#Devil's Den#: DIL mein mere hai DARD-E-DISCO* - Page 64

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Posted: 15 years ago
I know you are hurting
but understand, my love
the separation you put between us
will only hurt us even more

-Maan

ps: is that prose or is that verse...not sure
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Posted: 15 years ago
You are my heart, my own
I have never let you down
Yet trust me you did not
Faith in me, you have not


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Posted: 15 years ago
@Suhani - *hugs* when did u last have this money? Trace from there...
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjanaToronto

You owe me your life
At least tell my why
Why you cant be my wife
Answer! Don't be shy
It is my simple right
So please enlight

Though my past is my own
The future you want to own
But, i cannot give you that
As I was betrayed by a rat
Can you live with my reality?
Will you still give me your fealty?
The answers I will not know
Till the truth I let you know



Brilliant Anj.... wonderful...
Morality, Cruelty, and Reality
Glimpses of my truth are beyond whats happened with me,
I am in love with you and know you will stand by me and hold,
The honesty of of my sould you shall seek, from more than what's being told
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hello Devils, I just read through last 10 pages and I loved reading your discussion on whether Geet should disclose her past to Maan by herself or Maan should find it out first and then confront Geet on this matter. What I would love to see is Maan getting hints about Geet's past from the villagers or anyone in HP and then deciding to talk to Geet about it and at the same time, Geet deciding to disclose her past to Maan. It should work both ways, both should be ready for it, Geet to disclose it and Maan to hear it.

I want Geet to let Maan decide whether to accept her with her past or not. She knows that Maan loves her and it would now be unfair to him if she hid the truth from him deliberately. Initially it was fine, but not now. She can decide if she wants Maan to be a part of her future life...after disclosing the facts. And she should let Maan decide if he wants Geet to be a part of his future life after knowing the truth. At least give him a chance. She can test Maan indirectly about her situation that whether he would accept a girl who had a bad past for no fault of hers (she needs to be extremely indirect out here). I want Geet to give hints to Maan now before she discloses it completely so Maan is forced to search for Geet's past while in HP (before he confronts Geet).

One thing is for sure, I dont want any misunderstanding from Maan's side when he comes to know the full story (minus Dev's name) that Geet purposely hid the truth or she was using him, etc etc. He should spend enough time to contemplate Geet's each and every word said by her since Disco night and join the pieces. He should also remember the time when he met Geet earlier in HP and how depressed she always looked, she gave him unintentional hints that time too.

Basically, I want Maan to use his brain to the fullest before confronting Geet on this matter. He can get to learn about Geet's past from others (hints and then more hints), but the final step, the climax of Geet's past should end with Maan-Geet CONversation. The journey should start with Maan getting hints from others and end with MaanEet CONversation.

No longer should Geet purposely try to hide her past now. She should realize that Maan has full rights to know her past, even if it may hurt him. She can start preparing him from now onwards so that he will be kind of prepared when the climax comes. Maan needs a reason to find out about Geet's past since he has no idea about it at all right now. It would be nice if he gets certain hints from Geet (by observing her closely or Geet trying to give him some hints...intentionally or unintentionally), further gets some sort of confirmation from the villagers, trys to put the pieces together, and then finally deals with Geet on this matter. The trust and understanding they share right now should be further strenghtened once Geet's past starts unraveling in front of Maan. Absolutely NO misunderstanding, not even for a second, will be tolerated. This is the only way Geet serial will be different from others. There is no reason for misunderstanding out here, then why show one. Geet has given him verbal hints till now, he did not take it seriously. Its now time for him to take it seriously....specially after he starts receiving hints from the villagers.

In short, the journey should be both ways now....Maan getting hints that there is a terrible past of Geet he is unaware of, start hunting for it, get clear hints about it, and Geet deciding to slowly unravel her past to Maan, and then all this ending with MaanEet CONversation. Maan thinking Geet did try telling him, she had no secret devious intention of hiding it, she did it all for him, and Geet confirming the same to him.

I hope the above made sense. 😊
Edited by Anvi2009 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Anjana: Darlin! Perfecto!

@Shradav: Lovely words!

@Sia: Muaaahhhh! Love 'em and 'u

@Su Only cash hai to it is quite a bummer but then they will not give na! You have your IDs and stuff na?
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Posted: 15 years ago
@Suhani -- good luck finding it..check ur pockets//bags//ask ur siblings..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: AnjanaToronto

JACKPOT
An ki kitani names hai:
1. An
2. Cynic
3. Dhondz ki purana dost
4. Lootera
5. Turkey
6. Peacurky
9. Murghi
10. Peacock
11. Angel
12. Machis ki Tilli
13. party (g)host (aruna)
14. critic queen (manisha)
15. chavani chor

(And lastly )
16. UTTER CRAP

17. Dakku An
18. Pingu
19. Saddist


Angel - Zaatak! 😆 😆



Oh ... Peacurky 😆😆😆 How did I forget that. I told you have a selective memory ... only remember Devil 😆

Where the HELL is DEVIL 😡
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Posted: 15 years ago
I know your lips are lying
But, what is your heart sighing?
This riddle I cannot decipher
The truth I cannot just conjure
At least give me a vowel
If not genuine avowal



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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: an12345678



Oh ... Peacurky 😆😆😆 How did I forget that. I told you have a selective memory ... only remember Devil 😆

Where the HELL is DEVIL 😡



Speak of the DEVIL and she APPEARS 😛...Am here! 😃
Edited by AnjanaToronto - 15 years ago

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