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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow suchi amazing part cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Scene 6


Viren's feelings can be felt through this

[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=RKfPwtOwhfc&feature=related[/YOUTUBE]


Viren jogged towards the frontal exit of the RV and looked out of Niveditha.

Hanging with one leg inside and one out, holding onto the top handle.

Just a few glances and he found the beautiful sight he had been searching for.

Niveditha was walking with Divya towards the beautiful lush green lawn that had been prepared for them.

There were tables placed in four different sections with an umbrella on top, shielding the slight rays of the sun.


The hilltops covered with snow were clearly visible all around them. For viren, however, even the breathtaking views around him were not able to distract him for a moment. His eyes were only set on the girl that had re-stolen his heart.


Divya and Niveditha helped Vandana and the workers to help give breakfast to everyone.


Viren looked at her with a sparkle in his eyes. He skipped towards her. Niveditha looked at him with her side eyes but turned to talk to divya as if immersed in the most important conversation she ever had.


He stared at her, turning towards her facing every direction she faced.


She continued towards chanchal and jawahar's table offering them the breakfast and pouring juice onto their empty jar.

Viren followed her and stood behind her while she served but as soon as she finished, vandana came over to her place making sure everything was going well. Niveditha left with her heading towards Yashodhara and Bupat's table.


Viren, followed her to their table trying to get her attention but just then divya came up to him, offering him a plate of toasted bread and Spanish omelet.


She was talking but viren couldn't hear a single word of what she said as his eyes were all set on niveditha, who was now moving towards the RV.


Viren quickly took his plate and placed it on his table, and sprinted towards RV, but then vandana had just entered the RV as well.


Disappointed viren put his hands in his hair, passing his fingers through them.


Niveditha just came out with vandana, her hands carrying a huge tray. He ran towards her and stood in front of her.


She did not look at him and her eyes were focused an inch away from his face. He looked at her intently and took the tray from her hands and in the process he made sure to touch her hands, which quivered a bit upon the impact.


Divya had just caught up with them and said something to her, which neither viren nor niveditha could hear but he saw her being dragged away by divya.


Where is she taking her now, cried his heart as he looked around frantically trying to find a place to put the tray down but vandana had already directed him towards the corner table.


Disappointed viren rushed towards the other corner to place the tray and then looked around in search of her once more.

This time he found her sitting in between divya and Vandana who were talking animatedly but niveditha, he noticed was putting her beautiful hair behind her ears and throwing furtive glances at him.


For a moment their eyes met but she looked away the very next moment as if deeply engaged in the conversation.


Viren headed towards their table with slow and steady steps not looking away even for a bit.


There was a smirk on his face and his mischievous eyes spoke volumes. The woman he loved more than his life, how can he not recognize the yearning?

Edited by Suchi-NivReniac - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Suchi your scene are getting better and better. Nivi and Viren didn't even utter a word, but still your scene spoke volumes about their feelings and yearning. Can't wait to find out what's cooking in VIren's mischievous mind. 😳 😉 I am all over falling in love again with NivRen, your scenes are just magical.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Suchi !!! How can you end the scene at such a good part !!! lolzzz ! Oh Man Nivi is toh totally gone now !!! 😳😆 Loved the way u described Viren's desperation to talk to Nivi, amazing !! Can't wait for the next scene sweetheart !! Loved this one sooooo much !! 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Suchi meri jaan.. Beautiful scene..!! D hide n seek was sooo sweet.. Finally, viren's mind is working.. D last sentence " The woman he loved more than his life, how can he not recognize the yearning? " is sooo perfect..!! Waiting impatiently for d next scene..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing Di simply mind blowing.......no....Mind Blasting!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG !!! suchi di ...have no words ... aapne hamara sab ka weekend itna khoobsurat bana diya 😊😊😊😊
suchi di meri dil se dua hain ki aapke ye acche kaam se hum sab aapki liye khuda se dua karte hain ki aapki har dil ki khawsih poori ho jaaye
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Suchi.... I am now thinking why the weekend is passing so fast.. I want more of your scenes, more than CCBM now... Too good dear.. This is what we want Nivi to be like and admit her love for Viren. This is how we all have dreamed the NiVren love story to be like. I am not sure if we will get it this way in CCBM but no worries as we have you.
Love it to the core.. You need to merge all the scenes and create a book with few of our comments...It will be so good. It will be like interactive book like a real life story.

Navi, hope your nephew is feeling much better...All our wishes are with him.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
Suchi...!!! mind blowing scenes...😃
got busy today and jus like viren even i was so desperate to come online and read ur retreat.... 😊
finally read all the parts.... 😊 no words....☺️ u jus give us what we exactly wanted.. :)
so sweet of u dear... :)
and the alaipayuthey songs.... too too good.... 👏
thanks a lot akka... 😉
and eagerly waiting for next part...... 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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WONDERFULLLLLLLLLLLL😃😃😃😛😛😊😊😆😆😳

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