STORY - Aakhri Chunauti Last Part - by Visrom

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visrom

@visrom

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Posted: 15 years ago

#131

See, everything can't be picture perfect. So I decided to add a mishap or two and killed off Anil.

About ACP - it was FW's idea to make HD an ex-CID officer-turned criminal. So I thought of adding a different angle to it. Some of you might have liked it, some might not. 😊

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neelambari

@Chiinnu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#132

forget to comment...now it is so late, i guess....anyway, sorry for that...
Well written, lovely story...loved all moments and was thrilling... 👏

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Ravi

@Jurassic_Shark

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Posted: 15 years ago

#133

Just finished reading it. I think it's well-written and properly structured! I especially liked the SMS message and the "interview", nice development of suspense and a proper closure to the AC series. Great story! 👏

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somu_05

@somu_05

Navigator

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Posted: 15 years ago

#134

Wow... The "main abhi " part... Just WOW..!! and god My heart was like DHAK DHAK DHAK when Chintu says Sr Insp Abhijeet...!!! I was expecting something OUCHY...!! Wheww. So relieved Viz....!

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kittu0701

@kittu0701

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#135

its fantabulous, u covered all the missing links of ac finale very nicely. i really enjoyed reading it, the details are done so minutely that i can visualise it in front of my eyes.

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blahblahs

@blahblahs

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Posted: 15 years ago

#136

plz make someone get married...how abt. abhi and tarika?

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#137

wow 24 people have read your story!! biggest likes ever!! Your story was awesome visrom!!! U have matured more and more with your stories!! keep it up!! and sorry for late reply!!👏😊😃⭐️

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#138

Originally posted by: blahblahs
plz make someone get married...how abt. abhi and tarika?

I am lack the talent to write romantic stories around our cops. Sorry....

Edited by visrom - 15 years ago

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Suhaani/Drilabh (CID/MJHT)

@Drilabh_Suhaani

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Posted: 15 years ago

#139

Arre yaar y offended!! its a compliment!! anyway ure story was far superior!! and of course all d elements of cid are there in ure story!! lolz

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visrom

@visrom

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#140

Originally posted by: drilabh
Arre yaar y offended!! its a compliment!! anyway ure story was far superior!! and of course all d elements of cid are there in ure story!! lolz

No, I am not offended at all sweetie....just kidding. 😉