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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Sumaiya

Update was just wonderful๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘
Every1 was surprised to see Adil with his wife..
Adil is really very lonely n only Shekhar understands him this much..n according to him we shud not search for answers but go with the flow ... Poor baby!!!๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
Ashna is trying hard to get some information but Adil is too smart for her..
store room scene was not romantic but it was cute..๐Ÿ˜Š kam se kam wih ek doosre ke sath to the๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜‰
Adil m Ashna seem to feel something for each otehr but they cudn't name it..
Ashna was scared of cockroach n Adil said that its a baby cockroach..๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Why does Adil work so hard????..He dont seem to b living.๐Ÿ˜ญ๐Ÿ˜ญ
"Why didn't they care for me.......?????
My inside they never did see,
My heart cries......my body is sore,
Paralyzing me to the innermost core,
The anger inside me can take no more.
The frustration, the misery and pain,
Driving me crazy...turning me insane,
Escaping away, do I have what it needs??
And finally I accept the things the way the are,
trying to live, trying to bear.....!!!"
Ashna tried to help him but he pushed her away..iss speed se to dono friends banne mein hi ek do janam to le lenge๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
pls continue soon
Bye
Happy Eid n Ganesh Chaturthi๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

sumiiiiiiiiiiiii !!
hamesha mujhe kaha karti thi ki main Raj ko kyun itni takliff deti hoon..

aur ab aap kya kar rahi ho madam ????

and yaa yaa..WE WILL GO WID THE FLOW,alright???
you just INCREASE the PACE of your flow๐Ÿ˜›
wonderful part ya...
continue soon.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
Arey tu Adil ko itnja torture karke hume kyun torture karti hai ? Mushkil se toh uski biwi ko laga ke bechaare pati ko kuch hua hai toh woh haal puchne aa gayi, aur tune kya kiya ???
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sumi
wow yaar itni jaldi updates..mujhe to tumhe dekhkar apni halat pe taras a raha hai...khair im glad i get to read this.
Adil is pretty smart abt his office protection...and seems like luck is on his side that he found Ashna before she created some problems for him.
Storeroom scene was funny as well as intense...:)
I wonder why Ashna came to ask Adil abt his health though ;)
insaniyat...good one
update the next part plus your other fic soonish :D
Sur
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hi Sumaiya,

Wish you a very Happy Eid and Ganesh Chaturthi!

Have fun and enjoy your day out!

Coming to the updateโ€ฆ

It was superb as alwaysโ€ฆ

Everyone is surprised to see Adil with his wife. Loved Shekhars' dialogue when he said that he was going to have a heart attack because Adil came late to office and that too with a girl. He is the only one who could joke with Adil in such a way.

Once again it is good to see Shekhar's trust for Adil. Adil knows that shekhar has sensed that there is something wrong between Ashna and himโ€ฆbut he just avoids the topic by giving him an advice that one should not search for answers because life keeps throwing one question after the other.

Ashna is trying to get some information on Adil but he is too smart for her. And shekhar is always there to watch his back.

The scene in the store room was cute. Atleast the cockroach brought these two together.

Adil does work very hardโ€ฆhe does not give himself a break. It was good to see Ashna's concern for him. She realized that he was having fewer and wanted him to take rest.

But Adil pushes her away. He has never had anyone take care of him and so does not know what it feels like.

Please continue soon. Waiting to know what happens next.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi Sumiiiiii....

Mai Mana ki baat e sehmat hun.... kya kar rahi hai Adil ke saath tu.... kitni takleef de rahi hai yaar usse....shekhar kya janta hai apne dost ke baare me jo hum nahi jaante....???
Baby coakroach wala dialogue bahut funny tha.... par Adil ne Ashna se pucha kaise nahi ki wo store me kya kar rahi thi... Ashna realized that Adil has fever...but ye kya... usne Ashna se madad lene ke bajaye usse hi dur bhaga diya.... Ab Adil ka sar ghum raha hai... wo bimar kaise ho gaya....???
Update asap....
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oye whats the problem with Adil?
"Ye zindagi bachi hi hai kaam karne ke liye "..then pehle ke part me he told Mr.Sehgal "Mian hamesha nahi rahunga"......Aise bol raha hai jaise isko koi jaanleva bimari hai?? Nahi hai na ?? Bol Nahi hai !!
Enjoy ur trip !!
Continue soon !!
Luv,
Vandu
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey sweety.......very nice part..................while reading the part that sawaal dialogue mujhe bhi yahi laga and u too have commented as such....................he he he................adil is really work acholic and ashna still in the kaam to hurt him..................but adil is wow he actually gave very nice orders to shekar.................hes too careful and thats really meking me more intriguing ki what and why hes like that........................liked that store room scene...................baby cocky................ha ha ha.................and espcially ashna's reply cocky to cocky hi hota hai..............very rightly said..............accept with her completely................i hate them................but ashna felt somereaction to his touch and closeness.................good good...............realising he has got fever she checked on him par ye adil hes too robotic....................cont soon dear.................have a great time...................
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Posted: 15 years ago
aaawwwww Adil ๐Ÿ˜’........... ko bhukhar ho gaya.............. koi doctor ko bulao....... ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†......... main bulao.......Dr. Aamir ali ko ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ..............
ok now seriously coming to part ๐Ÿ˜Š........
its as always b'ful............. & very njoyable to read.........๐Ÿ‘........mujhe humesha do baar padhna padta hai.......... coz first time i get lost in adil ๐Ÿ˜........โ˜บ๏ธ........ kya dialogue marta hai....... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ
& ashna ji ................. sabse sweetly baat karti hai...........but not with my adil ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜• ๐Ÿ˜•.......but inspite of that...... i'm starting to like her.... bechari care kar rahi thi adil ki ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ........

store room scene............ ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ......... ahem ahem........... was nice....๐Ÿ‘...kya setting ki hai hero heroine ko milwane ki ๐Ÿ˜‰.......... i can visualise the whole scene๐Ÿ˜ ๐Ÿ˜› ๐Ÿ˜›..........
waise aashna kya dhundne gayi thi ?? oops adil ne sawal puchne ke liye mana kiya hai ๐Ÿ˜†..........

haaai baby cocroach........ ๐Ÿ˜†............ adil not fair ...bechari ko bachana chaiye tha ๐Ÿ˜† baby cockroach se ๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜†......mujhe bhi baby cokroach se dar lagta hai............ its so creepy ๐Ÿคข........... i hate them.. ...

a special mention ............ nice to see caring side of ashna ๐Ÿ˜Š & adil.......... ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ............. I'M ALWAYS LIKE THIS ๐Ÿ˜ณ ๐Ÿ˜ณ.............. ab woh toh hoga hi........... hot insaan hot hi rahega ๐Ÿ˜†

hope my adil is fine ๐Ÿ˜’............ make him well soon ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ i know u cant also see him unwell.........

continue soon.......... ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ.........jaldi se ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ......... likhna shuru ho jayo ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š ๐Ÿ˜Š.......... coz now u got to update 2 FFs simaltaneously ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
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Edited by Puri_2711 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi ๐Ÿ˜Š
the up is just superb๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
adil aashna ko aapne office ke sab staff se introduce karwata haai ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
asshna toh moka dhundh rahe haai ๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜ก๐Ÿ˜กpar yeh shekhar toh hammesha adil ke saath raheta haai so bad luck for her๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
the store room is really funny ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†aashna toh ek dam se croc ko dekh ke darr jaate haai ๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†aur adil se ek dam chipak jaate haai๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜‰ par is pal mein aashna ko realize hota haai that he is having fever๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š woh adil ke cabin mein jaate haai to see his fever๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š but yeh adil toh usse aapne cabin se bhar he nikal deta haai
sach mein in dono ka kya hoga par jo bhi hoga aacha hoga ๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•๐Ÿ˜•
kunki kahin na kahin ashna ko adil ke parva haai๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜› isliye toh adil ke paass jaate haai ๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š
anyways cont soon and do pm me

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