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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanx Shagnika Di mujhe nahi pata tha aapko aacha lage ga..Actually I was Going to wrie JRBDAUG but G post nahi hua.😆


-Apurva
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Appu yar thanks for the compemet.kuch nahi yar bus dil ki baate peom ke dwara bahar aati hun..if you series about making poem to ye aise hi achanak sikhi..eak kaam karo pehele rymimng kaise milate hein wo sikho..chote chhote stanza nbanao,..dhire dhire sikh jayege. know hum poems karane lage ye Abhijeet in Coma ka asar hein usake eak prmo ke vajah se mein,bhavana,shgnika aur baht sare loh tabse likhane lage.
Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago
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Oho Abhijeet in Coma episode k baad maine ek poem banayi thi Di Use aapni frnd ko Sunaya Lekin Woh gussa thi FW walo per toh usne mera poem phar k Dstbin mein daal diya aur bola aage se kabhi poem banane ki himmat mat karna..




-Apurva
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To Appu yaar to aap bhi kaviata karati hein..e bri baat hein..ka wo tumhe abhi yaad hein..agar hein to yaha IF pe post karo...kisiko mat dikhao jo saki kadar nahi karate.

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Di Woh mujhe woh Poem Yaad nahi hai...N Meri frnd us samay gusse mein thi lekin ab isi baat ko lekar khud Gussa kar rahi hai..N Mujhe poem banane nahi aata Pehli baar try kiya tha..But Alex aka Shipra acchi poet hone k saath ek acchi Story writer bhi hai lekin yahan aapne poems post nahi karti kyunki use kabhi poems kisi site per dena aacha nahi lagta.Or jis k frnd k baare mein maine bataya hai woh Shipra hi hai..Main apne school mein sirf ek Story writer or RB aka Rule Breaker hoon...



-Apurva
Edited by DJ_Apurva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Great poem again, very well said and totally agreed! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks Ravi for liking m poem
Sorr app yar ..muze pata nahi tha ki wo shripa thi ...m sorry shipra agar meine kuch galat kaha ho.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Di use kabhi bura nahi lagta Don't mind use aaj tak kitne logo ne kitna kuch Maine bhi Use Idiot ya Duffer (It haapens in frnds) kaha lekin She Doesn't Minds it..Dont feel Guilty.Agar aap Guilty feel karoge toh woh apne sharato se aapko gussa dilayegi.But still she will love u..





-Apurva
Edited by DJ_Apurva - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
jiya,,,bohot zabardast poems likhe hain app nay,,,,,very well express my favorite lines

To ye thi Mere dost Abhijeet ki kahani

Jabhi yaad karu to aakho mein aa jata hein pani
Bhagavan se mein ye karata hun Prathana
Mere dost par kabhi koi aapada aaye na
wo hamesha khusha rahe rahe

Din dugani Tarakki kare

Koi gam use chhu na paye
Usaki zindagi khushiyon se bhar jaye.
and second poem is CHAHE JITANA MAJAK UDHALO
impressive especially last two stanzas,,,jiya ajkal app bohot JAZBATI horahi ho kia koe khas bat to nahe,,,,,,,??????😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
😆Beena thanks very much for liking and appriciating my poems. know Aakari chunauti dekhakar mein Bahut Zazbati huvi hun...esaliye zazbaaat mein aakar e poem likhati hun..jabhi bohot deprssed feel karati hun tab ye zataka aa jata hein aur apane poems se dsaro ko bhi jor se zataka deti hun😉😆
Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago

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