that food jst for Sanaya n now he is not well:(( but he felt better as Sanaya came to meet him...gr8 awesome.......eagerly waiting for the next upd as they gonna spend one whole day together Woaahhh please continue soon n thanks for the pm🤗

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