TaSha FF..Yeh Bheege Pal.. Part 21 Pg 94 - Page 71

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Bushy_92

@BOLD: I can see that....🤣🤣🤣

Its ok...even i do mistakes...😆😆

*Holds head*
OMG!!! Kya karoon mein apnaa!!
grrrrrrrrrrrr!!
Mein bhi na..both my hands move in parallel and type simultaneously.....i just dnt get it....this started happening a year back....grr....i need to work on it...
sorry huns!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

*Holds head*
OMG!!! Kya karoon mein apnaa!!
grrrrrrrrrrrr!!
Mein bhi na..both my hands move in parallel and type simultaneously.....i just dnt get it....this started happening a year back....grr....i need to work on it...
sorry huns!!!

Its ok DD......y say sorry....me too hav the same problems.......i thnk we all LTLians hav many thngs in common.....😆.....dont say sorry....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Dancingdoll

🤣🤣🤣🤣
Oh!! shabz doesnt knw how to play chor police?
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I wasshocked that she didnt know how to play ringa ringa roses!! 🤣🤣🤣
phasaake chali gayi???.....I told Bushy, keep Shabz as the 11th player...for emergencies!!
🤣

DD chor police me extra players hote he😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
wat ...mere jaane k baad u all started playing ringa ringa roses here .....🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow yr....Baji - ranoz LS 😍 i waz so looking frwd to diz track...!!
Tose Naina lage iz an awesum no...❤️cant wait fr ur update shabz...!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow shabz awsomeeeeeee update.............can't wait for next part..................i love the songggggggggggggggg...................especially the line....mohobbat jissey bakhsh dey zindagaani...................☺️
Edited by MishalLeoSheeba - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hiya frndz ...
I knw it has been a long w8 .... but finally I managed to write a short update ..
Hope u all like it ... 😆



Part 21

Nupur's Place

Its past noon & Naku & Nupur still sleeping … Mayank sis wedding had finally finished yesterday ..they had come in quite late at night .. they had been so dead tired that they dropped to bed straight away as soon as they changed & they still did not feel like getting up … their sleep is broken by the ringing of the alarm …. A hand comes out of the blanket & after sum hand searching Naku manages to shut off the alarm … she goes bak to sleep ….. after a while they r again disturbed by the shrill ringing of the bell … Naku hand again comes out & reaches 4 the alarm clock .. but its not the alarm ,,the phone was ringing which was kept on the other side of the bed …Naku nudges Nupur to pick up the phone … Nupur takes the pillow & keeps it o her ears …. Naku nudges her again to pick it up .. Nupur stirs a little ,, picks up the phone ,,taking it inside the blanket ..& drawls in a sleepy voice ..hello …who is it …

Its Dutta at the other end ..who wanted to talk to Naku ..

Nupur : Dutta ..itni subah subah …. Thoda w8 nahi kar sakte thay ..

Dutta : hello ji …… subah subah ..see the time ..its already past noon … don tell me u both still in bed …

Nupur : haan hain to ….. the function ended so late last night …

Dutta : Okiie u sleep … Naku ko to phone do ….

Nupur nudges Naku & passes the phone to her … Nw Naku turn to take it under the blanket … Nupur tries to go back to sleep .. She is tossing around but can't sleep as she can constantly hear Naku giggling & whispering on the phone under the blanket …. Finally she gets up …taking a cushion she throws it at Naku .. Naku head comes out of the blanket …. She glares at Nupur & mouths "what" ….. Nupur glares angrily back at her ,, showing tongue at her she marches 2wards the washroom ..

After freshening up Nupur goes to the kitchen to make sum tea … she comes back to the room with 2 cups of tea … Naku is nw in the washroom to freshen up … she is sipping her tea when the phone rings again …. Thinking it to b Dutta,, Nupur picks the phone ..

Nupur : abhi to phone kiya tha ….. dil nahi bhara …

A female voice : Kya bol rahi hai ..

Nupur stutters : auntie aap …. Sorry main samjhi koi aur tha .. kaisi hain aap ..

Babi : main theek hoon Nupur beta …tum sunao ..sab theek to hai na wahan .. Naku se baat nahi huyi kaafi din se …

Nupur : Haan auntie ..wo zara shaadi mein busy thay ..Naku washroom mein hai … nikalti hai to baat karathi hoon ..

Babi : Arey haan …shaadi kaisi guzri … sab kaam theek se ho gaya na ..

Nupur : haan auntie ..sab ek dum theek se huya … bahut enjoy kiya humne ..

Babi : chalo achcha hai ….meri taraf se Mayank ko Mubarak baad dena … waqt per sab ho gaya … bas ab tum dono bhi ghar basalo ..

Nupur blushing : Kya auntie …aap bhi ..

Babi in a worried voice : arey to kya main galat bol rahi hoon …. Meri to prathna hai k tumhara aur Naku ka bhi ghar bas jaye ….

Nupur : Aap kyun fikr karti hain .. sab theek ho jayega .. waise Naku k liye yahan koi ladka dekhun ..

Babi excitedly : Koi hai kya teri nazar mein ..

Just then Naku comes out of the wash room ..Nupur sees her ..

Nupur : Hain na auntie ….bahut achcha ladka hai meri nazar mein Naku k liye .. khoobsoorat , khandaani ,, khaata peeta ghar … Naku ko palkon pe bitha k rakhen gein ..aap kahen to baat chalaun ..

Naku ears prick up ..she turns 2wards Nupur ..she nears to Nupur ..

Nupur winks at Naku & continues : Arey wo to shaadi pe bhi mila tha Naku se ..

Naku snatches the phone 4rm her : haan aaye …kaisi hai tu …

Babi : theek hoon …..teri kab tak waapsi hai ..kitne din ho gaye …ab to shaadi bhi khatam ho gayi ..

Naku : Haan aaye shaadi khatam ho gayi hai …… main do teen din tak aajaungi …. Kuch kaam hai yahan … sab wahan theek hain na … Baba theek hain ..

Babi : Tujhe to sab pata hai …… lagta hai phir kuch gadbad kar ke aaya hai … main to pareshan ho gayi hoon …

Naku : Kya gadbad ki hai is baar …..Tu pareshan na ho ..main jaldi aane ki koshish karegi …aur Sethji to theek hain na …

Babi : Haan theek hao wo bhi ….. achcha wo Nupur kya keh rah thi ….koi ladka hai …

Naku : Aaye … Nupur bhi na ….aise hi .. achca main aake bataungi …. Abhi rakhti hoon ..

Naku puts down the phone & turns 2wards Nupur … Kya zaroorat thi maa ko bolne ki ..

Nupur winks at her : achcha hai na ….tere liye aasani kar rahi thi …

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Rano was getting ready to go the office … she had to go to the office early as Baaji had been out of town 4 a few dayz … he had given the charge to her uncle (manager) ..& as she went with him every day so uncle too wanted that nw also she went with him … she is sitting in 4rnt of the mirror brushing her hair … she recalls about Baaji who had come here 3 dayz ago to meet uncle … she blushes just at the thought of that incident … she had been so embarrassed at that time …


Three Days Ago ..


It had been a Sunday morning … Uncle was not at home ..& Rano was helping her aunt in the kitchen ,,who is preparing lunch 4 them .. Rano is also baking a cake 4 her uncle ..she knew that he liked it .. her aunt is talking with her while cooking ,, Rano chipping in sumtimes ..her hands are moving fast helping around but in her mind she is thinking of Baaji .. she is confused on Baaji behavior ..he seemed too mysterious to her .. she couldn't get any info out 4rm her uncle as he wasn't keen on discussing it ,, she had made a decision that she would find out everything about Baaji no matter wat .. after finishing with the work she goes to her room .. she thinks of getting fresh ... she takes a quick shower ..she comes out with a towel wrapped on her head.. she looks at her reflection in the mirror .. She had been thinking about her moments spent with Baaji …. Suddenly her thoughts r broken up by the sound of the door bell .. thinking that uncle must b at the door she runs to open but then stops as this is not uncle style of ringing …the door bell rings again .. she slowly walks to the door & opens it …. Rano is shocked ..


Rano is shocked to see Baaji at the door .. she stands there dumbstruck looking at him … Baaji too stands there mesmerized by her beauty…. She was looking very pretty as usual in her simple shalwar suit .. towel wrapped around her ..her face glowing ..he inhaled the sweet scent coming 4rm her.. they r totally lost in each other ..

A song playing in the back ground

"Tose naina lage re saawre"

tose nainaa laage

tose nainaa laage piyaa saawre

nahi basamein ab ye jiyaa saawre

mohabbat to ek jaavedaa zindagi hai

tose nainaa laage mili roshani

tose man jo laagaa mili zindagi

mohabbat to ek jaavedaa zindagi hai

Baaji hands slids down her waist & pulls her closer … her head hits his chest ,, her arms on his shoulders .. she looks up into his eyes … their eyes meeting … they could feel each other breaths on their faces .. Baaji removes the towel 4rm her hair ..

mohabbat ki hai daastaane zindagi

mohabbat naa ho to kahaa zindagi

mohabbat to ek jaavedaa zindagi hai

tose nainaa laage

tose nainaa laage piyaa saawre

nahi basamein ab ye jiyaa saawre



Baaji fingers trail down Rano cheek … her heart skips a beat ..she closes her eyes ,,Baaji cups her face .. he places his lips on her forehead ..then kisses her eyes one by one ,, he bends 2wards her mouth ..
Darwaze par kaun hai Rano … Rano is snapped out of her spell … she had been day dreaming ..Auntie comes there & sees Baaji standing at the door ..

Auntie : Arey beta tum …. Aao ander aao …. Bahar kyun khade ho …
Baaji looks curiously at Rano …
Auntie turns to Rano : "Arey Rano tune isse ander aane ko nahi bola .."
Rano is embarrassed ..she lowers her eyes ..she stutters " haan ..main ..wo"
Baaji passes by her & enters the house .. she feels so embarrassed ,,

she goes inside her room .. removing her towel 4rm her hair … she brushes her hair ..making herself presentable she goes out … Uncle had come by that time & he was discussing sumthing with Baaji .. Baaji had come to hand over charge of the office as he was going out … Rano sits on the side … Baaji hardly notices her … Auntie comes out of the kitchen with tea & she calls out to Rano … "Pari … Baaji ko chai to serve karo .."
Rano looks up & takes the tray 4rm her hand … she hands over the cup to Baaji who is looking keenly at her …his eyes full of curiosity … did he hear right …. Mrs Rai (manager wife ) … called Rano "Pari" …. Rano feels Baaji eyes on her … she serves tea to both of them & leaves 4rm there …. She could still feel his gaze …


Present


Rano is snapped out of her thoughts …. Uncle was calling her ….
They were getting late … she quickly brushes her hair ,, straightening her dress she picks up her files & bags & leaves the room .. uncle was already w8ing 4 her at the door & they leave 4 the office … On their way she asks uncle that where had Baaji went & when he would b back … he had shook his head that he had no idea that what Baaji was upto these dayz & where had he gone .…. he himself was confused ..


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Okiee that's all 4 nw ..
Plzz do comment ..😳


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Posted: 15 years ago
Great Update Shabz... Haila Nupur is funny, the way she was telling babi about Dutta lol... Awww the teaser was an imagination loooll... Rano daydreaming about Baaji .. how cute.. but how i wished it was real... So Mrs. Rai called Rano pari... baaji knows the name Pari ryt? ... Hmmm n i wonder where he went without telling anyone. Arre yaar continue soon n don't torture us 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aakhir intezaar khatam...ab jaldi jaldi update karo....this is one FF where there is role reversal..baaji seems more lethal then dutta...hence i imagine dutta as baaji and baaji as dutta..or is it the other way around...maybe i confused you too...
nice..thanks for PM.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sophia21

Great Update Shabz... Haila Nupur is funny, the way she was telling babi about Dutta lol... Awww the teaser was an imagination loooll... Rano daydreaming about Baaji .. how cute.. but how i wished it was real... So Mrs. Rai called Rano pari... baaji knows the name Pari ryt? ... Hmmm n i wonder where he went without telling anyone. Arre yaar continue soon n don't torture us 😆



Yh ..... Rano was known as Pari in her childhood dayz ... so when Baaji heard that name ,,, it sounded familiar ..... but will he connect the dots between Pari & Rano ....u will hav to w8 for that ...😉
abhi to update kiya ...😲.... nw w8 for another mnth or so ..... *ducks behind lappy *....😆

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