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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 11
note tht its cntinued scrol dwn on same page

maan kept cryin.
he thought hw culd he abuse her.
she is so naive so pure.
& he used all those slangs.
he used only once before in his life.
he never abused girls.
geet was the second case.
he cried.
adi jay and dev tried their best to console him.
suddenly they heard a girl's scream from next room.
they all rushed.
vikey opened the door and said.was just watching adult stuff.
will do low volume.

maan insisted can i come in.
vickey interruptedchill dude
Every gal is not your gal.

maan was about to punch him.
Dev stopped
maan saiddnt dare to take her pure name from your dirty stinking mouth

they left.
maan selfthought.
i have heard this scream earlier..
who could it be..
its familiar.

but he was too much under the drugs
so he ignored.
in the room vickey and his friend vinay tied geet to the bed with iron chains.
and stuffed bedsheet in her mouth.
geet was too week in front of 2 strong busty wolves like them
them.
vickey removed her shirt.
Geet kept struggling.
hitting her hands and legs under iron chains.
they were bleeding.
but she continued.
her eyes had tears of helplesness.
She had lost every thing.
her purity.her concience was her every thing..
But all her prayers..her requests..her longings..
Went in vain..
Her life has decided something misfortunate for her..
But she was not ready to give in ...
Her jeans was off..
her iners too..
vickey said..you insulted me that day..
You b****..now i wil make you so much down market that..
No one will buy you in free too
now its revenge time..

geet shrugged and struggld for her life self thought..please maan where are you..
and cried more..
she thought how she said to meera..
dont let warden know that i am not in room..
i will be with maan..
he will tell me bed time stories..

she looked at moon and pleaded her mum..please save my soul..
her prince was sleeping unaware in next room..
and her soul
her esteem was being riped apart..
vickey hurt her shoulders
her asset..
her every part..
she kept strugglin..
crying..
pleading to god to do justice to her prayers
vinay morphed every scene..
hiding vickey's face..and her mouth stuffed with bedsheet..
geet cried and pleaded..
her only thing her izat was being destroyed..
no one came for help..
vickey pushed himself inside geet..
tears of pain rolled down geet's eyes
blood rushed out of geet on bedsheet...
geet cried bitterly..
her soul hawled..
her soul screamed..
but not a voice from her mouth..that bedsheet choked her..
but no one cared.
she gasped for air...
vickey enjoyed her roughly..
so many evident bruises..bites..blows..on geet..
they were less than the pain on her heart..
her every part was exploited ..
..
geet lost her every thing.....
what she had was already gone..
vinay kept recording..
vickey raped her.. :( :( ..
tears kept rolling..
then it was vinay's turn..
he also did the same....
geet dint protest..
her soul was too weak now..
they removed the bedsheet
she did not protest or scream..
what she had was already lost..
there was nothing which could be saved..

they raped her several times..

morphed every Act..
after 3 hours vickey said..door is open you may go..
it was 1 am..
and said you taste awesome..
he spit on her face..
and showing thecd said you are not worth my spit too...
this is your status..

geet took the blood drenched bedsheet..
She showed no respnce to hi actionss
tried to get up..
wore the bedsheet..
tried to walk but fell..
she could feel the pain in between her legs..
they laughed at her condition..
geet dint bothered to look back..
she walked to maan's door..
she couldnot stand..
she knocked..
dev..maan koi hai..bhai dekh na..
maan salo hamesha me hi jata hu..
all sat on their beds..
maan wore his t shirt and opened the door..
found geet standing numb at the door.. with bed sheet..
Her hair scattered..
spectacles broken:.
.maan got numb lukimg at her this way....
all others too rushed out..
maan got aside.
they all 4 stood silent.
noticing her.
she could not stand.
nor walk.
the way she was walking.
any 1 could guess what happened to her.
suddenly she fell.
and bedsheet left her bare body
she fell on the floor.
not a single tear from her eyes
she sat bare .without a single cloth on floor
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
PART 11 CONTINUED
adi dev jay closed their eyes in pain and shame and turned their faces away..
maan got the shock..
he stood frozen..
adi shook him..
maan ran to geet..
that scream next door was ringing in his ears..
maan now remembered..it was geet..
same scream which he heard in confession room..

he wrapped the bed sheet arround her..
picked her up in his arms..
and carried her to the bath room..
and locked the door..
he removed the bedsheet and tears were rolling down his eyes..
he started tracing marks on her body..
He could not believe his eyes..
He wanted to convince him self that geet was not the 1
and said:..geet what happened..
you fell from stairs:..
Or slipped in bath room..
Dumbo its not good to roam without clothes

geet was still like rock..
no reply..
last lines of vickey were ringing in her ears.
..her silence was killing him...
he took the boldest step of his life..
spread her legs apart..

he realized every thing..
her body smelled differently..
he knew..but dint wan2 accept..
he looked at her bleeding lips
her hands
her legs..
her every other part..
he wrapped the bedsheet..picked her up..
made her lie on his bed..
his eyes were deep red in anger..
he was getting mad..
his friends asked in eyes..was it that..
he replied in teary eyes yes she is raped...
he was boiling..
he was pressing his teeth..
grinding them..
his fist closed:..
he had never been in such anger..
he looked at geet..
she was as cold and still as rock..
which made his anger an erupting volcano..
he was hungry lion..
hungry since ages..
he needed to kill those b*st**ds who did it to her..
dev adi and jay were shocked..
they locked the door from inside..they knew..what maan was up to..
maan just wanted to hear the names from geet's mouth..
He sat near her..geet kept her head on his lap..maan removed the broken specs..
friends i hope you are not annoyed from me as geet was gang raped..am sorry..if you like this part..do press the like button and please do comment...
Edited by Chikkipupuapgp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG chi chi vicky i dnt expect this from him..Oh poor Geet now wat is going to happen to er..
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Posted: 15 years ago
i gonna kill that vickey and vinay for sure yaar... nice update but the gang rape only ...... i feel so sad and sorry for geet 😭... maan definetely take revenge on them .... i guess geet might not continue her studies in that coll ... 😕
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Posted: 15 years ago
gosh wat aprt
i cried while reading it
pooooooor geet 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭
punish those 🤬🤬🤬🤬
updatesoooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooon plezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey great story...
just plz don't make geet pregnant.
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Posted: 15 years ago
i feel 😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭

i hope that geet somes out and fets thoses guys punished, please make geet fight against them, let maan be her pillar, please please

thanks for the update,
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Posted: 15 years ago
Now no pregnency please!!!!! i m really feeling bad!!!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
i hate the last 2 parts .. too bold... really i felt sick ...
Edited by naddiya26 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: naddiya26

i hate the last 2 parts .. too bold... really i felt sick ...


sory di..😔

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