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Posted: 15 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: -Kanky-

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Oh, man! This is one hellova OS - the blow you off kind. ⭐️ Okay, every other thing seems the same to me, but . . . the way it blows me off is a different issue all the time. 😉

It amazes me how people pen down such remarkable stories, without having been touched by any such miserable feeling. I find myself in bits and pieces in everything I write, and hence I believe myself to be no author. And you, umm - are amazing! Like, really! It was an absolute treat reading this OS and the way you molded out a story of your own and yet kept the Anuraag-Taani essence intact is marvelous. Way to go, friend! 😳

Thank you very much for posting this, a fantastic read! 👏


-Kankshita



OMG Kankz! ..... Such a huge comment!! ..... 😲
I'm super happy!! ..... 😆 You are dead right about the not being touched by any miserable feelings thing! .... I love TaAnu.... and this is just a dedication to them and the wonderful story line! ... Thank you for this awesome comment, it made my day!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-



OMG Kankz! ..... Such a huge comment!! ..... 😲
I'm super happy!! ..... 😆 You are dead right about the not being touched by any miserable feelings thing! .... I love TaAnu.... and this is just a dedication to them and the wonderful story line! ... Thank you for this awesome comment, it made my day!



You're always welcome, gal. 😃 Keep writing!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: -Daania-

Sharmila 🤗

Gosh, this is the first OS from your side that I'm reading and you've already made me into a fan of yours.
This piece was so beautfiully written! Absolutely heart wrenching! The way you described all those moments between them and how she misses it all. =(( I really had tears in my eyes.
And the last line was so saddening yet so beautiful, kind of like the gist of the OS was held in that one line.
Beautifully written Sharmila! All the emotions were very well described.
Bravo!
Love
Daania


Hiya Daania ,

I keep seeing your comments in Kanky's thread..... I thought I'd PM u for this one! ...
And thank you so much for such a beautiful comment! .... I'm elated! 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: -Nitya-

wooaahh! that was so heart wrenching! The last line basically said it all, again.

Your descriptions are amazing! How she was(by her, I'm talking about Taani..because it did seem like you had her in mind while writing) thinking about their times and memories, how everything reminds her of him. amazing!

I don't see alot of people writing tragic stories(which is sad really) so it was really nice to see this! do write more!

-nitya
oh and thanks for the PM!


Thankz a lot for this amazing comment Nitz!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: -Sharmila-


Hiya Sindhu,

Obviously you'll have an idea dear! ... The way I keep bugging you about Harshad.... U would definitely have an idea !!!😉😆

Thanks alot for such an amazingcomment! ..... I'm over whelmed!😳

LOL! That's true! 😛 There were days when I used to rant about Arjun and you about Harshad!! 😆

Seeing your reaction, I'm elated! 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gosh, I love this one yaar!!

This is such a heart-wrenching OS!! I can't really control my emotions for this right now. ..

The way Taani gave away all her life, love and happiness for Onu is way too sacrificing to describe. Its completely selfless and magical to see and read as well..

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful piece for us to read. . .

God Bless you!

Love,

Nidhi. =)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Edited, Page 1... FIRST comment!!!!! :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: -Aish-

Res!


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Oh My Goshers!!!!! That was such a heart warming and beautiful OS. 😊

Seriously yaar, are you sure this came after seeing Anurag and Taani in Tere Liye ? 😲(WOW! I never knew that show had so many feelings! 😆) I mean, the feelings seemed like they jumped straight out from your heart. Hats off to that, didi! (Dekha, aaj aapko DIDI bula diya! Tomorrow, what?!)

Anyway, it was a wonderful OS. I utterly and thoroughly LOVED it. I just have one tiny problem, though. The fact that you are studying last moment bothers me. PLEASE use your preparatory holidays effectively. I know you're a genius, but still! Alright? 😕 😳

Love ya loads,
(Missing you Di),
Aishwarya


Thank you loads Aish... Of course it came from Tere Liye only.... Its an Amazing show! ... Didi thak thik hai... kal Aunty ya phir aur kuch mata bolna! ... 😛 😆
Err... I know I should study from now on... but I'm damn lazy! 😕 .... Lekin tum keh rahi ho.. toh.... will pakka try study from now on... I miss talking to you too Behena! ....
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Posted: 15 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: --Angel.Nidhi

Gosh, I love this one yaar!!

This is such a heart-wrenching OS!! I can't really control my emotions for this right now. ..

The way Taani gave away all her life, love and happiness for Onu is way too sacrificing to describe. Its completely selfless and magical to see and read as well..

Thank you so much for writing such a wonderful piece for us to read. . .

God Bless you!

Love,

Nidhi. =)


Thank you for such a wonderful comment Nidzi...
Yeah totally agree wid you what Taani did for Anurag is not describe-able! I just wrote about it in my own way! .... 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
#30
Hey peeps!


Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments on my previous OS! .... The next one is gonna be totally different! .... Its nothing heart-wrenching like the first one! ... Its gonna be a simple one with no drama and no masala whatsoever! ... Its all about a young girl...hoping that and most of you will be able to connect her... Its what happens in most households across the country!....
So, Happy reading... And please do comment and you are always welcome to criticize!!

Sharmila

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