Telepathy and Love (maan geet) #1

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Posted: 15 years ago

#51

awesome part........ loved it.....its very interesting...... plzz continue soon

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chubzy

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Posted: 15 years ago

#52

Hey dear! Amazin nw maan knws tat she cn hear n mentaly feel hs presence too, it so awsome, m waitin to read more of it as ur ff is completly diff n m in love wit ur concept. I thnk i grasp ur update nw more nicely n it keep me grippin too so plz nw cn u give longer ones,it jst a request. Cont soon.

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preethia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#53

hey nice update.......thnx for the pm.....since he knows now that she can hear him i am very much intrested to know wats gonna happen

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Posted: 15 years ago

#54

wowwwwwwww

very nice part

so both can hear each-other

woww

do con soon

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Esha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#55

This is really very interesting...I'm loving it with each update.....😊..Umm...this is for first 2 parts 😉

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Esha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#56

Okay the 3rd part is interesting and hilarious too..I was laughing imagining Maan's face when Geet replied to his curse...Wow what an experience it might be !Well now that he's thinking of asking Arjun he may find out what exactly he's going through....looking forward to see the interesting developments of their telepathy 😛

Yaar what's your name?Can you pls tell?

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 15 years ago

#57

nice part. loved it.
maaneet heard each other .
it's interesting.
update soon.

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 15 years ago

#58

Mrk_1

Dear I have taken some liberty this being a fiction , but most of this happens, the couple is in immature state here they don't know they possess this power of telepathy, they have not started controlling it, at this time their minds are like open book, once they become ware of it, they will start controlling their minds

maansee

Dear they do not know that what they hear is real

rsroopali

Dear Geet did not reply to Maan she just reacted on what she heard, it was just a reaction to an action, she did it immediately without giving it a second thought

chubzy

dear once all readers get the tempo I will start long updates thanks for coming in tune so fast

Rest all

Dears both can hear each other but to connect is not their choice it just happens, it will take a little time for them to know that what they hear is not their imagination bur something real

If you all have further questions don't hesitate to ask

I will definitely answer them

thankyou all of you for your support your questions help me solve my own doudts

Also I am updating in 5 mins

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Shruti Jain

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Posted: 15 years ago

#59

Part 4

Though Maan thought he will ask Arjun but was not able to get words to explain the situation to him.

Few months passed by, now he was accustomed to the fact that on specific 4 days no one will wake that girl whose name may be Geet, so he too will have to get up on his own, but since than she had not replied to him, so that she heard him might be his assumption.

Geet now became more and more aware of his presence, she was accustomed to his footsteps,

many times she judged his mood by the way his steps sounded, in the morning he would walk lazily,

when he left for the college, he definitely was in college she was sure, his steps were fast like in a rush,

once inside the premises of the college, he paced with arrogance, he took measured strides that might show his attitude,

when he was in anger they sounded disturbed.

She was amazed that how her imagination felt as if he was someone real,

Rajji suggested that he may be some alien, or may be she is in a spell of certain black magic, maybe but she felt that he was real

Maan was not sure why after practicing so many mental exercises, he still heard the voices and the voices now disturbed him at any time,

initially he heard them only in the mornings or in his free hours, but now he hears them on and off,

only the other day, when it was suppose to be her day off from waking up early, in the afternoon he heard her voice as if she was in pain, she was moaning with pain, he wanted to ask her but was not able to utter a word, he only cursed his imagination, after hours he came out of them only after she maybe fell asleep.

Geet was attending her school and was concentrating on her kabbadi game when all of the sudden she heard his rushing steps and she lost her balance and got out,

she sat on the side bench when she heard him saying "doctor uncle she will be alright, is the attack mild or"

The other voice "you need not worry son, its just a mild attack, she will recover, but I think now she must not strain herself with these business issues, you are almost 20 you should help her and take over slowly, and by the way it is you who has to look after this business, better start when she is to guide you"

he said "I will uncle",

OMG some one in his family is not well, God help him give him strength

From that day she heard a different sound, many a times his footsteps echoed authority and power.

What these two are not able to understand is that more they think about each other more they will connect with each other,

both have accepted the fact that they will hear the voices and when they don't, they become restless and concentrate on searching for them;

that is the reason why they hear the sounds on and off especially when the other person is in high or low spirits.

ps: hope u like it I made it short so that you may read carefully and grasp what the situation is ...... if you find something disturbing do write and if you find it nice encourage me by commenting and of course by hitting that LIKE BUTTON

pls continue commenting, it feels really nice to read you all

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part 5 https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/37620085

Edited by smj1977 - 15 years ago