RN FIC: UNCHAINED HEART--13UD pg 70 4/5/11 - Page 31

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: PrithviSanyo1

nice, lovely part. too good. loved it.

thanqqqqqqqqqq so much Prithvi

Originally posted by: Crazy_4_RA

Hey dear..nice update..thanx for PM.

Thanqqq so much and like to see your name here more n more
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Posted: 15 years ago
reminder with thanx

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naina i am still waiting for my commnet on 7ud
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Update 9

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Some four months back..

Viraj knocked on the door "apne bulaya dad"

"haan.. ander aao" virender ji said while he was working on some file and rajni ji was packing for their trip

" Viraj here is your tomorrow morning ticket and these are files… "

"for what dad…where I am going… I think you lost the bet and you are about to go"

"yes beta ji… per kya hai na jab hum bet hare to humari jgah kisi ko to office smabhalna hoga.. aur ye deal bhi…"

"what is it … hare aap hai, uski saja bhi ghumna… uske baad bhi mujhe punishment…beautiful dekh lo apne hubby ko… humesha vampire ke bhai hi rahenge.."

"oye tune mujhe vampire kha.."

"meri kya himmat jo apko kahun .. main to apke bhai ko vampire kha …" he said mischievously..

"haan phir thik hai…" for once he didn't realize, but when he did "oye.." per before this war will take some other direction rajni ji speaks up… "aap jaldi jaldi apna kaam kero … phir yahan meri packig mein madad bhi kerni hai…"

"haan main vahi to ker raha tha .. per ye raj…"

"ab phir se mere bache ke piche mat pado…" she was really happy, as she got this chance after so many days and it's all becoz of Viraj..

"haan tum to mujhe hi khogi…..main to papi hun aur ye sant mahan…"

"haan vo to main hun.." he said proudly to tease him more…. Per vo ye bhi janta tha ki aagr ye aur khicha to dono[rajni ji aur virander ji] ka mood khrab ho jayega… and he do not want this " chaliye chodiye dad…. ye boliye aap kya kah rahe the…. khan jana hai… main apki koi sadi hui confress pe nahi jane vala…"

"are yaar tu humesha mujhe boring kyon bna deta hai… ise baar bhut sahi jgah bhej raha hun… shimla…vahan ek deal ki baat chal rahi hai singahnia industry mein… usi ke liye bhej raha hun.. it's owner don't want to come …so we need to go there to see whether we should do this deal or not…"

"to thik hai jane do dad… itna nakhra kis baat ka … humko kya… ate hai aye, na aye na sahi… faida sirf humara nahi hai,… unka bhi hai…"

"I know but its more beneficial for us than them…they want to open an office in delhi and it will be their first branch in india… you know that singhania's name is really powerful in garments industries. it will be a big deal as we will be the first with whom they are collaborating..…"

"yup… but why me… "

"becoz here is no one else responsible here except you … I can't send any junior employee for this biggest deal… aur vaise jo bhi ho… tum in sab deals mein ache ho…"

"dekha tariff bhi keroge to kanjusi se… per mujhe apke vo sade hue chamme nahi chahiye.."

"thik hai …no chamacha bas aur haan ye files hai professional as well as personal…read these… vahann tumhe drishti rai se milna hai aur " but before he could give him more information she interrupted him

"thik hai vo sab sambhal lega … apne de di na files vo pad lega…. ab yahan ake meri madad kero" rajni said in commanding tone

"aa raha hun.. " he said little reluctantly " Viraj In files ko pad lena … mere pass abhi samya nahi hai verna main khud tumhe sari info de deta.. …mujhe tumpe bharosa nahi hai…"

"Decide ker lo dad …you trust me or not.…"

"jrurat ke samay to shiatan ko bhi sar pe bithana padta hai…" he mumbled under his breath…"oh yes vo to bas is file ki bat thi plz pad lena.."

"ohk I will do it … per ab aapna taiyari puri ker lo …verna rat ki flight nikal gayi na… to beautiful apka gobhi ka phool bna degi…" he said while laughing and he left with tickets and files he also took his dad mobile and left a new one

"ye khan leke ja raha hai"

"taki apke pass koi contact no. ho ….aur aap sirf mujhse baat ker paye aur koi business call nahi... main apko time pe call kerta rahunga... "

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it was almost 8 PM when she heard something outside.... she thought Viraj is back...

But as soon as she heard something , she just stopped right there at door....

"sh sh …kya ker rahe ho dhire bolo…kahin usne sun liya to…"

"mujhe per sach mein dar lag raha hai… "

"tum humesha darpok hi rahana… are itne salo mein kuch acha ho raha hai aur tumhe bas darna hi hai…main to ise ladki ko darwaje pe dekhte hi samjh gayi thi ki ye vahi hai…" there was glint in her eyes… seeing this drishti made her self invisible in darkness…

"mujhe kya pata tha ye vo hi hai akhbar vali… per tum janti ho na iske bare mein kya likha hai… agar sach hua to ye humein maar bhi sakti hai…"

That came like shock for drishti.."to ye log jante hai hum kon hai…"

"are use pata chalega tab na….abhi tak koi shak hua…nahi na… vaise bhi jab tak vo choti ladki use alag hai vo kuch nahi kregi… maine dekha hai…. Chahe jo bhi likha ho akhbar mein iseke bare … per ye dono ise choti ladki pe marte hai… tabhi to maine use choti vali ko alg kamre main rakha … islye to use jaan bujhe ker sath leke gayi…use shaamli ke pote ki khushi mein… nahi chahti thi ki ye tino akele rahe … kahin piche se bhag jate to"

"haan per us choti vali ne bol diya tha ki hum log vahan nahin the jab hum phone kerne gaye the.."

"han ek pal ke liye to mujhe bhi laga ab baat hath se gayi per p hir sab thik ho gaya….acha hua vo ladka use vakt vahan nahi tha.. kahin shak ho jata to"

"main to dar hi gaya tha…"

"dar to mujhe use ladke ka tha…vaise bhi uske koi paise nahin milne the… islye maine use uski manjil pe phuchne k asan se rast bta diya.." the double meaning was evident in her cunning tone…

As soon as she realized the double meaning in that old woman voice … "VIRAAAJ….." a soft frightened voice escape from her mouth… "kya … kya …matalb hai …asan rasta …kahin inhone Viraj ko….." she is scared now…" ab main kya kerun …. Viraj vahan hai ….aur main ishi yahan akle hai … VIRAJ ko dhunde jaun ya ishi ke sang rahun…kya kerun" vo ye sab soch rahi thi ki tabhi

"haan per agar vo vapis aa gaya to… "

"are ab kya ayega … ab tak to use use tuti rassi ke bridge se gir gaya hoga…jate ve nahi gira hoga to ate ve gir chukka hoga … tabhi to ulta rasta btaya tha… aur vaise bhi kal subh to vo log aa hi jayenge …. Akhbar mein to sirf ise pakdawane ke paise the main usi chotivale ke badle double paisa lungi……unhe rokne ke liye aise hi nahi itne juth bole maine … mujhe pata tha land slide ki vjah se 2 din ke liye raste band hai islye vo log saturday ko hi aa pate… tabhi to bus sunday ko ayegi kha tha …bas ab vo kal subh aa jeyneg aur humein humara maal mil jayega …" Her eyes were shining with a cruel psychotic glint ...a glint of money…

Drishti ko samjh nahi aa raha tha kya kre… they have sent him on death road… she can't left ishi alone here … But she also cannot leave him on his own....now he is nothing less than ishi for her.. she still remember how she didn't like him at all when first time they met

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His car stops outside singahnia's mansion. He looks at it from top to bottom. It's not seems like an office from anywhere, as his driver who had received him at airport, said .

Looking at his puzzled look his driver spoke up "the boss will be in office. Go straight then first left for meeting room." He nodded, but he was still puzzle.

He moves inside the mansion as directed. On first left he found a door with plate written on it "singhania office". He enters in it and stopped inside, near the door. There was large meeting table. Looking at chairs scattered position it seems like a meeting just got over. A girl was standing there, at the other end of table. She was leaning on it, taking support from her lower back Her back was towards the door. It seems like she is reading something. Her other hand movement points that she is drinking, maybe a cup of coffee.

He knocked on the door. On hearing that, she turned around, as she was expecting someone, to greet her visitor. But as soon she saw him, her all expectation went down. She was expecting the person with whom she is going to make big deal for her business.

"Yes, are you looking for something?" she asked him

"A beauty like, you" he said in his usual flirtatious tone. It's like whenever he sees a beautiful girl he just can't stop himself. He enters in the room and stop at the first end of table. It was when she turned to him, that something happened. Her voice is sweet, but there also this different kind of authoritative power in it. The confidence in her voice shows her cogent personality. Her light brown eyes, her long black hair pulled up into a tight knot, and her prim silk shirt with prissy almond color trouser. She doesn't look, at all like those girls, whom he used to meet every day. Yet, her one look took away, all his tiredness of this long journey.

She frowned on his statement. "Excuse me." Now her voice was stern "who are you and what u doing here?"

Which made him realize this girl is not just an ordinary, she is something and also why he is here. "Hi, I am V. Dhanrajgir." And he forwards his hand for a handshake. But she just looked at him up and down. Hearing this that he is the one for whom she is waiting, nothing came out from her mouth. His round collar white t-shirt with black blazer and denim blue jeans, all this of him didn't come close to what she thought. She was expecting a sophisticated well age man, but he looks so careless, so unprofessional and she didn't like it. "Oh, welcome to Shimla Mr. Virender" she tried to be polite. "I must say you look to young for your age" though she doubted on that.

"Oh, actually I am his son, Viraj Dhanrajgir. Dad had to go some other really important work. We are really sorry we couldn't inform you earlier, but it is my luck that I got this beautiful chance to meet you". He said all this so sweetly that honey could have felt ashamed on itself. "so may I know your sweet name? "

Though she was getting annoyed with all this flirt, but she controlled herself. "Hello, Drishti Rai"

"Oh... that's why"

"What..."she gives him puzzled look

"It's certainly something in this "rai "name. Are all rai this beautiful? First aish then you"

She was never accompanied with compliment. She always believes in professional work. Whenever she feels uneasy, nervous or when she doesn't know how to react on something, she uses her best support, her anger. "I think you must be feeling tired Mr. Dhanrajgir" she said in stern voice. Showing pressure in her voice to indicate that she actually wants this.

"ahan ... I am all fresh now..." he said it while looking at her with a smile....And this is his smile which making her more uneasy. "And btw I am sorry, I made a mistake"

"Good you realized it". She thought he is talking about his unprofessional behave, about his flirtatious attitude with a professional partner.

"Yes I mean, when you get angry, you look more beautiful to me than aishwarya. So she should be second." He can sense she doesn't like his flirtatious behave with her. And for knowing this, he didn't need to know her from long time. He understands girls very well. But what he didn't, was her anger on getting compliment.

It's more annoying for her that a stranger can understand her so easily. "Now I really think should rest Mr. Dhanrajgir and..." But she couldn't complete her words

"My friends call me RAJ" he said in suggestive manner.

"Rather I prefer to refer you professionally" she stated it

"Whatever you say, dhanrajgir or Viraj, you have to come to 'raj'." He said it mischievously.

All of this is totally new for her and also so disturbing. Now her anger was on seventh cloud." MAY BE YOU ARE NOT FEELING TIRED MR. DHANRAJGIR, BUT I AM. SO I'LL TAKE YOU LEAVE. As your father was about to come we had arranged his living arrangement in our guest room." This was Amber ji's habit to give all singhania's client a home like feeling. "But now you are here, who are so young, probably will like to live in privacy. So I'll ask the driver to drop you at guest house." Now she doesn't want to stay with him under the same roof.

"Don't take much tension. I am sure your guest room's walls are not transparent, where I cannot feel privacy. Besides I don't want to live alone, where I have a chance to eat my breakfast with you."

She didn't say anything. "See you tomorrow Mr. Dhanrajgir" and finally, first time she forwarded her hand for a handshake. He took her hand in his own. She reaches to door to show him the way to go outside.

Shayam singh was outside the room with his luggage. "chalo bhai shyam , Humein humara shyan kaksh dikhao" He held his other shoulder like a friend. Shyam nodded in response to him. While moving toward his room he asked him "yaar tell me, this, your madam, is she always this high"

"No sahib, memsab is a very good hearted woman. She always take care of everyone." He speaks up in her defense.

"bhaiya shaym singh manta hun tumne unka namak khaya hai per iska matlab ye nahi tum juth bhi bologe" he said it in general with a laugh.

"No sahib, it's a truth. I am here from more than last 4yrs. She used to be very happy, when bade shab and memsahib were alive. Now, she only smiles when Ishika bitiya is around."

"bade sahib??" He asked inquisitively. He couldn't work out much about Singhania's as he got to handle this deal last night. And like always he didn't read that personal file. He usually like to gather all information by own. He knows, from the business world that, this business was formed by Mr. Amber Singhania.

"Amber sahib, this is his olhouse and Ishika bitiya, she is his only daughter. He was the one who brought Drishti memsahib in this house. He used to love her more than his own daughter. She used to go office along with him. She is the one who handled all this business after his death. Ishika bitiya also loves her like her own sister. It's because of Ishika btiya that mesahib had setup this office in Singhania's house. She usually go to office between 9 am to 1pm. It's Ishika bitiya's school hour." Between all of this Shaym had setup all Viraj luggage in the guest room. "Now I'll take your leave sahib and if you need anything just call me."

Now from all this conversation he knows that she is really important in Singahnia's business. In fact, if he is not wrong she is the one with whom this deal is going to happen. Now, he wished that why didn't he actually read that personal file. So he could have made out how she is related in this whole deal. After all it's definitely not a right move, from the business point of view, to ask her how she is related. He can ask this to his dad, but only when network is working. And even if he asks him, first he needs to hear a big lecture from his dad for not reading that file. Which he certainly don't want. "Raj, you are an idiot.." He just laughed on himself.

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But now it scare to think of taking a single step without him… she have to go for Viraj…"I can't lose him… can't.. "

She took something from her room and move toward the old couple … un dono ki back uski traf thi… before they can listen anything or sense that someone is near to them….Drshiti ne use budhiya ko piche se neck se pakad liya …

she was pressing her lower left arm on that old woman and with other hand she was pressing a vegetable knife on her neck … the old lady was now in full control of her..

"are are ye kya ho raha hai…" when she realize who is this… "bitiya kya ker rahi hai… pagal ho gayi kya.."

"chup budiya…main janti hun ki tu janti hai main kon hun…." ye sun ker budha apni biwi ke liye age badne vala tha ki.. "vahi khada rah… ek kadam badhya to iski garden pe itne raste bnaugi ki vadi ke kache raste bhi kam legenge" she press knife on old woman neck and a drop of blood come out from her neck…

"aah …aah .. dekho humein kuch mat kero…. Humein maaf kerd do " he folded his hand to plead her

"hana bitiya … mujhse galti ho gayi … mujhe maaf ker do.." use budhiya ne rote hue kha

"chup … cup bilkul chup …" she jerked her [old woman] " jara si bhi awaj nahi.. " she said in dangerous tone …"agar ishi bhar aa gayi tumhari bakwas sun ker to main ise[budhiya] ko abhi yahin mar dungi….aur tum jante ho ki main aisa ker sakti hun… isliye dono chup.." her eyes were red with anger and seeing this both became quite as they became really sacred

"ab tum [old man] hath upper kerk meri taraf face kerek use room[in which Viraj and drishti was staying] ki traf chalo…" she also move with him .. she didn't want him to think anything else except to fear for his wife that's why she order him to look at her while moving In backward direction

"bitiya dekh… main manti hun galti ho gayi.. tu chali ja yahan se main ..nahi kerungi kuch … sachi mujhe chod de…" budhiya roye ja rahi thi…

"tu vaise bhi kuch nahi ker payegi … iske muh mein kapda thus aur iske hath pair bandh..aur iske hath is window ki grill ke sath bandh de… " drishti ask him to do it.. "yaad rakhiyo agar ganth[knot] dhili hui to vahi rassi iske gale mein daal ker upper latka dungi…."

"Ah haan haann kerta hun hun…" both were really sacred now… drishti knew that they are sacred only because of that ad. about her in news paper… vo ad pahle uske liye musibat tha per abhi usi ke sahare vo inko akele dra skati hai… he did it as she said..she was still holding her[old woman] in same position …

"ab khud ke muh mein kapda thus aur apne pair bhi bhand …jaldi" use dar lag raha tha Viraj ke liye use Viraj ko dhundna tha.. andhere junngle mein kaise jayegi.. khan dhundegi…phir bhi jana tha islye jitni jaldi ho sake…

When he was done with his own leg, she jerked her away....it gave her sometime to tie his hand as his sense become numb when he saw his wife head strike on window.

So now both are tied and far apart to help …

Usne use budhe ki ankho pe bhi patti band di thi…aur phir use budhiya ki ankho pe bhi…. drishti ne uske muh kapda nikala aur budhe ke pass ker boli ..

"Main ek baaar bolungi aur mujhe ek hi baar mein jwab chahiye nahi to… "She put her foot at his toe and crushed it… which made him to scream in pain but nothing came out from his mouth except the muffling sound… as old lady couldn't able to see why he is yelling she became feared and said" maaf ker de humein … maaf ker de… unhe koi takleef mat de.."

"to chup chap bta khan bheja hai Viraj ko …."aur use budhiya ne sabkuch sara rsata bata diya aur sath ho use bridge ki sachai bhi ki vo kacha hai rassi khrab hi chuki hai… aur agar koi gaya uspe se to vo tut jayega kyonki vo majboot nahi hai…

This made, her feel a tingling sensation at her back... this realization, that she can lose him forever made a lump in her throat… but she can't be weak now… whatever it is she have to go for him ….and bring him back …

So she again put that cloth in her mouth and checked them again to ensure that they both are well tied …. she walk out from room and lock it from outside…she was now sure that as both are well tied and can't see and also not able to talk they can't attract any passer…. though its rarer that this time anyone will pass… but she can't take the risk besides she do not want them to make noise in house to drew isika's attentions towards them … she hide that knife and move in ishi room…she woke her up …

"Ishi… ishi.."

Inshika awakes up . she saw drishti … she was looking tense and there was also some drop of sweat on her forehead . "what happen di…"

"kuch nahin bacha… tu so gayi thi.."

"haan…Raj ka intejar ker rahi thi… Raj aa gaya di??"

"abhi aa jayega … sun meri bat manegi…"

"kya hua di…"

"kuch nahin bacha … di ko Viraj ne bulaya hai…."

"kahan di main bhi chalungi apke .sath…." she became scared … a child who has lost her parents so early and now have only drishti as family …drishti can understand why ishi always want to be with her .. but she can't take her with her… use ghane andehre jungle … mein jhana use khud nahi pata khan hai Viraj… vo use kaise leke ja sakti hai… uski jaan ko yahan bhi khtra hai per vahan aur bhi jyada

"no ishi… Vitaj ne mana kiya hai… tum Viraj ki baat manti ho na…" ishika nodded her head in yes "main abhi aa jaungi.. tab tak meri achi ishi apni di ki baat manegi na… " She caress her cheeks

"Haan.. "

"thik hai to meri ishi abhi mere bhar jane ke baad … apna room ka door band ker legi sari window bhi ander se band ker legi…aur sirf meri ya Viraj ki awaj pe door kholegi…ok"

"aur uncle aunti…vo khan hai"

"vo abhi kahin gaye hai…" she can't tell her truth … she didn't want to scare her " islye ishi safety ke liye sab band ker legi ohk…"

"di mujhe dar lag raha hai… main bhi chalungi…" her voice was trembling now

"nahi nahi.. meri ishi bhut strong hai aur dregi nahi… right??" she asked it while nodding to make ishika nod in yes..

Ishika nodded to her .. though she was not sure, but she knows her di is right... she believes her di...drishti kissed her forehead.

And move towards the door... and before leaving "remember, only for me or Viraj, no one else ... OK..."

"yes"....she locks the door from inside

Drishti knew it leaving ishi here is big risk, but it's better than to take her in that forest ... so she took a rope and a bamboo and came out from house ... She moves in direction of path told by that old woman...

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end of ud

Edited by pinka28 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey ⭐️....

i know i am very late this time.....but reason tumhe bata hi chuki hoon....
tumhari hi wajah se late hua hai ......u made me miss u, isliye to mein yaha aayi nahi comment karne......becoz yahan aake tumhe aur miss karti 😔😔😔
but chalo.....maine socha next ud se pehle comment kar hi do 😆😆😆

pehle to tumhare last time wale note pe maangi gayi tumhari maafi pe baat karle...
waise situation to aapne bahut pehle pm me hi clear kar di thi......lekin since aapne publically apologize kiya hai....and humne bhi publically aapko jhaada tha.......to chaliye...sabke saamne hi aapko maaf kar dete hai.....as i know that it was only a typing error and not actually ur intention to discontinue the fic....so its all right......it was only a small misunderstanding, which is now cleared. All is well.......all is well... 😆😆😆

ok....ab idar udar ki baatein bahut ho gayi........seedha ud par aate hain.....


so as usual....it was awesome, fantastic, wonderful, great, brilliant, mind blowing, rocking, fab,etc etc....tumhari wale adjectives abhi nahi use kar rahi hoon......as i am saving it for next ud, which is going to be even better.......and also becoz is ud ke present wale portion se main utni khush nahi thi.......not that it was bad....but it was something very expected........pata tha waisa hi hona tha.....it was just a base being prepared for the next terrific, and exciting ud...... so i guess i did not enjoy the present as upto this much i already knew.......and i was more engrossed in anticipating how will Naina save Raj.......also ek aur baat jo present me achchi nahi lagi was that tumne naina ko ishq ko akele chod ke kyu jaane diya ???

i know Raj ko to kuch nahi hoga.....but agar ishq pe problem aa gayi to.......
waise tumhare rehte mujhe pata hai ishq ko bhi kuch nahi hoga.....isliye uski bhi jyada tension nahi hai mujhe....lekin phir bhi usko akela chodna sahi nahi laga mujhe 😒😒😒

chalo criticism bahut ho gaya....isse jyada ki to tum sochogi ki ud me achcha kya laga tha ??? 😆😆😆
arre have some patience yaar......dheeraj rakho......taarif pe.....i mean kya achcha tha uspe hi aa rahi hoon 😆😆😆

to present se hi shuru karte hain......ab afterall saari kamiya to wahi nikaali hain.......to batana jaruri hain na ki wo bura nahi tha......infact usme bahut kuch kaafi achcha tha.....wo old uncle Aunty pe to mujhe last time hi doubt ho gaya tha......specially wo Aunty ko to ekta kapoor ke serials me try karna chahiye.....vamps ki saari qualities hain unme 😡😡😡

but Naina ne jis tarah se un dono ko tackle kiya.....wo mujhe bahut achcha laga.....excellent.....they deserved it.....sirf paiso ke liye kitna bura kiya unhone......achcha hua jo Naina ne sahi dhang se unki akal thikaane lagai.....and also naina made sure that ishq was not disturbed by all this.......sahi bhi hai.....us choti bachchi ne pata nahi kitna kuch dekha hai....ab aur dekh leti to dar jaati.....

but pata hai present mein Naina ke actions scenes se bhi jyada achcha mujhe
kya laga ???

hmm .....i guess tum samajh hi gayi hogi......chalo phir bhir bhi bata deti hoon.....the best part was the way she was overwhelmed with fear of Losing Raj.....The way she realized how much important he is for her.....she did not even waste a second to start her proceedings to save Raj.... that part was just too gud....she forgot abt her own health....and was just worried abt Raj's safety and well being......gr8 part 👏👏👏

It is said na..to save the best for the last.....so now i would come to the best part of the ud.....obviously the FB's......they were just beyond words.....Raj's Parents are very cute and adorable...ye to ab known fact hai.......but sabse cute part hota hai Raj and uske papa ki khatti mithi knok jhok......really.....read karke maza aa jata hai....

waise Raj really sirf apne man ki karta hai.....kitni baar kaha virender ji ne ki file padh lena....but Raj to Raj hai.....kabhi suni hai jo ab sune...nopes.......
and leg pulling ki to Raj bhi tuition classes khol sakta hai....and uska shikaar max time virender ji hi hote hai 😆😆😆
wo vampire ke bhai wala dialogue bahut achcha tha.......
and yes jis tarah Raj ne unka mobile rakh liya....wo bhi bahut sweet tha......

waise is ud ke baad samajh aaya.....raj ke Mom Dad ko 2nd HM pe bhejne ka to sirf bahana tha.....tum to actually RN ka meeting ground prepare kar rahi thi..😆😆😆

to chalo ab usi meeting pe aa jaate hai......obviously, 1st meeting of RN and the best part of this ud.....

ye to last ud me hi pata lag gaya tha ki Naina did not liked Raj in the beginning.....but reason is baar samajh me aaya.....and ye bhi samajh me aaya ki Raj unke ghar me kyu reh raha tha......last time wo thora confusing lag raha tha ki Raj Naina ke ghar kaise pahucha, ishq se kaise mila......but ab sab clear ho gaya........

coming to their meeting....well uske bare mein kya kahu...it was just 👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

Raj was mesmerized by her beauty....tried his best to flirt with her, to impress her......but every time he attempted to do so......ended up irritating her more....he tried to behave in a friendly manner, but Naina ko to professional approach pasand hai.......feeling so sorry for our Hero 😔😔😔
Raj ko bhi shayad pehli baar laga hoga ki file na padh ke usne galti kar di...

but i feel achcha hi hai ki nahi padhi......the journey of discovering each other is definitely going to be beautiful.....and then afterall u r there to make it beautiful....to kya jarurat thi Raj ko file padne ki 😆😆😆

BTW, naina does not like being complimented, feels uneasy with her taarif, likes to keep to herself......i think all these things reminds me of someone I know......pata hai na kiski baat kar rahi hoon ?? 😆😆😆

chalo, i guess ab kaafi detail me baat ho chuki hai ki mujhe ud kaisa laga.....but more important thing is that i am more than eagerly waiting for the next ud.......and ab to ye secret bhi open ho chuka hai ki next ud is almost ready.......to pls post it quickly.......

nahi ki na.......

to........to..............to.........

aree to mein phir se request karungi aur kya........ek bechara reader aur kar bhi kya sakta hai 😆😆😆

and this is for ur ud


👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏


Edited by neha10.for.u - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update ............👏👏👏.............& a shocking too..........😲😲😲.................. the old couple..........😡😡😡............... now viraj drishti seem to be in big trouble 😭😭😭.........how they will come out of the mess ....... hope Viraj is fine 😊😊😊.......... & drishti finds her soon 😊😊😊.....

FB scenes were cute & funny.......... 😆😆😆.............. aaawww the first meeting in FB was too good 👏👏👏👏👏........also loved Viraj & fathers scenes 😆😆😆😆😆................ so finally dad lost the bet 😆😆😆.....

FB scenes come as a breath of fresh air b/w the current mystry scenes 😃😃😃........
so now continue soon..........coz missed viraj .......... hope he is safe & sound....... 😊😊😊....

continue soon 😃😃😃


Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
great update pinka....
i hope viraj is fine !
continue soon.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Dear Update was really gud..👏👏👏 Got to know many new things in this part.
Raj n his father are always fighting over one thing or the other..But they seem to share a wonderful relationship.😃😃..Drishti is managing her father's business.How did he died??? Drishti must b feeling so lonely without her parents but atleast she has Ishika.
Raj was so shocked to see Drishti..He was totally bowled over by her beauty while she was really irritated to see him..😆😆 She thought she'll b dealing with some elderly person and Raj was totally opposite of wat she thought..😆😆
I had some doubts over this old couple and see they turned out to b really cunning but thankfully Drishti heard them..
She punished them thoroughly while she was really worried over Raj..Why r those people after her???
i think she shud have taken Ishika with her. wat if those people come in the morning while she is away looking for Raj..
Pls continue soon
Bye
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi 😊
the up is really nice😊😊😊😊😊
drishti viraj ke liye pareshan ho rahe haai when she heard that this old couple knew everything about them 😲😲😲😲😲and thewy are planning to trap them so taht they can get the money😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
sach mein yaar mainne socha bhi na that theses old couples are sooooo bad😲😲😲😲😲 and harmful in logo ne viraj ko us bigre hue bridge mein bej diya taki woh gir jayae😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡😡
ab drishti becchare kya kare but the way she did everything and trap this old couple are just suyperb 👏👏👏👏👏👏
ab hope that ke viraj is all right 😕😕😕😕😕
plz jaldi se cont karna aur mujhe pm bhi karna 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: pinka28

i am doing it now
and thanqqqqqqqqqq so much summi ... whenever i see your name here i feel really great

I am not Summi dear..😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesooooooooooome.............
superb......
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm.........

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