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dua

@dua22

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#221

wow it was superb

amazing

cont soon n thanks for pm

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ShwePoo

@ShwePoo

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#222

WOW... Shocking update.... I couldn't even imagine our sweet Mayank like this.... 😆
Nice update....
Waiting for the past to unfold....

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kirti123

@kirti123

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#223

wow really shocking update loved the way u wrote it poor nupur
dam excited to read next
loved it
continue soon 😊

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-sam-

@-sam-

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#224

Hey Arian twinee,

I am back!!!

sorry for late comment... ghoomne gayi thi....

It was amazing!!!
Superb! The flow of the story is good.

I want to hate Mayank... but.... I love him, not in this ff.

I want to know the past..

Continue soon now...

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Senny

@Senny

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#225

Hey Ruchi,

Amazingggggggggg update man, I am certainly hopeful that this would be taken along gradually and beautifully. N is definitely taking the sensible decision by not going back to her parents, But I feel that her parents would never be really happy until she is, the truth would be out sooner or later until life takes a turn around.

Very well written Ruchi.

God bless you honey.

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anju011

@anju011

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#226

mayank is so rude & mean.
can't see nupur like this.
nice update.
continue soon.

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Anamika.5

@Anamika.5

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#227

Hey Ruchi Nice update dear

Hope to know their past soon

Love,
Shreyu

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Beet

@Beet

Rocker

Posted: 15 years ago

#228

Hey Ruchi,

God, it was an amazing update.

It really is so difficult to imagine Mayank as an evil guy :P And poor Nupur, I feel her pain.

But, it's good to see that Sammy and Shilpa Aunty are supporting her.\

I am dying to know how the past unfolds. Please continue soon.

It was an amazing update Ruchi. Great Job.

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Let-It-Go

@Let-It-Go

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#229

Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan
res
me first me first 😃

yipeeeeeeeeee

coming to the update
wow heavy one really heavy ohh...yes , i can understnad ..
im glad that the past will start unfolding. yeah..from next update pakka ..
plz update asap surely ..asap !
wanna know what happened so that all such events took place

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Sujata

@SujaLuvsMayur

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#230

uncommon mayue FF.................i loved it................mayank is so mean, so rude, ruthless. i hate him.

OMG, i used ths words 4 my mayu, bt he deservd that(only in ur FF). m eagartly waiting 4 ths parts, when mayank developing his feelings n fall in love with nups.

m eagarly waiting 4 next part, plz pm me whenever u update.

Love

Suja