Wow Jaz awsome update yaar i loved how mann supported geet aur kaise mann ne sab family walo ko jawab diya unn sab ke sath aaisa hi hona chahiye bechari geet akele hi sab kuch sehati rahi par nahin bataya ki mann ka baby hai yaar itna bhi kya guman ki apni beti ka doctor check up nahin karwane diya . I know what did was wrong but parents can't be that cruel to lock their daughter and not even give her regular doc's ck up ck up chodo uss ke khane pine ka khayal uski cravings for diff. food uski liye meternity clothes thats too much atleast Nt helped geet if she wasn't there god knows what would her parents have done to her anyway yaar i cannot wait for next update...........
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i luved the way Maan stood for her .. and gave a good piece of his mind...
I was shocked too at her parents attitude .. its understandable that they're shocked and heartbroken but this kind of negligence is totally un acceptable ..
and the way Brij hoped that without prenatal care she might have miscarrieage ... i mean eww .. that was sick to the core... how can not think of putting his own daughter's life in danger ...
plzzz next update jaldi kero .. đ
btw.. did i tell you that u're an awesome writer! đ¤
Oh my goshh!! Loved it to the core! To be frank, I was also quite scared about how Maan would react, but it was amazing! He's the kind of partner everyone wants. I love you for writing this!! Brilliant job! Might I add though, I reckon you made her family worse in this story than they were in the family in my opinion. Bloody hell, how can anyone do something like this to their own daughter?? Despicable! Btw, never thought I'd say this, but I love NT here. Also loved how Maan announced that he's the father. That's a big slap accross the face now isn't it? Haha! This update has left me speechless (yes I do usually write this much when I'm speechless LOL.) as your updates usually do. Eagerly looking forward to the next one! Updata asap!! <3
hi dear. awesome start and just read all three parts. it's awesome brilliant , beautiful. loved it. loved maaneet scene and conversation. brij is too bad. how could he left geet like that and geet's mother never prtest about it. omg, in 7 months geet never go to her check up. thanks God maan is back. now I'm sacred about geet and baby. update soon. pm me when u'll post next part.