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Hello wonderful people,😛

Here is the next update...!!!!! I just hope you like it.....!!!!!!!!!
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Part 85

He then scribbled at the end, "missing out something??????????" Geet re read the whole thing and realized everything in the list was connected to her and the baby.

She took the pen and wrote below: "You are everything and the only thing, I want, Maan! And nothing else matters to me !!!!!!!!!!"

She walked into the kitchen. She silently stood at the door and observed him work. The blender was on. She walked upto him and held him from behind. He carefully made her sit on the kitchen counter. She kissed him and he kissed her back. They pulled away to catch some breath but geet did not give maan enough time. She pulled him back again into a kiss and he enjoyed every minute of it. She clenched his waist and pulled him closer, while he ran his hand through her hair and pulled her head back to give him more access. They continued their kissing. He stopped and said, "drink the milkshake, honey. You will need lot of energy if you have to stay with your husband".

Saying so, he held out the glass with banana milkshake. She drank a little and asked him to take a few sips. He licked her lips and grinned. She completed the milkshake and he then gave her some nuts and dry fruits. She hesitated, but maan did not let her go. She sat there staring at the bowl and maan had to feed her. After which they went for a long walk.

Geet sat on the swing in the lawn for sometime and Maan went into the outhouse to get his phone. But got a call and sat in the living room, to answer it. Vicky and Daadi had come back to the mansion and he looked at geet. He smiled and gestured his daadi to go in. He walked towards her and screamed from a distance, "Namaste Geet ji, here we meet again. Kaise hai aap?"

"Namaste Vishal ji. Main theek hoon. Aap kaise hai?" said geet, smiling.

He stood at a little distance away and looked around the place for maan, but did not find him. geet gesteured him to sit down, patting on the space on the swing, beside her. He smiled and nodded his head in a no.

"So, aap yahan roz aate hai?" he asked.

"ji who actually….. " geet thought for a while and finally said, "haan!"

"hmm, nice! So , aapse har roz mulaakat hogi. Waise jahan aap wahan maan aur jahan maan wahin aap", he said, softly.

"ji?" asked geet shocked.

"mera kehne ka matlab hai, ki aap unke secretary the na. tuo aapko unke saath rehne ki aadat ho gayi hogi aur maan bro ko bhi, aapki aadat ho gayi hogi".

"ji!" agreed geet, a little shocked, surprised and uncomfortable.

Vishal looked away and grinned. Geet looked towards the outhouse, for maan, wondering where he disappeared.

"Maan bro, andar honge. Aapko chalna hai?" he asked.

"nahi, main theek hoon. Aap bahut der se khade hai. betiye na", she said, again.

"thanks! But I'm fine", he said. Geet moved her hair behind her ears and Vishal saw her engagement ring.

"Nice ring!" he said, "Maan Singh Khurana ka taste nazar aa raha hai usme" he thought to himself.

"thanks!" she said, looking at the ring, lovingly.

"Aapke fianc/husband kaha rehte hai?"

"mere husband yahin rehte hai!" she said, pointing to the outhouse and Vishal looked at her blankly. Geet quickly corrected her statement and said, "mera matlab hai, delhi mein!"

"Oh I see! What does he do?" asked Vishal.

"AAh, he runs a company", she said, not knowing what else to tell.

"WOW, so he's a big shot. What's his name?" asked Vishal.

Geet looked around everywhere, except at Vishal. She was relieved to see Daadi walking towards the swing. She said, "maa is coming" and walked to her. She hugged her and both of them came to sit on the swing.

"geet kaisi ho beta?" asked daadi and geet smiled back and responded,"main theek hoon maa. Aap bhi pehle se thoda healthy lag rahe hai."

"haan beta, jab se Vishal aa ya hai, tab se, main theek ho gayi hoon". Vishal kissed daadi's forehead and daadi continued, "waise tum dono kya baat kar rahe the?"

Geet quickly spoke up, "kuch nahi maa. Aap bataeye".

Vishal interrupted,"arre aise kaise kuch nahi geet ji. Bataeye, aapke husband ka naam tuo bataeye!"

"ji woh" and she looked at Daadi, who smiled.

Geet said, "ji main naam nahi bataungi, lekin waqt aane par, I'll introduce him to you!"

"Okay, I'll take your word for it", he said.

Meanwhile, Maan walked around the house, still speaking on phone. He went into the bedroom and pulled the notepad to write some points down when he read geet's reply under the list of points he made.

"You are everything and the only thing, I want, Maan! And nothing else matters to me !!!!!!!!!!"

He read the line a million times and the voice of the other man, on the phone became inaudible to him. he apologized and promised to call him back again the next day. he threw the phone and ran out to geet with the notepad and found geet sitting with daadi and Vishal. He left the notepad in the living room and walked to them. Geet was relieved to see him. Maan hit Vishal gently on his back and went to sit in between daadi and geet.

"Maan bro, aap aa gaye?hum abhi bahut interesting topic discuss kar rahe the?" said Vishal.

"kya?" asked maan, leaning onto geet, gently. But pretending to sit straight.

"geet's husband!" said Vishal, smirking.

"Kyaaaaaa?" screamed Maan.

"Haan Maan. Geet abhi batane wali thi ki us engagement ring uske pati ne use kab kaha aur kaise diya. Aur aap aa gaye", said Daadi laughing.

"tuo batao geet! maine use kab rokha?" said Maan with a stern look on his face. "aur waise Mr. Lawyer, aapko badi interest hai, geet ke personal life ke bare mein jaanne ke liye?"

"haan bro. jaanna padta hai na. ab ring ko dekhiye", he said, slightly lifting geet's hand to get a better view of it. Maan pulled geet's hand away and said, "choo mat!"

"kyun?" asked Vishal and Daadi laughed. Maan shot daadima an angry look and said, "woh engaged hai aur sirf meri, mera matlab hai, she is someone else's amanat".

"bro, aap itna melodramatic aur emotional kab se ho gaaye? Aur waise main unhe choo nahi raha tha. Mere bhabhi samman hai woh! And you are sitting so close to her, like she is your amanat. Uska kya haan?" asked Vishal, winking at Daadi.

Maan glared at him and moved away from geet. Vishal spoke up again, "Main tuo yeh keh raha tha, ki ring hi itna beautiful hai, tuo sochiye bro, proposal kitna romantic hoga? Geet batao na. Main, aapke pati se milna chahta hoon. So that he can give me some tips and romantic ideas".

Geet blushed, remembering maan's proposal in the waters. The Maan Singh Khurana had gone down on his knees for her and had asked her to spend the rest of her life with him. The moment was so beautiful and romantic. Geet closed her eyes as though reminiscing the moment again. When she heard Maan speak, "Vicky, tu office kab se ayega?" asked Maan , trying to divert the topic.

"Maan, aap bhi na. Jab dekho office aur files , ke ilawa kuch aur dikhta hi nahi hai!" said Daadi, angrily.

"Arre granny files, office, ke ilawa secretary bhi dikhti, mera matlab staff bhi dikhaye dethe hai. waise bro, main office nahi aane wala. Mujhe enjoy karne dijiye".

"kya matlab?" asked geet, "yeh tuo aapke bhai jaise hai na?"said geet confused.

"bhai jaise?geet yeh mera…" and Vishal cut Maan immediately, "haan, main inke bhai jaise hoon. Lekin business mein bhi help karta hoon kabhi kabhi. Wahin pooch rahe the".

Daadi and Vicky looked at each other and suppressed a laugh. Maan understood Vicky hid his true identity from geet to tease her. He quietly texted Pinky to call geet immediately and talk to her. Pinky called Geet and Geet excused herself and made her to the outhouse to talk to her.

Vicky sat by Maan and said, "Bro, aapko kya lagta hai, kisne propose kiya hoga?"

"mujhe nahi pata aur mujhe nahi janna", said Maan looking at geet, who was walking very slowly.

"bro, she was your secretary. You should know some things, atleast about her", he said mockingly.

"I'm not interested in her personal life", said maan angrily, keeping an eye on geet.

Vishal looked at the direction in which Maan was looking and realized geet had gone into the outhouse. He patted Maan's shoulder and said, "Bro, who andar chali gayi. Kisi aur ki amanat hai. Don't stare at her".

Daadi laughed out loud and gave a high five to Vicky. Maan got up from the swing, "tu sab kuch janta hai, and you're pulling my leg?" he asked Vicky angrily.

"Bro, main kuch nahi jaanta. Kya baat kar rahe hai aap? How can an ordinary lawyer like me pull Maan Singh Khurana's leg?"

Maan looked at him for sometime and said, "theek hai. I know you know the entire truth about geet and me. Daadima must have told you. warna tera itna himmat?" he asked hitting Vicky on his head slightly.

"wAise bro, aap aur romance?how interesting! What love does to people? Main proposal ke bare mein baat kiya tuo bhabhi ka chehre sharam se lal ho gayi. Aur main unh eek baar halke se chua tuo aapke chehra gusse se lal ho gaye. Hayeee, kaisa yeh pyaar hai!" said Vishal, spreading his arms and falling back on the swing.

"bas karo. Main jaa raha hoon. Tumhe aur daadi ko dinner pe millonga", he said, walking towards the outhouse.

"kyon bro? candlenight dinner ka planning nahi kiya kya?" he asked laughing. Maan turned back and ran towards him and Vicky ran away to the mansion.

Maan looked at Daadi who was laughing, "mera love story koi Shakespeare tale hai kya ki aap sabko sunate rehte hai?"

"nahi maan, its actually more romantic than that", she said winking and got up and walked to the mansion.

Maan made sure she got back to the mansion and went back to the outhouse. Geet was lying down on the couch in the living room and maan bolted the main door. He went to the couch and made geet get up slowly. He lied down on the couch and made her sleep on the couch. it was like she was almost lying down on him. Geet spoke on phone to Pinky, and Maan had started to kiss her nape and back.

Geet hit him with her elbow very gently and he whispered, "geet, I thought, nothing matters to you, other than me. hang up now!" she turned to look at him, "so he had read the message on the notepad. She smiled and told Pinky, "yaar mujhe sona hai, thodi der. I'll call you back later!"

Geet kept the phone aside and turned to lie down completely on maan and told him, "Though your wife loves to stay this close to you, your baby is complaining about not being comfortable".

Maan held her waist and lifted her gently. He got up and picked her in his arms. He walked to his bedroom and made her sleep on the bed. He lifted her kurta exposing her stomach and kissed it. He then asked, "is my baby comfortable now?"

Geet felt the tickling and turned to the other side, saying, "Maan!"

Maan got on to the bed and held geet in his arms,"geet, Vishal is my youngest brother. We call him Vicky, at home!"

"kya?" asked geet, looking at him.

"hmmm! He was teasing you all this while. I just realized it today", he said kissing her forehead.

Geet made an innocent face and said, "mujhe kyun tease kar raha tha?"

Maan told geet, "geet, don't look at me like that. I will be tempted to redo the entire morning sequence again".

"Maan!" said geet softly, blushing. She hid her face in his chest and Maan spoke again, "geet, you make me so weak when I'm so close to you. I lose control. Only you can make me lose control".

"Maan , please I want to sleep for sometime", she said, softly, cuddling into him.

"hmmm! Okay. I'll go to the mansion for a few minutes. Have some work. You will be okay right?" he asked.

"yeah!" she said and turned the other side to sleep. ke kissed the back of her head and left to the mansion. Vicky was in the gym and Daadi was in the living room. Maan sat down beside her and started talking to her casually. He then slowly bought geet's topic.

"Daadima, M'lore mein maine geet ko propose kiya tha! And she agreed", he said, softly.

"I know, the ring is beautiful, Maan", she said, removing her glasses and keeping them aside.

"Thanks daadima!", he said, looking at her. He was sure of how to tell her that they were inofficially married. She noticed his discomfort and asked him, "Maan, kuch aur batana hai aapko?"

"ji who , main kehne wala tha ki…" and stood up and walked around for sometime. DAadi looked at him surprise, "This is the first time, I've seen Maan Singh Khurana get so nervous to tell me something".

"daadima!" he said, sitting beside her and holding her hand, "daadima, geet and me had an informal marriage, too".

Daadi looked at him for sometime and slowly withdrew her hand from his. "I did not expect this, Maan. I thought you would inform me, before taking such a crucial decision in your life".

"Daadima, we had to get married some day. We knew none of you were there, so we made it simple. I put the mangalsutra around her", he said, softly.

"Maan, do you realize that marriage is a big step in a person's life?" she asked, angrily.

"main jaanta hoon, daadima", he said.

"Do you realize there are a lot of things that had to be revealed before the both of you got into a marriage?", she asked, with almost tears in her eyes.

"what revelations, daadima?" asked Maan confused.

"Maan, does geet know about Sameera?Does she know about Dev-Naintara?Does she know what happened a couple of months back?Did you ever bother telling her, about your past and your family?Did the two of you decide what you would do, if the man in geet's past came back into her life again? What about geet's career, Maan?I thought you encouraged her to become independent. Do you think she will be able to manage her marriage, baby and her career at this point of time? What about geet's family, maan? Has she left them forever or do you plan to unite her with her parents? Don't you think, her parents should be informed about her well-being too?I understand she did not have a very good experience with them, but they might change their mind if they knew she is happy with you." asked Daadima, not pausing for a second in between.

"Daadima, aap stress mein mat jaeye!", he said, holding onto her hands tightly."I'm ready to answer each one of your questions, daadima and we'll do what you want us to do. We will never do anything that you do not want us to, please daadima".

"Son, you've already done something without telling me. you don't understand, Maan, it's complicated. I have nothing against geet and you, nothing at all".

"Daadima, I know you have nothing against us. Alright, lets go over this slowly. Please don't go into stress", he said, kissing her hands.

She looked at him thoughtfully and he continued, "geet, does not know anything about our family, except that you are my grandmother and that I have two brothers. I thought Sameera is a closed chapter of my life. But still, you're right, geet has a right to know about every one in my life. I have no issues with geet's past daadima and I am pretty sure that you don't have any issues too. Geet has moved ahead in life. She misses her mother sometimes, but I am very sure, she has never thought about her fake marriage or the man in her past, even once after she has confessed to me. As far as her career is concerned daadima, she will not be working for sometime. she will be taking care of the baby, and I will be helping her too. Whether she wants to attend her college or not for sometime, is entirely her choice. I will not force my decision on her. If she thinks she can manage, then I will not stop her".

"what about her parents? What about her family?", she asked

"daadima, I plan to visit HP, sometime to talk to them about geet. But not now. After geet's delivery. I'm sure she will be happy to meet her family again and her family will forget everything too, when they know that she is settled in life and happy".

"you've still not answered my question maan, what if the man in geet's past comes back?" she asked, nervously.

"I don't find any reason why we should be so worried about this, daadima. Geet is mine and will always be mine. That man has no importance in her life and infact never had. Her marriage to him was fake. Well, in case he comes back, I have to show him the doors that open into a jail, that's the legal way. But personally, I would prefer finishing such people once for all, so that they would not have spoil some one else's life for their greed", he said, uttering the last few words with utmost venegeance and anger.

"I don't know, Maan", she said, doubtfully, wondering if maan and geet would react the same way, when the truth surfaced. Until now, things have been going smoothly. She wanted the both of them to completely know each other's lives before getting into a marriage. Not because, their love was weak and their relationship would break but because it would be better for the both of them, to face the truth first.

She got up and started to walk when maan asked her, "daadima, kaha jaa rahe hai, aap?"

"Maan, I need some time, please!" she said, walking away to her bedroom without even turning to look at him, while answering his question. Maan called out to her again, "what about geet, daadima?Can she stay here or should she stay at Pinky's house?"

She stopped midway and answered him, facing the other side. "that is upto the both of you. But I'm certainly not happy with all this, Maan", she said and maan watched her walk away and wondered what to do next. He was not sure, why daadi had asked him so many times, especially about geet's past.

He walked back to the outhouse, slowly and sat on the bed, beside geet. he looked at her, she was smiling faintly, in her sleep. A smile crept on to his face. he bent forward to kiss her forehead and lied down beside her. His thoughts went back to daadima again.

Shimla: dev and Naintara had packed all their belongings. NT was happy that they were finally moving back to Delhi. She was unaware of a lot of things that had happened in the last few days, because her husband had refused to talk to her. She did not know that Dev had signed all his property away and that he was no longer a Khurana heir, even through his last name. she did not know that geet was the girl in maan's life. She did not know that Vicky was back to the Mansion, though Dev was aware of it. But what everyone was unaware of, except for daadi, to whom maan had divulged the secret , was that geet is Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana, now, officially. Dev, was very reluctant to go to Delhi. He knew, he would not be able to stay in the mansion or go to the office. he was not sure what position his daadiji would give him, in Khurana Constructions. He was not sure, where geet was. He could only pray that she would not come anywhere near to the khurana mansion and outhouse for a few days. His wife would ask him, hundreds of questions, regarding property shares etc and he would not have an answer to any of them.

NT, on the other hand, wanted to get back to Delhi, in order to prevent Daadi from revealing any secrets to maan. She had to stop daadiji, some way or the other and she could only do that, if she was in the mansion.

They left to the airport and boarded the flight to Delhi.

Khurana Mansion, Gym:

Vishal was running on the treadmill and talking to the love of his life, Kia. He was unaware of all the tensions in the house and the impending dangers that were yet to cast their shadows on the mansion. he spoke to her for about 45 minutes and she had to hang up, because her brother, Kapil was back home.

He kept running and recollected their first meeting, in an airport. A year back, Kapil and Kia were on the their way to B'lore from Delhi. Vishal was boarding the same flight to B'lore. He knew Kapil worked for Khurana Constructions. Kapil, too, knew that vishal was a khurana heir, but kept it under the covers. Having known Vishal for so long, he knew Vishal never wanted any attention. Kapil liked the simplicity of Vishal and respected his privacy. Both of them never discussed anything about Khurana's or the business in the presence of a third person. Well, they probably didn't have to discuss anything as well, because the man heading the Khurana Empire, Maan Singh Khurana, did not give anyone a chance to complain or criticize.

Kapil was checking in, for both, his sister and him. Vishal was standing right behind him in the line. Kapil had turned back to see where his sister was, while the lady at the counter did the check in and that's when they exchanged hi's and how are you's. Kapil waited for Vishal to finish his check in and both of them caught up with Kia who was waiting for her brother, a little distance away from the check in, lines.

Vishal, unlike his other brother, Dev, was not a Casanova. He respected women like Maan. He simply exchanged a hello to Kia, when Kapil introduced her. Vishal was introduced as Kapil's friend and Kia did not question any further. Vishal and Kapil had continued their conversation and Kia listened to the both of them. She was not a very talkative girl and enjoyed listening to people talk. So, she did not interrupt in between. She listened to their conversation for sometime and looked around the airport for sometime. Vishal noticed that she was not enjoying their conversation and that she looked bored. He asked her a few things in between to include her in the conversation as well. Kia, liked him for that. After a couple of minutes of waiting and talking, they realized that their flight was delayed by another few minutes and Kapil called some people in the office to discuss certain things with them. He walked away from the both of them and they were left alone. Vishal tried to keep Kia in a conversation so that she would not get bored. Though she did not speak much, somehow, he liked the way she spoke. Her softness, her dignity, her sense of responsibility and her attitude impressed him. He was not the best of the people to judge women. But he knew, something about this girl made her different from the others. A lot of other girls in the airport, drooled over his looks. But this girl, looked straight into his eyes and never bothered to care about him being extraordinarily handsome or goodlooking. She did not pretend in front of him. she was being herself and he admired her for that.

Though Kia, guessed that Vishal belonged to a extremely rich family from his looks and attire. She remained very neutral to it. She too, liked him, for being simple and decent. Both of them had some sparks of respect and liking flying in their first meet. Though they did not make it evident or realize that this fondness would later turn in to love.

Vishal came back to the present and smiled. He got off the treadmill and wiped the sweat off his neck and face. He sat on the chair, holding a glass of orange juice.

A couple of months later, Kia had come to meet some friends in Bangalore. Few of her friends went to the same law school as Vishal. She was talking to her friends and walking into the lounge there. she accidentally slipped and ran into a young man, grabbing his arm for support. She spilt her coffee on him and all the other girls went "ouch and oh's!" after that. Kia, who was still trying to stand up straight neither looked at the young man nor did she care for the reactions of the people around her. The coffee had spilt on her too. The young man, looked at her struggle and held her by her waist and made her stand straight. She met his eyes, with a smile and realized it was Vishal. He smiled back and immediately removed his hands from her waist.

"I'm sorry, floor thoda slippery tha, aur maine notice nahi kiya", she said, softly and apologetically, "aapke kapre bhi kharaab ho gaye", she said looking at his white colored formal shirt.

"Don't worry!" is all he said, "happens!" and excused himself and walked away to change.

Her friend told her that he had to go to a moot court in like 10 minutes and she spoilt his clothes. So, now he would be late. She stood looking at how calm he was. She saw him drive his car away and felt bad for wasting his time.

Her friends congratulated her and she did not understand the reason. She stood confused when all of them screamed, "Vishal Khurana, touched you girl. You're so lucky and we're so jealous".

She rolled her eyes and told her friends that she would have to change too, and took a cab to the hotel. She called Kapil and took Vishal's number. She explained the incident and Kapil had suggested she call him later and apologize. That evening, for the first time, he had received her call.

"hello Vishal", came her soft voice and he knew it was her, he did not need further introductions. But she continued, "this is Kia, Kapil's sister and to be more precise, the girl who spilt coffee on you this morning and wasted your time", she said.

Vishal smiled at her introduction, "Hello Kia!" he said, "how are you doing?" he asked.

"I'm fine, thanks! I'm really sorry for what happened today morning. I was told, later, that you had a moot court and…because of me, you got late".

Vishal continued to smile, "Kia, whether I was late or not, only I could tell you. And I was not late. I reached on time. So don't worry about it", he said, very calmly.

"But you had to change and you still managed to reach on time?" she asked, puzzled. "Your apartment is a 10 minute drive and .."

"I, usually have a pair of extra formals, in my car everytime. Just to be on the safe side, you know!" he said, "so, I changed very quickly and made it on time".

"Oh, smart!" she exclaimed, "Thank goodness!" she said.

They remained silent for a couple of minutes, not knowing what to speak next. Finally Vishal had to speak, "Liking the city?what did you do the whole day?"

"Nothing, I did not move out of the hotel room, after I came back from the cafeteria. I was upset about being careless. I might go out and have dinner, now!" she said.

"Okay, which hotel are you staying in?" he asked, "want to have dinner with me?" he was surprised at what he asked. Where did that come from? She was a bit surprised too.

He quickly added more, "Ah well, if you don't mind. Since you said, you'd be going alone, I thought you could join me. Don't bother if you are not okay with it. No force".

"I'm staying in The Taj, on MG Road. I have no issues with having dinner with you. I think you're great company", she said, smiling and playing with her pillow.

That was the first time she had complimented him. he felt some unknown happiness, he got out of his thoughts and had told her, "Alright, see you at 7:30pm, at the reception". Was that their first dinner date?Well, they did not know. But it was truly a beginning of a sweet relationship.

Vishal snapped out of his thoughts, when he heard Nakul call him. Nakul told him, that daadima was not well again. He got up quickly and ran to her room.

Precap: Trouble in Paradise????? What's in store????


Okay, that;s it for now. I read all your comments. I liked all of them. I'll see if I can reply to them and answer some questions , some of you have.

Now, go ahead and leave your comments, even for this update...!! the more comments and the faster you leave them, the faster the next update.....!!!! 😉😆


Thank you and Love you all...!!!! 🤗


Soumya



Edited by pickle6586 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pickle6586


reserved for the next update...!!!

coming up in 10 minutes... 😃



soums yaar... I really enjoyed the first part.. a lot... actually i stopped in between... laughed for a while and then continued.. was missing dadi-vicky in last update but you have made up for taht in this one.. really loved when Maan said "chuo mat"... btw, dear since GEET's pregnancy has started to show out.. Vicky doesn't have any doubt??.. and how sweet of Maan saved Geet from vicky !!!...
and sweety, i really loved when maan sat in the swing slightly leaning to GEET.. how romantic hai na..

2'nd part.. scary.. I expected dadima to be angry but never ever thought that she would ask Maan a lot of questions... yaar.. you r not planning for any seperations rt???? ... yeah what she said is true.. the truth should have been out b4 their marriage....now we have

1) what will be Maan's reaction when he comes to know it's DEV
2) Will GEET leave MAAN??


Vicky.. sweet devarji.. I really loved him... a warm hug to my vicky dear 🤗

and soums, honey... thanks much for a wonderful update.. it must be your off day rt.. take rest and enjoy the day !!!!!

love you a lot....❤️

Febin



Edited by febinyusuff - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Nice part dear!!!
But you scared me!!!
Hope everything would be fine in the future!!!

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Zoya-

Nice part dear!!!
But you scared me!!!
Hope everything would be fine in the future!!!



You'll have to wait, a little, to know, if everything is going to be fine, honey....!!!!! 😉

thanks Zoya....!!!!!


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Posted: 15 years ago
hey soumya.........
lovely update yaar
love the way vishal teasing maan😆
thanks for pm
waiting for next part...............
Edited by cutee987 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hiiii my dearest, sweetest soumya!!!!!!!.......OMG OMG OMG !!!!! wat a MIND BLOWING, SENSATIONAL update!!!!👏👏👏.....i'm sooooo glad u wrote a warning in red!!!!....so i kind of expected fire works!!!!😳😳😳😳....but u surpassed my imagn in all ways!!!!😳😳😳......My GoDDD!!!!...i'm still under da maaneet spell n soooo full of emotion rt now!!!!....alll kinds of emotions actually!!!!☺️☺️☺️.....n hats off n a salute to u 4 writing dis BRILLIANT work of ART my girl!!!!👏👏👏...

U just broke a record n took da maaneet romance to da next level!!!!⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️...n dis wa done beautifully!!!!!....soooo FINALLY we actually see maan n geet losing control!!!!😆😆😆....i ws thinkin wid maaan being da perfect gentleman dis day may never come!!!!☺️...or may cum a lot later!!!....soooo thxxx a ton 4 givin us all such a WONDERFULLY PASSIONATE update!!!!....love u lots 4 it!!!!☺️☺️👏👏👏

Ok here' s wat i feel abt da update...

--I just LOVED da teasing bet maaneet at the begg of da update!!!!!...it added fuel to the fire of their relshp!!!!😆😆

--ADORED maan's love n concern 4 geet n da baby even in da throes of passion!!!!....wat more cud a woman want!!!!...😍😍

--LOVED da way maan was rerady to go n get chocolate😍 mousse 4 geet even though he still wanted her wid a burning intensity!!!...now dats true love wen u put ur wife's need b4 urs n vice versa!!!😃😃😃

--ohhh n da bathroom shower scene was COMPLETELY MIND BLOWING!!!!.....MAANEET CHEMISTRY was at its HOTTEST N SCINTILLATING BEST!!!!😉😉😉...N DA CREDIT 4 DIS GOES COMPLETELY to U girl!!!!.....WOW!!!!

--oh n geet's embarrassment later on was also soooooo cute!!!...LOL!!!😆😆😆

--pinky's dad scene was well written too n da way geet n pinky get emotional is sooo typical of girls!!!

--but u know soumya wat da best part in all dis was???(apart 4m da steaming maaneet chemistry of course!!!!).....the way maan supports geet thru her emotional turmoil n feelings!!!...awwww dat was just sooo plain cute n adorable!!!😍.😍😍..

On a conclusive note i am just amazed at da way u unerringly always manage to capture da maaneet relshp in a manner so breathtakingly beautiful each time!!!!!....i mean 4m teasing to passionate to bossy to emotional...to comic!!!....u portray all emotions in a very realistic manner capturing da essence of da maaneet rlshp perfectly!!!!!👏👏👏....n dis is da true strength of a writer!!!.⭐️⭐️⭐️..i don't know y u hav not taken up writing as a profession...but let me tell u in my eyes....i TRULY believe dat u hav everything dat it takes to make a successful author!!!!... n 4 me u are n always will be an author!!!!👍🏼so anytime u want an alternative proff....u know which one to take up....right????

May God give u all dat u wish for n more(health, wealth n happiness!)...for ALWAYS making me smile n forgetting my troubles we i read ur updates!!!!🤗🤗🤗

Thxxx a million 4 yet another BRILLIANT update!!!!!

Love u tons,🤗🤗🤗

Imraana(imu)

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Posted: 15 years ago
Thnx 4 d pm, awesome long update:-) luvd vishal's teasing update. Dadi s fears r well justified. Wondering abt maans past. Waiting eagerly 4 d next update:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thnx 4 d pm, awesome long update:-) luvd vishal's teasing session. Dadi s fears r well justified. Wondering abt maans past. Waiting eagerly 4 d next update:-)
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome.... but lots of tension

MG scenes r sooo cute n beautiful

loved the interation of dadi, vishal & MG

loved every bit of this part
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Posted: 15 years ago

nice update.

will dadi tell maan the truth?


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