The Unknown Desire part 39 updated pg. 149 - Page 93

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Posted: 15 years ago

Are yaar ye to kaafi badhiya tha, i mean Vardaan ka Kajal ko le kar New Jersey jaana. 😊 Vahan k saare scenes kaafi romantic the specailly club dance fir un ki life me Sanya ki entry aur ab jab dono husband n wife ka drama kar rahe hain,šŸ˜‰ that was really sweet. 😳 Ab mujhe pakka yakeen ho gaya hai ki Vardaan ko pyaar ho gaya hai Kajal se. šŸ˜‰ Ye Sanya kitna irritate karti hai yaar😔. Kyoun baar baar un dono k beech me aane ki koshish kar rahi hai. 😔 Party me bhi gayi to ajeeb tarah k kapde pehan kar. Vahin Kajal hai jo itne acche se ready hue ki Vardaan bus dekhta hi reh gaya us ko.šŸ˜†

Accha hua change karne ko bola us ne mam ko.šŸ˜† Ab yahan us ko bhadka rahi hai Vardaan k against, how mean is she yaar? 😔
Edited by arpita25 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Vertika

How r u ?

Sorry for late reply

Update was superb,fantastic ,awesome n romantic too

Varadaan is really caring he went to seen his ill aaya…….. so sweet

Shalabh loves Mugdha……. hope she also loves him

Vardaan ne Kajal se confessed kara hi liya

W8ng for next part

Do cont soon

Thnx for pm

Luvs

Naina

Edited by Kool_Naina - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey Vertika kaisi hai...yaar...???

ud was too gud n romantic...
vardaan toh kho hi gaya...kajal ko is tarah se dekh kar...??? par kajal ne bich bich me use sawal puch puch kaer use sences me la rahi thi...
vardaan khud guilt feel karr raha tha ki use is tarah se kajal ko akele chod kar nahi aana chahiye tha...!!! par voh bhi toh majbur tha...!!! aur kajal ne bhi yeh jana ki vardaan kitna caring hai...dushron ka bhi kitna khayal rakhta hai...
salabh ko toh Mugdha se pyar ho gaya hai...??? lekin mugdha k dil me kya hai...???
finally vardaan ne kajal k muh se voh teen words nikalwa hi diye...
plz cont soon.
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome and very romantic and cute updt...........

RN were gr888
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Posted: 15 years ago
Yes....I finally read the two parts that I missed....Vardaan pe to Kajal itna gussa thi....I was thinking ab isse kaun bachayega?? Bechari Kaja pure part me intezaar hi karti reh gayi!!
Whereas Shalabh-Mugdha portion was interesting....liked Shalabhs ans to Mallika!!
And then....Vardaan aya Kajal ke room me....mujhe to darr hi lag raha tha....kahin abhi usse bahar na patak de....but he was here wid all his charms and naughtiness....and so he saved himself by himself...hehe. Btw it was gud to see the softer side of him!!
And here liked the Shalabh-Sameer plan to get Mugdha as Shalabh's date....w8ing to knw when she calls him.
And here....Vardaan very sweetly got the three words out of her....that was really a beautiful scene...loved it.
Will be w8ing for the next part Vertika!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
kar bhi de yaar is ko update
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Posted: 15 years ago
I read two more parts yaar.
Beautiful yaar, the way u handle all the parts is really nice. Ab jaa k Vardaan k saath hi saath Kajal ko bhi ehsaas ho raha hai na ki vo kisi aur ko nahi dekh sakti Vardaan k saath. Ab Sanya k aane se us ko jab Vardaan ki wife ka natak karna pad raha hai. Ab vardaan ko bhi mauka mil raha hai us k pass aa k apne pyaar ko jatnae ka dekhna ye hai ki kab tak vo bhaag sakti hai
Edited by arpita25 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
So maine do updates aur padh liye hain.
Good ones.
Ab ehsaas ho raha hai na Kajal ko kya feel karne lagi hai Sanya k aane k baad. Kitna chipakne ki koshish karti hai na Sanya? Sahi kaha Vardaan ne ki Kajal k jaise dress pehan k jaana chahiye aur khud Kajal ko dekh k lost ho rahein hain janab. That office scene was really cute n romantic when Vardaan was really teasing Kajal one after another and she was only blushing hard. Vo chot n the way he carried her in his arms was amazing. Sanya ne bhi kam jahar gholne ki koshish nahi ki hai na Kajal k man me Vardaan k against but badhiya jawab paaya hai us ne.
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Posted: 15 years ago
So maine do updates aur padh liye hain.
Good ones.šŸ‘
Ab ehsaas ho raha hai na Kajal ko kya feel karne lagi hai Sanya k aane k baad. šŸ˜‰ Kitna chipakne ki koshish karti hai na Sanya?😔 Sahi kaha Vardaan ne ki Kajal k jaise dress pehan k jaana chahiye šŸ˜‰ aur khud Kajal ko dekh k lost ho rahein hain janab.😳 That office scene was really cute n romantic when Vardaan was really teasing Kajal one after another and she was only blushing hard.😳 Vo chot n the way he carried her in his arms was amazing. 😳 Sanya ne bhi kam jahar gholne ki koshish nahi ki hai na Kajal k man me Vardaan k against 😔 but badhiya jawab paaya hai us ne. šŸ˜†
Edited by desaiprachi07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Pls continue soon

Edited by suhana_dixit - 15 years ago

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