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Posted: 19 years ago
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Chapter 13:
(Prena is shocked)
Prena: How..Is this possible? Its the same swing where me rish and anu used to play...itt..can't be..
(Rishabh comes)
Rishabh: Shall we go now?
(Prena turns around)
Prena: Sir..where did you get this swing..?
Rishabh: Oh..its a very old swing..i used to play on those swings with my cousin and brother. :)
(Prena Opens her eyes with shock)
(Prena starts crying)
Prena: Rish..
(Rishabh Is Shocked)
Rishabh: PRENI! how is this possible? this means...They lied to us...why preni did this happen?
Prena: I don't know! You dont know how long i've been waiting for...a..
(Prena Stops in mid-sentence, as she sees Anurag Running towards prena and rishabh)
Anurag: Big b, you left this aswell
(Anurag hands the documents to rishabh)
Rishabh: Anu...Preni...
(Rishabh has tears in his eyes and Anurag is shocked)
Anurag: Big B whats wrong?
And why is Roshni Crying?
Rishabh: Not Roshni...Prena...Preni..
(Anurag Is even more shocked as he looks at prena with full open eyes)
(Anurag Has tears in his eyes)
Anurag: You don't know how long we've all been waiting for this...we're finally reunited..Preni i've seen you changed..
Prena: Yeah..You and Rish have too..and uhem don't call me preni call me prena.
(Rishabh and Anurag Laugh)
Rishabh: Prena...Theres one more thing in your life that will be coming back..Thats your son, prem.
(Prena Is Even more shocked)
Prena: PREM! WHERE IS HE? I HAVEN'T SEEN HIM! MY HEART CRIES FOR MY SON!
Anurag: Yeah Ok prena..just..
Prena: YOU DONT UNDERSTAND I NEED TO SEE MY SON!
(Anurag tries to argue but Rishabh says no)
Rishabh: Ok Prena, We'll go see prem..but not now hes gone to business conferance...he'll be back after few days.
Prena: You mean By HIMSELF?
Anurag: god, all you mothers are all the same! Big B sent ANJALI with him...
(Anurag Blushes when he says Anjali, and Gives Rishabh a dirty look as Rishabh Starts Laughing)
Prena: ? Whats with Anu
Rishabh: Nothing Nothing..
(Rishabh Smirks at Anurag and Anurag Smiles and Looks away)
(Prem and Mukti and Anjali are at a Party)
(Prem keeps looking at Anjali, and doesn't realise Mukti Speaking)
(Mukti on the other hand just looks away and gives anjali a dirty look)
(Anjali is confused and Looks at the dancing couples)
(A man asks Anjali for a dance)
(Anjali Agrees)
(Anjali is dancing with the Man, when the song is over anjali tries to leave but the man doesn't let go he misbehaves with her, and prem totally loses it he hits the hell out of him and warns him)
Prem: DONT.YOU.DARE.IF.YOU.EVEN.LOOK.AT.HER.AGAIN.I'LL.KILL.YOU.
😡 😳
(Mukti is looking at all this with Shock, Anjali breaks down and leaves the party)
Mukti: I'll be right back prem.
(Anjali is in tears and has flashbacks of what happened)
Mukti: YOU ANJALI! Stop getting in the way of prem and me! FIRST MY PREM, NOW ANURAG UNCLE!
(Anjali shouts with anger)
Anjali: SHUT UP MUKTI! FIRST OF ALL, I'M NOT 'IN BETWEEN' ANYONE! ITS JUST YOU AND YOUR EGO THAT GETS IN THE WAY. AND I NEVER ASKED FOR EVERYTHING TO HAPPEN! YEAH WELL ITS ALL MY FAULT ISN'T IT?! OR IS IT MY FAULT THAT I'M YOUR BIG SISTER!
(Anjali and Mukti Give each other dirty looks with Anger)
(Mukti Leaves)
(Anjali Starts crying and Sits on a bench)
(Prem sits next to anjali)
Prem: I'm Sorry for whatever Mukti Did..she feels so insecure sometimes..
(Anjali Sighs)
Anjali: No..Maybe it was my fault..She was bound to feel insecure because you know you well..
Shes my little sister, we might have fights and all but it doesn't mean that i hate her...I didn't know mukti hated me that much...
(A Tear falls down Anjali's Cheeks)
(Prem Wipes Anjali's Tears, Anjali Looks at Prem)
Prem: Hey..Don't worry about it..it'll be ok..its not your fault..
(Theres an Eyelash on Anjali's Cheek)
Prem: Hey Look..
(Prem Takes the eyelash from Anjali's cheek, and Places it on her hand)
Prem: Your wish..
(Anjali Closes her eyes, and Prem Just stares at her, he smiles and blushes, he also closes his eyes)
(At the same time, they blow on Anjalis Hand)
(Anjali opens her eyes and so does prem)




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woootttttttt!


Anjali
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Posted: 19 years ago
#72
Great writer you Anjali:)) Keep writing- your fan-fic rox!
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Posted: 19 years ago
#73

Originally posted by: ronitfan

Great writer you Anjali:)) Keep writing- your fan-fic rox!



Thanks so much! 😆
Today i just had an English Exam, and i just had a total nervous breakdown. 😆
I was sitting there for 10mins thinking what i should write, and i wrote 4 pages for my exam.

Anjali 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
#74
nice story, u know u should write serials instead of ekta
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Posted: 19 years ago
#75
Thats awsome anjali.good work. 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
#76
hey anjali
pehle janam mein tum writer thi kya
itna aachaa kaise likthi ho
wow tum ekta ki family mein se ho kya
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Posted: 19 years ago
#77

Originally posted by: Ali

hey anjali
pehle janam mein tum writer thi kya
itna aachaa kaise likthi ho
wow tum ekta ki family mein se ho kya



😆

No i dont think so, but my english teacher really pushes me to be insperational..I'm Gifted! 😆

😊 Creativity leads to Insperation and Insperation leads me to this fan-fic!
😛



Anjali
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Posted: 19 years ago
#78
Thanks so much everyone!
😃
Writing another chapter soon!

Anjali
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Posted: 19 years ago
#79
Chapter 14:
(Anjali opens her eyes, and so does prem)
Anjali: umm..
Prem: Umm..
(Anjali gets up and leaves, but Prem holds her hand. Anjali turns around)
Anjali: Prem..Don't. I'm Older than you...we can't..it can't happen.
Prem: I never meant that, And your only few years older than me! 😆
Anjali: I have too much on my mind now, dont be a part of my broken life. i have no space for anyone anymore.
(Prem Frowns Secretly)
Prem: Anjali, i never meant that we should be together that girl in my life who i'm going to spent my entire life with is mukti..
(Anjali Smiles)
Anjali: I hope the best for you and mukti..i have to go now bye..
Prem: Bye.
(Anjali leaves, and Prem Frowns)
(Anjali is walking through the park, to her car)
(Anjali Trips over a rock and falls down)
(She starts to hear laughs, but they're her hullucinations)
(A red dupatta is lying on Prem 1's Grave, *its the same red dupatta which Anurag and Prena had* Anjali is shocked)
(Anjali starts running, she hears Broken Bangles, Laughing)
Anjali: No..NO! GO AWAY!
(Anjali Runs to the Temple, she trips over and hits her head. the blood on her head is like her sindoor.)
(Her Feet is covered with blood, because she ran through broken bangles)
(Anjali is on the floor shocked that before the red dupatta was on prem 1's grave now it was on the floor infront of her, it drops on her head)
(Anjali hears laughs, she turns around and its Komolika and Apo*na!)

(Anjali is even more shocked)

(Apo*na and Komolika laugh)
Komolika: Aww Look at Anjali, Poor thing.
Apo*na: Suprised to see us again?
Komolika: You've already seen what we done before, but this was a little starter before you go completely insane and ask us to kill you! because you have nothing in your life...just a big loser.
(Apo*na laughs, and Anjali is Angry)
Apo*na: Have you recognised that Red Dupatta Anjali? Its The Same Red Dupatta when Anurag and Prena...
(Anjali is shocked)
Anjali: What do you mean Anurag and Prena?
Komolika: Don't you know?! And i thought you was smart..Anurag and Prena Loved each other with all the romances going on between them....
(Komolika and Apo*na Smirk)
Anjali: You know what? i'm not afraid of you two! You've already ruined my house, and i'm not going to let you again? You say this is the starter? well i'm ready for anything. Just wait and watch.
(Anjali Points at Komolika and Apo*na)
(Apo*na and Komolika smirk)
Komolika: Look Kid, you can never act like us, and talk to us with respect..or else.
we're professional players..
(Anjali Interupts)
Anjali: First of all don't call me kid, and who would want to act as horrid like you. you two dont HAVE any SELF-RESPECT, so what respect should i give to you two?
You Think you two are Professionals right? Well lets see if the beginner can outdone two professionals. you tried to bring back the past which i would never want to turn back on.
Just wait and Watch.
Apo*na: Hmph, a big girl with a big mouth..Well we are going to let you re-live your past, we're not going to leave you or that traitor. we'll set such a fire that you and your whole family are going to burn and rot in it. Oh and if you tell anyone about us, we'll tell everyone about you...
(Komolika smiles and Apo*na laughs)
(Komolika and Apo*na Leave)
(Anjali Drops down and Starts crying)
Anjali thinks to herself:
'What am i going to do now? I decleared the war, but i dont know how to carry on..if i tell everyone they'll tell...i don't know what to do! i can't see my family suffer...i just don't know what to do!'
(A tear falls down Anjalis cheek)
(Prem Comes, Prem is Shocked)
Prem: ANJALI! OMG! WHAT HAPPENED! WHAT ARE YOU DOING ON THE FLOOR? YOUR BLEEDING!
(Anjali looks up and breaks down)
(She runs to prem and crys on his shoulders)
(Prem Freezes and Trys to console Anjali)
(Anjali's Red Dupatta falls down, now they look like Anurag and Prena)
(Mukti Comes, with a angry look on her face turns around and calls Rishabh, Anurag And Prena Here)
Mukti: Hello Uncle? Come quickly, yes Uncle please its important.
(Mukti gives Prem and Anjali a dirty look, but they dont see mukti)
(Anurag, Rishabh and Prena come)
(Anurag Rishabh and Prena are shocked)
(Anurag Looks at Prena and Prena Looks at Anurag as they see Anjali And Prem)
(Anurag Imagines that instead of prem and anjali its Anurag and Prena)
:Flashbacks of Prena and Anurag Occur:
(Rishabh Frowns, and thinks back to the time when he saw Anurag and Prena Hug like Anjali and Prem)




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Another chapter i hope you liked!



Anjali

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Posted: 19 years ago
#80
oh nice story but isnt the sweet scenes supppose to happen between mukti n prem 😕

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