FF|All the Wrong Moves in All the Right Ways I - Page 97

OMg this is fantastic

nice one.finally prashant will b out of premeer life.thnks for pm. do continue soon

Hey grace!=D how are you doing? now ths shouldnt be a shock for you okay i am not really irregular with my comments! 😆 Anyways coming to the update, it was awsommee dear! it was funny how their relation was disclosed by a three year old kid! lets say different! 😆 Bedroom scene was my all the time favorite! i somehow love reading such consoling scenes! their helplesness and pain was so evident inwit and i loved how she broke into his arms, releasing all her pain she was trying to hold back! good job!now that the truth is out, i cant wait to read about prem heers married life! 😃 even though youve given us a taste of it in pee loun, its just that i am more eager about reading the married life of these premeer!weird i know! lol! and dont you dare end ths ff any soon!😆 i wanna see whats twists u bring later on after they are married!waiting for the next installment! 😃 Takecare dear!

I just read the last two chapters... And i must say... Perfect... It looks like Prashant is finally going to be out of the picture, Sanjana is actually good. And Teji finally knows what kind of person Prashant is. PREM... MY oh My... PREM... I loved the way he stood up and said that he loves HEER!@!! Keep up the good work. C annot wait to read the nxt chapter.

its really awesome update plz plz update soon

OMG Grace. 😲

Seriously, Rishi exposing Prem and Heer's relationship was the best thing ever. Children don't lie what they see and I am so glad he exposed them 😆.

Ohh come on grace plsss update soon can't wait to read he next part you have just stopped at suh a great cliff hanger I would die of eagerness if it is like this and wat abt pee loon you haven't updated for like ages plllllssss update boh of them I beg you my dear atleast update this na

Originally posted by: Xxcoolchick1xX

Awsome!!!
Luved the update.
Yes... u did shock me about Sanju.
Thnks 2 her Prashant can get lost...hopefully.
Update soon nd thnx 4 the pm.

Hehe...yes Sanju was my hidden gray character...she wasn't totally bad 😛 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: -fsn-

wow u updated yayyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy love u grace

Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: brainychild92

SANJU!! omg she's good:D:D omggg!!!!!i'm so excited.. but i have to wait for next week!!! how mean..

cant wait for the enxt aprt.. PLEASE MAKE IT LONG!

continue SOON!!!

Well, maybe not too long 😉 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: Ayesha103

I luuuuv this ff, soooo sorry I harrrdly comment ill try my best to comment now :) ammmazinnng fantastic ff!!!:D keeep up the wonderful work xxx thanks for the pm :)x

It's cool totally understand. Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: -Kali-

Did I ever mention to you how I stop doing all my hw and start reading your updates whenever I get your pm! It crazy woman. It's like I can never get enough of your FF and SS. And then again, I never comment on time so sorry for that.

But I hate this cliffhanger....like you better update the next part soon or else I am gonna be so lost think of Premeer while doing my Biology work.

It was an awesome update and I can't wait till Prem kich Prashant's butt out of that house. Hopefully dear old Balraj will understand and Daljeet will let go of the Juneja bros. And this Sanjana better do the right thing or else me and her are gonna have a cat fight.!

PLease please please update soon..............! Don'y be me and update after months😆

Love ya!!

~Kali~

Kali! haha...yes I am still waiting for you updates...when will we get some? I have that habit too when I check my e-mail and see I have all these PMs with fics being updated...I pause and read them before I can concentrate on my HW, paper, project, etc. And I won't make you wait a month for the next update 😛 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: sweet_gurl93

Heyy

OMG great part, soo much happened, and finally the truth is out

im glad that sanjana is on the good side now

lol cant wait for more

do continue soon

Maheen xx

Yes, I warned you guys it was a jammed-action-pack filled secrets type of chapter 😆 I guess more maha episode from the TV serials but I actually show more unlike some of the maha's I've seen run on TV 😆 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: -Nitya-

woooooaaaaaaaahhhh.😳 so much happened in one chapter!

Sanjana is good! I love her now!😆
YES! that little jerk face(Prashant) deserved nothing but this! and his jerk of a father too! ^_^

Wait..was Heer at the dining table while all this happened? I can't remember now.😆 Why didn't she interfere?

and I totally lost my train of thought, so I'll have to end my comment here. ):
this is my fav chapter in the entire FF! so much yelling, I LOVE!😆
-Nitya

p.s. An early update would be much appreciated.😃

Hehe...yeah Heer was there...I was so busy writing other people's dialogues and reactions I kind of forgot about her...haha...it's hard to describe something with so many people are suppose to be present 😆...wish I could have directed some actors and made a video...I could have put in the whoosh whoosh whoosh and zooming effects and use the Kesh Desh background scores 😛 Anyways, thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: princess5341

woah

awesome update

luving rishi rite now

sanjana's good? -didn't see that one coming

update soon: )

Yes, love little kids they say the darnest things! Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: anuu2010

wow awesome too good part grace

sanjana is good is it true?

i loved this part

its interesting

thanks for pm

update soon

Sanjana too good to be true? I've always thought of her as a gray character. Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: sweta2005

awesomeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggg for next asap.

Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: shahrukh_divya

awsum update yar...!!! hope nw evrythin is out plz....cnt c much of torture to prem n heer...!!!

THX FOR DA PM..!!

Don't worry...no more torture 😛 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: sadhz

OMG.......shockin part...awesome.......rishi luv u for that.........he told evrerythin........another shock sanjana is good OMGGGGGGG.......😲.....now wt wil happen..........plz plz update sooooooooooooooooon

Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: crystall

The update was full of surprises !

First wedding , then Premeers truth , then doc. statement , then sanjana !

I hope truth comes out soon !

Plzz update soon !

The truth will be revealed 😉 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: shivangi2092

superbbbb!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! update grace!

wow! Prashant's gonna be thrown out of the house!!

yipppppppppeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!

Party Time!!!!!!!!!🥳

can't wait to read more plzzzzzzzz update asap!

Yes, party time indeed! 🥳 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: sharmeeli

first of all thanks for the PM and the update😃

i am seeing this update as a EID gift; thank you very much🤗 and before I forget; Eid Mubarak to everyone🤗

you are very zalim.... i couldn't sleep anymore i was thinking of how it would continue.... now I am going to think 24 hours... what will sanju do??????????????😲😛 I'm glad she is now on the good sight

And plzzzzzzzzz let teji slap prashant.... i really would enjoy that😍😛 i'm sure the others would like that to😛😛😛

i really liked prem courage; he wasn't afraid to tell everybody about his feeling; thanks to rishi dear🤗

give rishi a big hug from me🤗😛

yaaar pllzzzzz continue soon, can't wait 😍😍😍

Eid Mubarak to you too! Teji slapping Prashant...hehe...thanks for the idea...well include 😉 And I totally love Rishi too...I like to write little kid dialogues 😆 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: maryaa8688

omg what an update grace..loved it..so in next part prashant will b out of premeer's life yappieee..n then premeer's marriage n ahem ahem (not to mention)☺️..plz plz plz dont make us wait.update soon..pretty plzz...

So naughty you are 😆 Already asking for ahem ahem so soon? In do time...you won't have to wait too long but I have to set up the other story lines...can't forget the rest of the family and their issues. MEET fans would kill me after I've already promised them a story line for MEET 😕 😆 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: mazkachazka

wooowww...awesome update..dear...my finger's are still trembling at the way the suspense cleared up one by one.."have no words"....the intensity was so good ...loved how rishi came in handy..and prem's "no,i love her"..was the dialogue of the century!!...hopefully sanjana was all innocent in front of prashant and he gets the shock of her life when she turns out to be on the other side>>!!..and the dr...love him for breaking the news at the right time!!he saved my day,seriously,,,plz update soon...now cant wait any more..!!

Yes, so much happened in this one chapter...I wasn't quiet sure how I was going to handle this whole confrontation and decided I'll use Rishi...what a prefect way to have something so serious be revealed? Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: moon_mine

balraj is all right!!!!!

hope heer n prem gets the support of teji nw!!!!!

n i dunno blv sanjana......i thnk she s tryng to fool the people n make prashant grt in frnt of evryone!!!!!

bt really watng fr the nxt update.........

pls update asap!!!!!

About Sanjana you will have to see 😛 😉 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: pwincess1

OMg this is fantastic

superb

I felt sorry for premeer at the start

it was so sad

i loved the way heer said to Teji how much she loves Prem

why did you leave it there?

i hate cliffhangers!

i want more

plz update quckly

Haha...cause I'm an evil person 😈...cliffhangers are fun!
Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: sherma

nice one.finally prashant will b out of premeer life.thnks for pm. do continue soon

Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: --Mehak--

Hey grace!=D how are you doing? now ths shouldnt be a shock for you okay i am not really irregular with my comments! 😆 Anyways coming to the update, it was awsommee dear! it was funny how their relation was disclosed by a three year old kid! lets say different! 😆 Bedroom scene was my all the time favorite! i somehow love reading such consoling scenes! their helplesness and pain was so evident inwit and i loved how she broke into his arms, releasing all her pain she was trying to hold back! good job!now that the truth is out, i cant wait to read about prem heers married life! 😃 even though youve given us a taste of it in pee loun, its just that i am more eager about reading the married life of these premeer!weird i know! lol! and dont you dare end ths ff any soon!😆 i wanna see whats twists u bring later on after they are married!waiting for the next installment! 😃 Takecare dear!

Mehak! Don't worry this won't be ending anytime soon I have some more story lines to cover. I'm afraid married life of Prem and Heer will be kinda boring 😛 😆...its the usual little things and stuff nothing too crazy...well, unless I come up with some strange idea. Either way I'll continue with romance and the light comedy 😉 Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: punjabi0926

I just read the last two chapters... And i must say... Perfect... It looks like Prashant is finally going to be out of the picture, Sanjana is actually good. And Teji finally knows what kind of person Prashant is. PREM... MY oh My... PREM... I loved the way he stood up and said that he loves HEER!@!! Keep up the good work. Cannot wait to read the nxt chapter.

Yes Prem's confession in front of the entire family...with everything he and Heer had to go through the poor boy was at his breaking point...no need to hide anything further...it was time the truth came out. Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: blufate.14

hey...look who is here......a silent reader...😃
i love ur FF......and that u have left it at a cliffhanger...i want u to update real soon....atleast for ur silent reader who became noisy now..😆
and pls do send me PMs..😃

Ooooo, silent reader! Welcome! ⭐️ Thanks for taking the time to comment. I'll see what I can do about the updating sooner part. I've added you to the PM list. 😃

Originally posted by: redrose10

its really awesome update plz plz update soon

Silent reader? I don't believe I've seen you around 😛 Welcome! ⭐️ Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: Aymee

OMG Grace. 😲

Seriously, Rishi exposing Prem and Heer's relationship was the best thing ever. Children don't lie what they see and I am so glad he exposed them 😆.

I am glad Balraaj is fine. I was sad at first that he only had 6 months to live but I am glad that the doctor called and said he was fine.

I really do hope Sanjana do expose Prashant and his family lies. She will be my favorite character from this story if she does 😃.

Grace, thank you for updating. I wish I could scream right now but I can't 😉. Looking forward to your next update.

Yes, children are wonderfully insightful...they see things with such innocence and purity. They also say the darnest things and do the strangest/funniest things. Haha...everyone is loving Sanju now 😆
Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃

Originally posted by: aaminaman

Ohh come on grace plsss update soon can't wait to read he next part you have just stopped at suh a great cliff hanger I would die of eagerness if it is like this and wat abt pee loon you haven't updated for like ages plllllssss update boh of them I beg you my dear atleast update this na

I'll see what I can do about the update...some things have come up that may effect my updating ability. Yes, I know I haven't updated Pee Loon for awhile now...I'm not sure if I'll be able to update it by this weekend. We will see. Thanks for taking the time to comment dear! 😃