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Hey ash,

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Chapter 27a


After their love making, Maan picked Geet up and took her into wash room. She hadn't eaten anything after breakfast yesterday and felt really weak. Maan helped her bath and then, wrapped her in a big towel and took her back to bedroom.


He placed her on bed and got clothes for her. He helped her into the red sari.


''Did you eat yesterday?'' He asked looking at her pale face. He was getting angry at himself. He should have controlled himself.


Geet looked up at him and then confessed, ''I had breakfast.''


''Geet, why you act so childish sometimes. If you were hungry or you were not feeling well,then you should have told me.''


Maan looked at geet who was silently sitting on the bed. Looking at the bed. He sighed and sat beside her on the bed. He held her hand and with his other hand he touched her chin and raised her face toward him.


''relax geet, why are you so formal? We are not strangers. If you don't like anything I say or do, then tell me.'' He hugged her tenderly. Geet hugged him back and then thought about all what had happened. ''I love you, Maan.''


She waited for him to say something and then, he hugged her more tightly and said, ''Love you more.''


Geet suddenly felt euphoric. She tried to keep the big grin off her face but her lips were not under her commands.

Thank god, there was a knock on the door and maan was distracted. She did not want him to look at her goofy grin. Then, dev asking them to open the door. Geet could hear pooja and fari's voices as well.

Maan pulled on a shirt and opened the door. Dev gave Maan a huge naughty grin. ''Good morning bro, oops my mistake, its no longer morning. Dev peeked around maan and saw geet sitting on the bed.


All of them barged inside the room. Fari came at the end carrying a huge breakfast tray. She put it on the table.


Maan went to the washroom.


Pooja looking around at the tangled sheets while dev was looking questioningly at the torn sari. Geet whole face turned bright red, she quickly got off the bed and picked up her sari and put it away.

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author's note: sorry guys but i actually kinda fainted yesterday, i had a major test yesterday and i was awake for 2 days and forgot to eat as well.i wrote a bit of my feelings in the story but ofcourse geet's reason was different. so i could not post the part.
i am posting half part now and i will do rest later but don't worry i have eid holidays so i will be updating much more.


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Posted: 15 years ago
hope u are well soon!!!! don't stress too much.. please take care of ur self....
thnkz for the update though....

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