FF.MAANEET*HEARTBEATS*~Thread 3 - Page 17

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KrishnaRukmini thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
nice, lovely part. loved it.
loved maaneet scene.
update soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesoem update...eally nice
poor maan......and geet she
is just amazing.....lol
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb!..
geet is sooo funny!...
poor maan!...
continue soon!
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Posted: 15 years ago
part 5

Geet: you snore! Stop snoring I can't sleep.
Maan: I don't snore!
Geet: why did your wife told you that?
Maan: I don't have a wife!
Geet: GF?
Maan: I don't have GF! He said angrily! What this girl was thinking? I sleep round before marriage! Oh god! Teenagers this days.
Geet (ok Weeeeeeeeeeee he dosn't have GF or wife. I am happy. What an idiot does he even realise! LOL fool like his bro!)
Geet: then how do you know?
Maan: because I know I don't!
Geet: well you do! Shall I record you!
Maan: no!
Geet: I do have to show you proof. You are not believing me in anyway!
Maan: I don't snore!
Geet: yes you do. Now don't sleep. Ok! Let me sleep in peace.
Geet tries to sleep... After 10 minutes her head lands on maans shoulder. Maan: for god sake! He tries to jerk way! It didn't work! Then he jerks harder... Geets head land on the other side bashing her head! She screams! Waking everyone up!
Maan: shhh... Shhh!
Geet: Ahhh! You pushed me.
Maan: stop sleeping on my shoulder!
Geet was rubbing her head. You could have removed it!
Maan: I don't know anything except pushing.
Geet: ehhhhh! That sounds wrong!
Maan closes his eye in anger.
Maan: shut up!
Geet puts her finger on her lips.
Maan: now look other way!
Geet: ehe ehe ehe!
Maan: what is it? He asks in frustration voice.
Geet: ehe!
Maan: you can talk!
Geet: it's uncomfy!
Maan: do whatever you Want just shut up!
Geet looks at him angrily... Then goes back to her game. She takes her hoddy off. Maan looks way again.
After 3 hours...
Maan woke up in ever hour... Found geet on her computer in different game. She actually didn't bother him at all. That was pretty weird. But he slept peacefully.
After another hour... She was still playing game. He just wondered how could anyone play so much game. It's been 5 hours they were in plane. And she haven't stopped. Her eyesight was probably really bad now.
Maan: geet!
Geet ignores.
Maan: geet!
Geet ignores.
Maan: GEET...
Geet still ignores...
Maan: have you slept yet?
Geet ignores...
Maan: umm!
Geet didn't talk to him at all. He realised it was probably he shouted at her. Maan decides to ignore. He didn't even know her. They only met few hours ago... Some reason he felt weird... Maan wakes up again... Finds no geet... Flight was just about to land. He looks at her seat. Everything is packed. She was all ready to leave. Her passport laid on her seat along with her ticket. He wasn't the type of person who cheeks details of other person... But Some reason he picked her passport up. Geet Handa.
Dob: 20-07-1993
It's November... She wasn't nearly 18. He smiles. Liar!
He leaves the passport and sits up.

Geet walks out of the washroom. All changed. Maan gave her a weird look. She looked perfect teenager! Wearing short above her knee and a loose fitting top with half sleev. Her top didn't cover her stomach. Making her waist charm bracelet visible. It made her look sexy!
Maan: umm!
Geet: move!
Maan looks at her in surprise.
Geet puts her back pack across her chest.
Maan walks in to the washroom...

Bothe didn't talk at all... Soon as the plane landed geet became exited again. She actually was really tied. Maan was sure she will get a jet leg!
Geet rushes out flowed by Maan. He was so embrassed to be with her. Mostly all the young her age boy were staring at her.
Maan: by!
Geet looked back at him once before disappearing in the Croudes. Didn't even bothered to say a goodby!
Maan: thanks!

Geet screams seeing her cousin.... Maan observes her from far... Just to make sure she was safe. She was too young and he felt responsible some weird reason!

Geets cousine started to pull her sorts down to cover her bare leg.

Ridima: what are you wearing?
Geet: what?
Rid: OMG! Dad will kill us!
Geet: uncel wont say anything!
Rid pulls her to the washroom.

Driver: sir! Shall we go!
Maan: yea! Let's go...
Pari calls...

Pari: we have a meeting!
Maan: I will be there in 30 minutes.

Rid forces her to were salwar kamiz. Trying to make her look like a traditional girl.
Geet: what have you done to me?
Rid: perfect.
Geet: ugh! I hate you.
Rid: good.
All drives off.
Soon as geet reached home she was straight to bed.
Rid: you have been playing game!
Geet: ha! I met this guy called maan! He was HOT.
Rid: who isn't HOT to you. So you been observing him.
Geet: yea. In his sleep.
Rid: what?
Geet: Awwwww.... She hums. He is so so so so sexy. And do you know what I called him grandpa!
Rid: what?
Geet: ha! I met him in the mall before I made his bro fool! And basically stole his laptop! But the. He bought me and I lost my heart!
Rid: umm! Do you even know him?
Geet: ha!
Rid: how old is he?
Geet: 26!
Rid: what? He is 10 years senior! You haven't done anything have you?
Geet: what? No! Of course no! Ugh! I only date my age.
Ridz: then how you fell in love with him?
Geet: umm! Idk!
Ridz: he probably have a GF or wife maybe children if he is 26!
Geet: he have nothing I made sure.
Ridzy roles her eyes.
Geet: anyway I will never met him ever again so why we are thinking about him?
Before she could even finish she was off in deep sleep.
Ridzy smiles.



hay you all :D LOVED ALL THE COMMENTS… TY SOOOOO MUCH… PLS DO LEVE ME SOME MORE
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice update...........i read them before u get chance to PM me........😆😆 😆......... sorry i cant wait.............anyway back to update:.... maan and geet were so funny............ she is not 18😲 😲............ i hope geet family is not planning her wedding or anything......... wonder how maan and geet will meet again.....😍
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Posted: 15 years ago
so she is 16 yrs old wow too young it's she so funny Geet i love it pls cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely part wating for the next part
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome......loved maan caring for her.......hope they meet again.......want more geet annoying maan....and maan falling for her........want the same hot romance of season 1
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum update....!!!
maan making sure she is safe...feeling attraction mayyb...!!!!!
i wonder when y meet again...!!!!! i hope soon...!!!!
any chances of AMONISTY...TODAY...!!!! reali want 2 knw wat happening next...!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
hiiii
awesome update
loved it
loved maaneet
geet is only 16
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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