New FF: New York times with Maan and Geet

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pushpi

@pushpi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#851

I'm with you sister :-) You're on the right track. Will write more soon

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Muskan

@muskanp

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Posted: 15 years ago

#852

excellent....

i love the way u get their thought in betweem..every time...

👏👏👏👏👏

i like se said will u call me...how sweetly u r taking them express themself...

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Water

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Posted: 15 years ago

#853

I have edited my reserved comment.

Thanks.

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aarthi

@Aarthi_01

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Posted: 15 years ago

#854

awesome update...hope it is not acting done by Geet's family to get her back...Dadima is going to do the detective work... i love dadi in tat role...

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568124

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Posted: 15 years ago

#855

Originally posted by: aarmanshilpa
I have edited my reserved comment.
Thanks.

R

Hello there

I read your comment. Thank you so much for the long and lovely analysis. You always hit the nail in the head.

I'm very excited to write the upcoming parts. Only the story line is intact. I have exhausted all stand by scenes and now everything is going to be from scratch in terms of the writing for a part.

By the way, I was very tempted to post from my new Mac, and hence getting back to your comment. Will post more later.

Thanks

Hasini

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568124

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Posted: 15 years ago

#856

Originally posted by: aarthirajendran
awesome update...hope it is not acting done by Geet's family to get her back...Dadima is going to do the detective work... i love dadi in tat role...

Thanks for your comment. You have to wait to see the full picture but for now I really dont mind giving out that geet's family acting to get her back is cliche. I will try my best to keep away from such cliches' and its definitely not it.

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Water

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Posted: 15 years ago

#857

Originally posted by: Hasini67

Hello there

I read your comment. Thank you so much for the long and lovely analysis. You always hit the nail in the head.

I'm very excited to write the upcoming parts. Only the story line is intact. I have exhausted all stand by scenes and now everything is going to be from scratch in terms of the writing for a part.

By the way, I was very tempted to post from my new Mac, and hence getting back to your comment. Will post more later.

Thanks

Hasini

Congrats on the Mac.

I am a bit disappointed at my present situation.

Your updates r too fast for me to comment. (Can you believe it, I have no time). You updated the last part before I commented about Geet's decision on leaving to SF. Now the storyline has a twist and she is in India.

Well, I think I will still comment the way I wanted to comment in regards to Geet's decision on leaving to SF. I will pretend that she did not go to India

It will be in a few days though.

Love

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pop77

@pop77

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Posted: 15 years ago

#858

Nice part..She still wants to go away from him..I hope Geet not have a any trouble when she reach home..
I think Maan can take about her..

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blueopal

@blueopal

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#859

wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! great update dear........................ maan really surprise me too .....................he take care of geet very well n it was awesome............................very well written👏.................i loved it..................looking fwd...................

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Escapist

@Escapist

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Posted: 15 years ago

#860

Hey I just read the parts from where I had left due to some reasons today
and must say they are remarkable !

And I loved all the parts the way you described each and everything was beautiful !
I loved it....👏
Maan and Geet's relation and even Meera and Yash...brilliantly chalked out !!
Lets see what happens here in Delhi now!
Also loved the detective nature of Dadima :) So sweet of her !!
waiting for the next part :)

Edited by -shabnoor- - 15 years ago