Gurti Romance - 'And Cut!' - Part 7/Page 47 - Page 32

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: Rolzz

Wow Venu.................... u r improving greately in ur writing and scenes!!! Felt the falw of events and dialogs very natural.........SBB seg was superb 👍🏼

btw chapter 4 was only a dreammm????????!!!!!!! Arrghhhh 😡🤣

thank u thank u thank u[read as JWM Geet]😆 really am i improving,thats great yaar.About the dream i thought its too early for their confession,they need some more chupa chupi and their confession should be unique,that fourth part was there because i always imagined DD to take care of GC when he is ill.Deej ko kuch nahi kaha,talwar le ke aayeghi bacho🤣
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: elavenil

thank u thank u thank u[read as JWM Geet]😆 really am i improving,thats great yaar.About the dream i thought its too early for their confession,they need some more chupa chupi and their confession should be unique,that fourth part was there because i always imagined DD to take care of GC when he is ill.Deej ko kuch nahi kaha,talwar le ke aayeghi bacho🤣



Thats good...even I felt after chapter 4 that they are moving too fast...especially since GC's character doesnt go with a fast or smooth flirt....Even DD is not very shy or girly type..... plz keep their characters in mind....😉

Will there be any vamp for a small J track??? Name her Rolzz😈... or rather make GC jealous and name the villian Jake 🤣🤣

Edited by Rolzz - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
@Rolzz then why didnt u say it to me after part 4,ur constructive comments are always welcome and u can say anything to me what u feel,no need for diplomacy,we are true buddies hein na,love you🤗And abt DD's girly thing some where or the other i put myself in her place so its my shadow on her,will try and avoid it from now on teek hein😎
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: elavenil

@Rolzz then why didnt u say it to me after part 4,ur constructive comments are always welcome and u can say anything to me what u feel,no need for diplomacy,we are true buddies hein na,love you🤗And abt DD's girly thing some where or the other i put myself in her place so its my shadow on her,will try and avoid it from now on teek hein😎



heyy.... i didnt think much about it... moreover its ur story and ur characters... i dont like interfering in creative space of writers😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
Updating on behalf of Jake!!

Originally posted by: Jakefication

Like I said, they are one unique couple! 🤣

GC: I love you, Mrs. Choudhry!
DD: I love you too, Mr. Choudhry!
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WHAT? It's an off screen picture! 🤣
GC: Say you love me, DD!
DD: No, you first! I tried saying it as Geet, but you stopped me! 😈
*Ahem* Don't you just love the way GC carries DD? 😉


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Posted: 14 years ago
[QUOTE=maangeetcrazy]No...why did u made the Confession a dream!!!:(😭
But still its ok
Aww the interview was sooo sweet😛
Loved the Marriage one hehe!!
AWESOME UPDATE!👍🏼
Continue soon dear!!


[/QUOTE😉]Wont u love to see some more chupa chupi isliye,wait and watch dear.thanks for ur lovely word.😳
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Posted: 14 years ago
AWESOME UPDATE LOVED THIS FF ALOT
DO UPDATE SOON
Edited by misbah92 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
😳 PART-6



The next day morning in the sets everyone was very busy as they are going to shoot for the Pindy queen;s party saquence.Since DD has to be dressed heavily,as the theme is retro,she came to sets very early.Her assistants and hairstylists were ready there to get her ready.Actually she opted for a white lehenga with full zari work in it and it is really heavy too.Apart from the lehenga she should keep a wig too for a long hair and she knows its going to be a long day for her.

Meanwhile GC has reached sets and he was given his costumes and he got ready with it and starts to read his scripts.As he was studying the scripts he found the scene were he has to fill DD'S maang with his blood that is with a red colour ofcourse.Actually before he became ill they were planning for the engagement and then their wedding sequence which didnt happen,but GC knows how much he missed doing those scenes.He wanted to live every moment of it and he wants that to be a rehearsal for their original ceremonies.But unfortunately everything collapsed because of his illness and today he has got to do a scene where he can fill DD's maang.He knows they are actors and they need to do scenes like this when the script demands,but pir bhi he knows it is very special WITH DD cause he cant cheat his ownself.

GC was deeply sinked in his thoughts and he didnot noticed DD who came and sat near him.she coughed a little to gain his attention and he came back to the world from that trance.He could see DD all dressed up with that white lehenga and long hair and after many days she wear her Duppatta around her necks and not over her chest.GC couldnot takes his eyes off her as she was looking like an angel and his eyes were frequently visiting her top assets as they were not covered and really inviting him.DD could see the changes in GC's face and she was laughing inside thinking that how many days can he restrict himself.At that moment the costume designer came and he was asking DD everything is fine with the costume and he was telling GC that nowadays DD mam is asking for more White coloured costumes and he also adds that she looks her best with the white.GC's face brightened up with a smile and he was looking at DD questioningly

GC:Drashti,why are you asking for white coloured costumes?
DD:someone really close to my heart likes white,she smiles
GC:who is that person,he knows that she is talking about him but want to hear it from her
DD:really u dont know whom i am talking about ?
At this juncture they both were called for their shots.Tum ko paya song from OSM is playing in the BG and the choreographer is teaching them their moves and positions.As the song started they both have to come close and hug,when GC felt DD's mesmerizing fragrance near him and when she hold him around the neck with her hands their bodies were too close and he could feel as if a bunch of flowers hitting him with a force.she rested her head on his shoulders as per the move and when he looked down all he can see is her cleavage and he desperately wants to see what is still behind to surprise him.With all these thoughts in mind he didnt heard the cut said by the director.Other hand DD was fully into GC and she could hear his heartbeat going fast and the warmth she get in his shoulders was just too much to handle and the song at the BG was acting like a catalyst,and for that moment she forgot that they are in a shot and they are just acting in front of the camera.

GC was the one to recover first as he is a person who is always camera conscious and he was too shy to look at the crew.But DD with her bubbly attitude just went back to her seat.she need som touch ups and so she went into her green room and looking at the mirror she could find that her dori has opened and she could not find her assistants too.As she came out to call someone she could find GC coming that way.she liked to tease him

DD:Gurmeet,aap please yahan aayiye!He was not fully out of what happened just before,he was rolling his eyes around and saw that nobody was there and he came near to her.
DD:aap meri madath karoge?
GC:Haan tell me ,what can i do for u?
DD:meri dori kul chuki hein,i cannot find my assistants too,will u pls tie it ?GC was looking at her with a smirk on his face ,he knows he is having rights but why they both havent confessed their feelings for each other.he didnt utter any word ,he just walked inside the room and closed the door.He went close to her,moved the hair front side and he could see the white skin with goosebumps as her body is reacted to his touch.he deliberately tied the dori and he rubbed his fingersover her nape which made her to jerk and she turned front and she was trying to read his face.
GC:Ho gaya,any other help he asked with a teasing voice
DD:u r asking as if u r my full time assistant,she laughed
GC:Achcha so u called me for help and now u r teasing me.ok i am going now.he went out and DD followed him.she called out his name he didnt turned ,so she ran to him and she said she was just kidding.The next shot is the Maang baring scene and both of them know that its not just a scene.the director was explaining the shot and both of them looking at each other with a question on their face.If they try to answer the question then that will be the confession of their love.the scene turned out quite good and GC was thinking why do they use a dupe for breaking the glass,why cant i do it myself and instead of that red colour ,i could have filled her maang with my blood.But DD couldnot judge her feelings right now,eventhough they did it infront of the camera ,she feels they got really close and she didnt feel any oddness while touching him.they are for sure tied in some kind of bandhan.

She knows that GC has started laughing a lot with her nowadays and he is coming out of the shell,he used to be very quite during the early days and now they are so comfy that they can pull their hair or hold their gala and actually they did it and it was captured by their photographer.When they were doing the scene in outhouse she has to cuddle him and she knows his hands and body were in such a position that they were touching all the assets of her body.but she could feel onething happily that her body is no longer hesitant towards him and everything comes out so naturally.

The dialogue where he says its not only for this life ,but for every life that is going to come he needs her hand,she was like flying as both of them started knowing how important they both are to each other.they got applause because their expressions were too good,and they seemed real but they are the ones who knew its not just acting ,those were the words for their life.


so how was it guys,waiting to hear from u all😳


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Posted: 14 years ago
ah....!Finally an update.!! Bahut wait karna pada...But Its worth waiting.Loved it!! Wah venu!!👏
Everything u wrote seemed so perfect!!
And natural too!!😳
So u matched with the present track in the show!!
But itna chota chota updates kyun??
But it was really really good...cute...n what not!!
Loved it!!🤗
Edited by --Shika-- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awwwwwwwwwww Venu that was awesome.......... I m totally mesmerized in Gurti................. Kash.........................😍

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