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Posted: 15 years ago
very touching sara post next part soon👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow Sara my heart stopped, eagerly waiting for next one
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Very emotional part Sara😭😭 but there is light at the end of the tunnel and their union will be much sweeter😊
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ha it will be thankssss guyssssssss
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Hi Sara read ur ffs 67 and 68 together..... It is so painful...... Feeling sooooo sad for DM...... Pray to God that Santu should be alright very soon..... Getting scared..... Hope will get the next part ASAP... Cannot bear the tension anymore.
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Dm shock

Dm who sit alone on the chair looking so broken………start to cry as much as he was happy now he totally shattered and a lone

Why???? And who is that man? Why santo shout like she was expected that shooting

Ohhhh santoooo ……………..…………..

DM here wipe his tears and pray

GOD MAKE SANTO SAVE GOD SHE IS THE ONLY ONE WHO CAN MAKE ME CONTINUE IN THIS LIFE GOD …….PLAZZZ SAVE HER FOR ME ………..OH GOD

Here doctor come to DM saying

Dr.: Mr. Mahaivanchi she wake up calling u

Here dm walk with doctor like he running in his walking ………..and they reach santo who lie calling him in her almost sleep

She is worried of him and doctor say ……..just 5 mint ok bec she is not well now

DM sit near her and hold her hand in softly way ……….saying

DM: ohhhh santoriiii

I love u …………..not leave me plazzzz ………no life without u

Tears start to fall again ……………he moves his hand on her hair ……..she is so calm like she sleeping …………..

Santo here open her eyes looking at him………..she had sad tiny smile

S: malik sorry ……sorryyy

DM: shhhhh no words now u rest we will talk when u be good okkkk

Sleep santorii sleep…………………

And she close her eyes in silent …………………

DM thought why she said sorry why???? Why that sadness in her eyes why she is soo lost in ocean of sadness why????

He needs to know when phone ring………….

DM: hello

Strange voice say ……..this time shooting go in u wife and she survive……….next time she will not like u take subdrah from me I will take u love from u

Hehehehhehehehe………..call cut

DM shock ……..what?.........again that man come in his life he need to make him disappear ……..now and forever from his life

Dm with tears looking to phone in anger and promising ………….

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
this part awesome sara loved the emotion u filled ......want to see now loin Dm soon.......plz post next soon......
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Posted: 15 years ago
it was awesome sara👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great part Sara, emotional. Imagined DM the way he was when the chandelier fell on Santu and the way he cried hearing that she's not gonna survive. So Santu got these threats beforehand. Waiting for next part.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great & awesome & emotional part dear🤗, just luved it dear😳

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