MAYUR ff: After Marriage updated pg 42 - Page 22

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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome..
superb..
wonderful.....
loved the upd.
thanx for the pm.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
u finally updated
wow
loved it to the core yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
wow gurli!! 😊 great job!! I loved it soo much! 😆
Thanks for the pm and please update soon!! 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan

PART 4



This part is dedicated to my BFFs kheya n krushi n my lil sis ghena.
kheya n krushi i love u to the core n no thanx for always being there for me now n in the future 😉
kheya yeh raha tera big bazaar of dreamz.
i promise ki ab main apne saare ffs time se update karungi.
aur krushi start dreaming a bit abt.... itni buri baat bhi nahi hain 😊
right?
ghena i hope finally u will join IF.
yaar agar tum log nahi hote toh mera kya hota? 😕


im extremely sorry to all my readers for making u wait so much.
pakka promise last time main late update kar rahi hun

here is the update:

Recap: bauji overhears MAYUR convo but still decides that nupur will marry adhiraj. The rest of the events occur as in the serial.

Now cut to the maafi scene.

N: bauji mujhe maaf kar dijiye. Mera aapko dukh deena ka koi irada nahi tha. Main adhiraj se shaadi karne ke liye tayaar thi mujhe nahi pata yeh sab kaise ho gaya. Please mujhe maaf kar dijiye bauji.
B: aaj main haar gaya lekin tumhara pyaar jit gaya. Main tumhare pyaar ki gahrayi samajh nahi paaya. Agar pehle jaan sakta toh yeh din kabhi nahi dekhna padta. Mayank kyat um nupur se pyaar karte ho?



Mayank nods his head indiacating a yes
M: ji
B: main nupur ko tumhe saupta hun. Kaya abhi issi waqt tum usse shaadi karoge?



Both mayank n nupur r stunned

Mayank looks towards nupur. He keeps quiet lekin nupur toh nupur hain. Woh kaise chup rah sakti hain?
When bauji asked mayank to marry nupur everyone thought that finally bauji has understood MAYURS love. So, miss nupur bhushan soon to be mrs. Mayank Sharma was back to her nautanki style (as mayank calls it)
N: bas gayi bhains paani main. Bauji aap kisse puch rahe hain?
Makes a weird face
N: in mahashay ka 2016 tak shaadi karne ka koi irada nahi hain.
Mayank plays along gor nupur n moves towards he.
M: bilkul sahi kaha nupur. Mera koi irada nahi hain tumse shaadi karna ka. (turning towards samrat) samrat ghar chalen?
Nupur is stunned seeing mayanks reaction
N: mayank kya tum sach kah rahe ho
M: haan nupur'lekin main soch raha hun
He kneels down on his knees in front of her
M: miss Nupur Bhushan, will you do me the honour of becoming Mrs. Nupur Mayank Sharma? Will you grace my life with your everlasting presence? Will be mine for as long as we shall live?
Like always Mayank leaves Nupur speechless
N: Mayank kyat um serious ho?
M: haan nupur' kyat um mujhse shaadi karogi abhi aur issi waqt?
N: Mayank, main is duniya ki sabse khush kismet ladki hongi agar main zindagi bhar tumhari banker rahun. main hamesha se is din ka intezaar kiya jab main hamesha ke liye us insaan ki ban jaungi jisse main pyaar karti hun. Lekin Mayank tumhare sapne'
Even though Nupur wanted to marry Mayank she was also worried that there should no obstacle in Mayank's dreams.
M: mere sapne nahi nupur, hamare sapne jinhe hum dono milkar pura karenge.
Once again bauji is left ogling at MAYUR
B: main dua karta hun ki tum dono hamesha khush raho.
G: chalo di ab mandap main baith jao. Aao mayank
Mayur are finally getting married. Despite all the problems they faced their love proved to be too strong to be broken by the world
During the marriage rituals
M: mujhe vishwas nahi ho raha ki hamari shaadi ho rahi hain. Mujhe lagta hain main koi sapna dekh raha hun
Nupur pinches him hard
M: ouch
N: ab vishwas ho gaya
M: hmmmmmmm
D: kya hua jijaji?
M: kuch nahi saali sahiba bas nupur se shaadi karne ke side effects pata chal rahe hain
N: kya kaha tumne? Tumhari toh main and she hits him on the shoulder
M: nupur agar tum aise hi mujhe marti rahogi toh mera yeh shoulder bhi toot jayega
S/B: yeh bhi matlab???? (in a teasing voice)
M: matlab yeh ki madam ki wajah se mera pehle bhi shoulder toot gaya hain. Jab hum academic meet ke liye gaye the
This bantering goes on until pandiji (P) scolds them.
P: aap dono jaimala ke liye khade ho jayiye



MAYUR exchange garlands.



With each passing moment MAYUR are tied in the sacred thread of matrimony.


With each passing moment MAYUR were becoming closer to each other



Finally
P: aaj se aap dono pati patni hua

MAYUR smile at each other still finding it difficult to believe that they won against all odds



S: so, miss Nu
N: Mrs. Sharma to you samrat
M: (leaving everyone boggled) oye hoye Mrs. Sharma
S: hmmmm so Mrs. Sharma congratulations. Finally tumne Maynk se shaadi kar hi li.
G: main bahut khush hun di. Akhir tumhara bachoan pura ho raha hain. Tumhari shaadi us insaan se hui hain jisse tum sabse zyada pyaar karti ho.
D: im so happy for you dear. Congratulations jijaji
U: lekin nupur, ab toh tum chali jaogi main raat ko baat kisse karunga? Mere liye sandwiches aur burgers kaun banayega? Nupur main bhuka mar jaunga
N: uday bhaiya, aap chinta mat kijiye. Jab bhi aapko mujhse baat karne ka dil kare aap mujhe phone kar lena aur hum dono milke puri raat baatein karenge. Aur aapke liye burgers aur sandwiches ab gunjan bana diya karegi. Theek hain?
U: theek hain nupur. Aaj main bahut khush hun. Meri same blood group wali sister ko apna kadhus mil gaya
M: uday (mayank looks angrily towards him)
U: (scared) mera matlab hain'woh'
N: koi baat nahi uday bhaiya. Yahin meri kismet hain
M: oh hello madam tumhari kismet bahut achi ahin. Tum shayad bhul rahi ho ki college ki saari ladkiyan mujh par marti hian
N: marti hongi lekin tum toh mere piche pade the. Iska matlab tumhari kismet bahut achi hain ki main tumhe bhav deti hun (with an air of superiority)
Mayank gives her his best sadu look which is specially reserved for nupur
Then MAYUR move to take bauji's blessings.
Kya bauji unhe maaf karenge? ya nahin?


Ok guys here is the next part.
I know its very small so I will update the next part on Monday or Tuesday for sure.

i hope u like this part.
also plz tell me if u think that i am dragging the story a bit or if u r ok with it.
its just that i want to write each n every moment of MAYUR marriage.
if u like reading it in such detail then i will update as before with lots of details n if not then i will speed up.

kheya n krushi yeh waale sapne kaise hain?

waiting for ur comments n views

luv
shruti

heyy di ty sooo much luv ya loadzzzzz!!!!!!(ghenzz)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayur-arti.4eva

aaawwwww 😊 ❤️.....so sweet of u for the dedication and me too luv u to the core and also u Kheya...dekha bhuli nahi ❤️

agar promise kiya hai to nibhana ok 😉
ha ha pata he itni bhi bhuri baat nahi he chaal tera order saar ankhon pe 😉 😳
nahi tera to kuch nahi hota par hum sab ka kya hota??? 😆

ok ok cuming to the FF...mindblowing, superp, amazing and seriously no words to describe it...great work ⭐️

and cuming to pics woooooowwwwwww soooooooooo amazing pics u choose...just luv all pics 👏

and mayur masti ws awesum 😊
and i don't hav any prob if u r going in detail it will make the FF more interesting kyuki detail mayur ke baare mein he jo kabhi boring nahi hota kyu?? 😉
and ye sapna bahut hi acha he and seriously kul surprise....mayur shadi ws one of the best day in mayur memories par koi baat nahi mayur r cuming bck hurrrrrrraaaaaayyyyyyyy 😆


and now u bth get ready for surprise which i don't knw when will cum 😆
it will take tym but am sure u bth will luv it and u hav to wait for it caz it will take long tym...but as u knw sabar ka phaal mitha hota he...so wait and be ready for surprise 😉

i know dat it was swet of me 😆😆
haan yaar is baar promise nibhaungi
im glad u liked this small surprise
n one more is on the way
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: kheya-mayur

haye shruti.............tujpe meri dil khush ho gaya.surprise is awsom...........maine socha bhi nahi tha k tu mujhe dedicate karegi.love u both so much.tu aur krushi meri jaaan hai(dekh kruishi mai bhi nahi bhuli😉)..........ab tujhe thx bolneki man kar raha hai par nahi bolungi.........mujhe meri jaan ki parwa hai.abhi to mai apni dreamboyse bhi nahi mili.itne jaldi teri hath marna nahi chahti😛

coming to d update

hmz again tune payarasa sapna de dia.love it.aur wo scene jaha mayu nupur ko shadi k lie propose karte hai .love d scene........mrs nupur mayank sharma😆 awsom yar.

par teri apne bat karne ki tarika bhi update mai a gayi yar.jayse ki hello madam.ye jabhi read karti ho mujhe mayu nahi teri face dekh ti hai.lekin iska matlab ye nahi hai k ye accha nahi lag raha hai. ye bhi mayu ki dialogue mai chng la raha hai n i like it.

pix ki to koi bat nahi.awsom,awsom.pix ki choice bhi acchi ki tune.

lovely update.


hayeeeeeeeeee kheya
aur haan dreamboy se milne ke baad bhi thanx mat bolna
samajhi
warna us bechare ka kya hoga?
waise proposal wala scene mera bhi favourite hain
aur tera next surprise is on the way
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Posted: 15 years ago
hi guys i have read all ur omments n am so happy. i will reply individually to all of them after this update.
this is a vm made by vinaya (wind453) specialy for the ff.
thanx a ton dear.
i wanted to inlude the vm along with my update but phir maine socha itna kyun tang karun toh update de hi diya.
enjoy this vm n get ready for the next part.
i will update the next part tonight or tomorrow morning.
Happy Independence Day to all my frnds.
luv
shruti
P.S. also do tell me if u want me to bring mayus mom or not
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Posted: 15 years ago
*res*
hehehehe i wanted to be the first one to comment on this vm 😆😆😆
vinaya
mindblowing
awesum
fantastic
fabtabulous
superb
sweetest
bestest
cutest
ok i can go on n on
so i will stop n just say a big thanku
Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan

hi guys i have read all ur omments n am so happy. i will reply individually to all of them after this update.

this is a vm made by vinaya (wind453) specialy for the ff.
thanx a ton dear.
i wanted to inlude the vm along with my update but phir maine socha itna kyun tang karun toh update de hi diya.
enjoy this vm n get ready for the next part.
i will update the next part tonight or tomorrow morning.
Happy Independence Day to all my frnds.
luv
shruti
P.S. also do tell me if u want me to bring mayus mom or not

i have seen this vm its amazing
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesum And Adorable Vm..
Keep Making More Sweety!! 😃

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