Unbreakable Bonds [Mayur and Gunur] : Pt 4 : Pg 32 - Page 14

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Posted: 15 years ago

another awesome ff yar just wonderful

how u get such nice nice ideas?......u r brilliant mahak

i just love this ff.....thanks for writing this

(oh dear take care n get well soon)

Edited by dua_adil - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks a lot

Actually i didn't went to school due to weakness.....but i think i can manage to write up the next update hopefully....

Thanks a lot for the beautiful compliments.....

Love u all a lot...

Love,
Mahak
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Posted: 15 years ago
Mahak get well soon
and take care of your health

-Tasheen-
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -DazlingAngel-

Mahak get well soon
and take care of your health

-Tasheen-



Thanks Tasheen for the concern....love u a lot for that.....


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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mahaklovesmayur



Thanks Tasheen for the concern....love u a lot for that.....




Mention not yaar 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
hello mahak jaani..😊.tere ko kya hua re???y u so sad sad n all?khud pm nahi kar rahi hain...😒..cheer up girl!!!😃
n thnx a ton 2 anchal,..dat she's pm'ing all of us...kudos 2 u sweety!!!🤗...

well..coming back 2 d updates,..yup..its surely a new concept,..also u r writing in a difrent style..but it hardly matters 2 me yaar,,😎as m a blind fan of ur ff's n os'..so tu kuch v likhde..m gona devour it nonetheless!!!😆
n abt dropping hints,...i think mayu n nups is undrgoing a brkup or divorce kinda thing...is it??dnt knw...i need more updates to think properly!!!!

update real soon!🤗

luv mayur always!!!🤗




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Posted: 15 years ago
ohh u wr sick?tk cr sweety..🤗get well soon.....😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
Thanks a lot guys!

U really made my day!
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey guys!

I know that I have not been responding to individual comments, but trust me I love them to the core of my heart.

As I always say, without you guys, I am nothing.

I always owe you for the beautiful responses you give me which make me work harder to satisfy you all.

Hope you aren't disappointed.

Here are the two dumb things I could make for you guys-

1] Here is the siggie you can use either in your signature box or in your profile picture [optional, only if you like it]

2] Here is the siggie to be used in your signature box [if you want]

Happy Independence Day.


Today I wanted to leave individual messages atleast. So here it goes.

Because even if I don't reply back, trust me that your comments really mean to me.

@ anchal- yaar tu meri itni tareef kyun karti hai? I mean tu jaanti hai that I am just a beginner and nothing else. And I love playing with different styles of writing. You can have your siggie only if you like that. Thanks sweets for loving my work.

@ nivya- yup, I thought that you would all expect them to be Nupur's lines, but then my mind changed the storyline. Gunjan looks like elder sister only, all mature na. You can see that here also, there are more things than teaching. Thanks for really liking it. I am glad that you think that its different.

@ achoose- mystery would be revealed within the initial parts. I would try and do that within three or four parts. Thanks for loving the update.

@ amrita- Thanks a lot yaar for liking it. I am glad that you think that its different.

@ aruna di- Thanks a lot for loving it. doosre ffs bhi update karne hain. But seriously, padhai ki vajah se I get no time to write anything.

@ samira- Thanks for loving it yaar.

@ pooja- first of all, I am missing you terribly!!! I mean our chats on fb, AM, PMs and on let's talk. Thanks yaar for liking this. Emotions are such a sweet things. And nope, I haven't started writing for AM. Cholly for that. But you aren't that active na. and besides, you told me na, that you loved this type of writing style? *courtesy my romantic oneshot* and that's why I am writing this ff in this style. All because of you.

@senny- yup, something happened between these sisters. Thanks a lot for liking this.

@sam- hey bud, how are you? Mujhe toh bhool hi gayi ho! But thanks for liking this.

@ ridds- thanks yaar for liking this.

@ ght_sajan- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ bhavana- kaisi ho tum? And you are not replying to my sms. yup, feelings can be so complex. Thanks for loving it.

@ tasheen- thanks for liking the convo yaar. So how are you?

@ afsha- hi! Kaisi ho? Kabhi mujhe bhi baat kar liya karo madam. Thanks for liking the update.

@ mayur_my_jaan- yup, Mayank is already there in her life. But she isn't arrogant. She is trying to hide herself.

@ Shreyu- Hey! Kaisi ho yaar? Long time no talk! Thanks for loving it yaar. I am updating it right now.

@ aashi- thanks for loving it aashi. Will be updating tonight.

@ preety88- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ kirti123- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ dmgmjht4ever- Thanks for loving it nikki. This time the mystery won't kill you. You know that the mystery isn't the main ingredient of this ff na. So mystery would be revealed within first five parts yaar. You figured out something? Do tell that to me na. I can't update due to lack of time na. thak jaati hoon roz roz. I will pm you. And ya, I need a hug'.milega? aur what's up in life? And if I want any help, you would be the first one to be pmed. Tab mat kehna.

@ Alini- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ love.mayurarti- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ Daania- Hey daania *hugs* Thanks a lot for liking this change yaar. I am so happy that you could feel the pain. Horrible guesser? Ok, then I am vaise bhi revealing the mystery within first five parts. I will be continuing it today only. Thanks a lot. Loads of love.

@ dbr_kmichi- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now. Thanks for thinking that I am an awesome writer. That's really sweet of you. Thanks.

@ shinki- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now. I am glad that you loved it so much.

@ nikhita- thanks yaar. Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ taibaa- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ sariska_mjht- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now. Thanks yaar for loving my style of writing. Mystery would be revealed within first five parts.

@ prithvisanyo1- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ faria- kaisi ho fari? Koi nahi yaar'.kam se kam you commented. Isn't that enough for me? Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now. Mystery toh yaar first five parts mein reveal bhi ho jaayegi. Kyunki this ff isn't really based on mystery. It's something more. Sabhi confuse ho gaye the na regarding the prologue? Tujhe reason fourth update mein pata chal jaayega. Thanks yaar. Mujhe khushi hai ki tujhe meri yeh writing style pasand aayi. Main sirf teri fav writer hoon? Achi frd nahi? Lol'I was kidding. Thanks yaar. I love you too a lot. Thanks for loving this ff yaar. I will try and keep up to your expectations.

@ zarfishan1983- Thanks for liking it. I am updating right now.

@ samratrocks- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now. Thanks for thinking it was different and flawless. I hope I can get you engaged in it.

@ rads14- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ sweety_ursh- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ daniella05- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ mahima- Thanks for loving it. it's ok yaar. It isn't necessary to comment big, I just want comments. And I love your glitters. Just love the beautiful colours in it.

@ palz_arti4ever- Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now. Thanks a lot for loving the concept. But don't think like her. Coz it is all pain in her life.

@ dua_adil- hey. Thanks yaar for loving this concept. Idea kahan se aate hain? Umm pata nahi. Thanks for thinking that I am brilliant. Thanks yaar. Thanks for loving it. I am updating right now.

@ angelarti1988- me and sad? Nahi toh! I wasn't pming coz I wanted to make a pm list na. sabko pareshaan karma achi baat nahi hai na J. Anchal ko thanks mat kaho. She made me write a oneshot for her as a return gift. Imagine! And thanks yaar. I wonder ki tujhe mere saare ffs, os ,ss and etc kaise pasand aa jaate hain? I mean I am thankful still' Thanks yaar. You think that? Let's see if that's true. But I think you maybe wrong, or maybe right. Sorry, but I won't drop more hints right now. Check the story further. Thanks yaar for being such a good friend to me. Love you a lot.


And i also want to thanks all the like tab pressers.

Thanks for making your presence visible.


Love,

Mahak

Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago
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^^See the above post for replies and the siggies...





Part 2-

Nupur's pov-

I walked towards the door, knowing that he was waiting for me. I knew that my steps were leading me towards my doom. I knew his intentions. I knew him a way too well. Were you two that close? I could almost feel my conscience smirking.

I entered the trustee office, only to find him staring at me intently. He scanned my body like I was dirt. You are, don't you know that? I was wearing a full sleeves maroon suit. He was wearing a long brown coat with white shirt inside and bluish jeans. White was definitely his color. But why are you thinking that? Stop thinking about him now.

I knew that this time, my conscience was right. I took out my files, and gave it to him. He looked at me and I could read his eyes. He asked, "What are these papers?" I tried to reply to him, but I couldn't. His phone started ringing and I knew that I have to wait.

I could hear him speaking though. He smiled and said on the phone, "'Hey beautiful.' 'Really?' 'Tell me about it.' 'What are you saying?' 'Yup, you can meet me today at the cafe.' 'Of course I have time for you.' 'Love you too.' 'Bye.'" I felt like eavesdropping.

What the hell was I doing here? Was Gunjan right? Should I leave this college? Well, she is right, and maybe that's why I have given him my resigning letter. You shouldn't have had done so. But what other option do I have? I can't suffer so much. But you deserve the pain. Nope, I don't.

Well, in no ways can anyone affect me. No ways. That's why you gave him the letter, didn't you? Oh, will you shut up? I Can't. What's your problem with me? You tried killing me, so now I am trying to kill you by my comments. I just shut up.

He looked up at me and smiled. I knew he did this purposely. You know him that well? I could see him almost smirking at my condition. Well, I deserved this. He asked again, "So, as I was saying, what are these papers for Miss Bhushan."

I knew what he wanted to say. I knew that he wanted to see me in pain. Like the pain you gave him right? I smiled despite of the fact that it hurt me terribly. I said, "Sir." But before I could say another word, he said, "Call me Mayank."

I said, "Ok, Sir, I mean Mayank, these are my resigning papers. I don't want to teach in this college." I could see shock on his face. He said, "Any particular reason Miss Bhushan?" I knew he wanted the answer. I knew what he expected, but I said nothing. Anyways, you always are so dumb.

He waited until I said a thing, but then he said, "Oh, so you already accept your defeat. That's great. But I am having fun right now, I can't let you go. Unless'you know that, don't you?" I knew what I had to say. I could confess anything if he just let me go. Then confess what he wants.

I shuddered but I said, "Yes sir." He immediately cut me in and said, "It's Mayank." And I said, "Yes, sir, I mean Mayank, I confess that I lost. I lost my relations. I lost my happiness. I lost my sister. And I even confess that I lost my love. But the sad thing is that, the person to whom I lost everything is the one whom I gave myself. But there is one thing I didn't lose."

I looked up at him to see his furrows browed. Hit the hammer. I said with a smile, "I didn't lose my self esteem, my dignity and some of my bonds. They are still unbreakable. I still haven't forgotten how to smile and how to love. And I still haven't forgotten my first love."

I smiled to myself. He too smiled for a bit, but then I could see his strict face again. Why was he doing that to himself? You made him like that. Now it really pained. Mayank just looked at me and walked past at me. I moved back with each of his preceding steps. But as usual, the wall factor came in between. I wonder why there are walls!

Mayank pinned me the wall. I could hear him breathing on my cheeks. He whispered in my ears, "Miss Bhushan." But this time before he could say anything, I said, "Its Nupur." He smiled a bit and said, "Do you really think that it's over? It's just the starting." I knew that very well.


To be continued...

I hope you all like this part.

I tried to show another aspect in Nupur's life.

But i wish that you can comment on this and tell me how far is it nice.

I dropped loads of clues, let's see who can catch them.

I would be updating as soon as possible.

Please do comment and hit the like tab.

With Love,
-Mahak


Edited by mahaklovesmayur - 15 years ago

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