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Posted: 15 years ago
Lobed both parts and want to read more as I'm hooked so sameera was pretending to be his lover as she is in live with some guy for 5 years interesting but looks like there is more to it ao yeh waiting for you to reveal and so geet is in live with maan Aww so sweet and love the character sketch as you brought one of my fav old jodi prem and mukti so happy about that and yeh just update asap as I want to read more 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
In whatever you do,please don't hurt Geet
Thanks
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice plz update now not to night.plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Posted: 15 years ago
well nice update.. i think maan will know about disco before geet express her love.. and pls don't do anything beetween maan and sameera..
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Posted: 15 years ago
awww loved both parts....thank u so much! i hope geet does confess but i hope maan also understands her! plz dont make maan break geet's heart! i hope he gets to kno tht it was geet at the dicso b4 she confesses to him so tht he wont mistake her or anything! and thank god maan and sameera are just friends....but i didnt really understand their convo....is she pregnant with his baby or something? i really hope not!! and who is tht other guy tht sameera was talking abt?

PLZ update soon.....im eagerly waiting to see wat happens next!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
7 months and maan never comes to know that was geet whom ....... at disco.............. and sameera story is bit confused ...................... hope next part will be clear the their emotion and confess
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Posted: 15 years ago
NO converation between geet n maan
upate soon i awaiting it nice dear!!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
that was really nice part
continue soon
thanks dear for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
really awesome update....it was great update...
loved it....do keep writing
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 11 a

So, a card was bought and Iqra whose writing was really elegant wrote birthday wish and Geet's confession on it. Then, the time and place was debated and finally, it was decided that Geet will put card along with gift in Maan's room tomorrow in afternoon. Then, she will get ready for the party early and wait for Maan's reply. Fari said she will call Geet around 10 to ask for update and then, tell others. They promised Geet they will be at the party at 11.

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Next day

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Maan was getting ready for office when there was a knock at the door. Maan opened the door lock, it was Vishal(servant). Sir, dadima is calling you in her room.

Maan went to her room. He was surprised to find everyone except Geet and Dev sitting in the room. Dadi ma was on lying on her bed with her shoulder propped against the headboard. Dad was holding her hand and saying something to her. When raj saw him, he became quiet. Dadi ma asked Maan to come and sit beside her on the other side of the bed.

Maan: what happened dadi ma? Are you ok?

Dadima didn't reply.

Raj: Maan, have you seen the newspapers today? Without waiting for his response, he picked some sitting on the bedside table and handed over them to Maan.

Maan quietly looked at the headlines

MYSTERY BOYFRIEND REVEALED.

TOP MODEL DATING KHAURAN HEIR.

Are wedding bell ringing for Sameera Gupta etc.

Under all the headlines was a photograph of Maan and Sameera entering the Hotel ***** where the birthday party of a top businessman was taking place.

He put the newspaper away and looked questioningly at Dad.

Raj: are you serious about her? If you want to marry her then, at least you should have told us Maan. Do you have any idea how embarrassing it is to learn about our own son through gossip. Yesterday, you turned up at function with her and remained with her the whole time. What do you have to say for yourself?

Maan: Nothing.

Raj: nothing? What do you mean nothing, yo...he was about to say something further, when Darji said, Raj. Dad fell silent.

Darji: Maan we just want to know that do you plan to marry her? We are your elders, we have at least the right to know.

Maan: i don't want to hurt anyone darji and of course, i respect you all and you have the right to know about me, what i object to is this ceremonial summoning, i am not a 10 year old and please don't treat me like a child.

Maan: no, i am not going to marry her because i have already asked and she refused. She is my best friend and as important to me as my family.

Dadi ma: Maan, can i ask you something?

Maan: you don't have to ask dadi ma. He hugged her. It broke his heart to see her looking so worried.

Dadima: get married maan. I really want to see you married before i die. Choose any girl but make it official Maan.

Maan sighed. I am really busy right now dadi ma, i am going to take dad's place and that will consume all my time.

Dadima: okay, then get engaged.

Maan: ok, then choose the girl you like and just tell me the time and place, i will be there.

Dadi ma: Promise?

Maan: Promise.

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Geet pulled her door open and peeked out, no one was in the gallery, she knew Maan was in Maama's room. She went inside his room and put the card, rose and gift on the bed. Then, said a quick prayer to ask Allah ji for help.

She opened his room door and was about to go outside when she heard Maan's voice.

She quickly closed the door and looked wildly around for a place to hide. She saw balcony door and quickly moved there. She closed the balcony door. The window was open, she could hear everything.

She heard Maan coming in the room followed by others.

Maan: this is absurd. Geet is so young. How can dadima even think about it?

Simran: she is going to be 17 today and anyway, we are just asking for engagement.

Maan replied: yeah and wedding, next year.

Roshini: calm down Maan, you promised, geet didn't. If she refuses, then there will be no wedding.

Maan: dadima will manipulate her.

Simran looked at the card with a single white rose near it. There was a gift beside it as well.

She had seen the gift in geet room. Roshini and Maan were still arguing. She opened the card and read it. She was quite shocked for some minutes but then, suddenly grinned. She said, i don't think Geet will say no.

They looked at her. She handed the card to them. Both read the card same time. Maan looked really bewildered while Roshini thoughtful.

Simran winked at her, Roshini winked back.

Simran: so, now what?

Maan: maybe this is a prank.

Simran: i don't think that it is a prank.

Maan angrily threw the card at the bed and looked at them. I have nothing to do with it. I don't know how she even thought it.

Roshini: nobody is blaming you Maan but i don't understand why you are so angry? Do you still dislike her, i thought you two have become friends.

Maan: i don't dislike her, i i just.... i am 8 year older than her.

Simran: your dad is 7 year older than me. It did not create any problems.

Maan: you were 25 years old while she is only 17.

Roshini and Simran remained silent.

Roshini: so, what is your decision?

Maan said angrily, i promised didn't i? And stormed out of the room.

Authors note: i will update later today.

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