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Posted: 15 years ago
Rahul zindabaad! Rahul Garewal ki jai ho! By God! Dill toh kar raha hain ki abhi usse jaa ke kiss kar doon! Thank you very much for putting some common sense into Armaan's head! He needed it! Oye hoye! Kya romantic scene yaar! That was... excellent. I had butterflies in my stomach while reading this! Like, seriously! But why did you stop here? Not fair! And mujhe PM kyun nahin kiya?
Edited by Medzi_ARian... - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
ARGH. you stopped at the WRONG point. -.-
nonetheless YAY!!!!!!!! :)

Loved it,
Kriya <33
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Posted: 15 years ago
add me to ur pm list plz......................
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey u didnt update it today
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Posted: 15 years ago

hi,sorry for let comment i was out of town

thanx for the pm 😊 i've read ur ff from start 6-7 parts but after that i couldn't found this i really want to read more but .again thanx for the pm

i'llcomment after reading all parts
tc
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Posted: 15 years ago

||- I'll be The One: Part 31. -|

"I guess I've to stay up all night now. Its like you have sworn NOT to speak." Armaan pulled up his chins.

The velocity of the rains had increased to ferocity now. The rain drops hitting the ground still created beautiful sounds in the silent night.

Armaan somehow dint let the evilish rain touch his Riddhima. Even though he might catch a terrible fever, Riddhima will be fine. Why shouldn't Riddhima be fine? She was his Riddhima ;) his life, breathe, heart everything!

Also, Riddhima had brought Armaan's favorite entertainment channel along, her nervousness. Armaan was amused eternally. She looked heavenly when scared! Armaan smirked, though his passionate look was still stuck to Riddhima's frozen face.

"Listen to me Armaan." Riddhima whispered, finally!

"Umm, I'm trying to." Armaan pretended to clear his ear drums, then he looked at Riddhima, "Only if you say something ma'am." He smirked.

"Shut up, Jerk!" Riddhima who was highly offended, hit him lightly. She scowled and her chin rose by a fraction.

"That's all you have to say?" Armaan raised his eyebrows. He loved these conversations with her, she was no more frozen or scared and he loved it!

The scowl soon turned into a nervous face. She looked at him as if 1000 volts thunderbolts was hitting her body constantly.

"Umm, Nani must be waiting for me." Riddhima's lowest tone spoke, yet heard by the listener.

She didn't say it! She just dint. The everlasting gaze finally ended with a disappointment. The grip loosened itself. Riddhima found Armaan letting her go! She was shocked.

What did she do? Did she hurt him again? Was he leaving?

"I'm sorry. I guess I've to wait, forever!" Armaan gave her one heart-breaking look with his blue evident eyes.

Riddhima just dint know what to speak. She snapped her jammed brains to think of something! Her eyes could see him going away, her heart told her 'it was now or never'.

What could she do? Either this side or that side.

Suddenly everything that happened from the last 5 months was flashing back inside her. Armaan was the kind of guy who changes girlfriend like his shirts. She dint know if Shashank & her family would accept him. What would she tell her friends? What would she tell her Nani?

On the other hand, Armaan was the guy she had always wished for. He was a literal angel, who had come down to earth for her! All his small, wordless acts of care that made her love him more and more! All the naughty gestures that set her heart racing. She somewhere knew he HAD TO BE the one. She was 'herself' with him, and she loved it!

Riddhima's eyes suddenly flickered all around, and finally found his body. He was at the gate, trying to open the car. Her jammed, slow brains made a kick start, she found her body stuck to the wall. Time had created distances between them, her brain commanded her to reduce them.

Her legs began walking. Riddhima could feel the rain drops hitting her body, taking Armaan's warmth away. She could feel her drenched wet clothes and hair, she dint care!

The roads were unusually cold and silent today. Her hands spread out in the atmosphere and soon found it. Riddhima caught Armaan's arms. Armaan was initially shocked, looked at Riddhima.

On seeing the amount of love and affection in her eyes, he smiled, he knew it was time now.

Riddhima pulled Armaan into a hug. Armaan smiled huge, his fallen face immediately glowed like a dazzling star.

Riddhima closed her eyes, absorbing the warmth of his body.

"I love you." She finally spoke out.

Armaan's heart literally began dancing, his brain had already thrown a party, he looked up at the sky and thanked the almightly.

"Je t'aime" He whispered back in the most passionate & loved filled tone ever, still hugging her.

"What the hell does that mean?" Riddhima scowled, separating from him. Armaan chuckled at her priceless expressions. Suddenly, he leaned on her, removing the strand of hair near her ears.


"Find out yourself." He gave her the cutest wink, whispering in the most passionate tone. Riddhima froze again, Armaan placed a silent kiss on her forehead.

Thus, another night ended, perhaps in the most beautiful manner possible. All the angels in the seventh heaven jumped in glee, Riddhima-Armaan were finally one.

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Zara si dil mein de jagah tu
Zara sa apna le bana
Zara sa khawbon mein saja tu
Zara sa yaadhon mein basa

Mein chahun tujhko
Meri jaan bepanah
Fida hoon tujhpe
Meri jaan bepanah


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Posted: 15 years ago
||-Note-||

Hey guys,
I might not update for sometime now. Reason is my exams and preparations and bleh bleh...stuffs 😃 I'll be back with rocking updates after my exams 😉
I somehow managed to pull up this update, as I found it necessary to put this one for you all.
I feel its not up to the mark, but I'm just hoping you like it.

Thank you all!
And please pray for my exams. I need it. 😆

Take care!

Debkanya
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey its my first time i m commenting......u write very nice...u r an awesome writer......i liked ur ff very much.and this part was very beautiful......and its ok take ur time and update whenever u want.......😛











Edited by soniaraheja - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely part
finally madam said yes 😆
hope shanky doesnt creat problems
ALL THE BEST 4 THE EXAM😃
Edited by cute.arsh - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dis is a note frm debkanya..i gt it frm dmg blog so i postd it here..

Hey friends,
Firstly, thank you so much for the wonderful comments! >:D< >:D< Its just so amazing to read all the nice nice comments :) Love you all alot! >:D<
But I'm afraid I'll have to put a pause to the updates now. I'm really not sure right now, but I think I might not put new updates for sometime. Reason? Well, I've some tasks to get done like exams and stuffs ;) :D
I'll TRY to resume it after my exams are done, again not sure!! I'm really sorry. :)

I'll be greatfull if someone puts this notice on the I-F thread as my account is somewhat freezed :P I can't put it there myself :)

Guys, please pray for me!! I need it badly for my exams :D lol :D

Don't worry, I'll be back sooon B-) >:D< And yes, I'll be reading all your updates, but might not comment regularly kay :) So dont think I'm not reading it :D

With loads of muahs,
Debkanya :) <3 <3

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