~~~Feeling~~~ (SK+LRL ff) prt73 pg128 last prt

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Deepa

@spvd

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Posted: 15 years ago

#571

nice part but sujal left KMA.................thats the only thing didnt jibe well..................both are missing each other like hell..................hope they meet once more and they cant control their feelings and etc etc.............has got some kinds premonition??????????well cont soon dear...............

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nilanjana

@NilzStorywriter

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Posted: 15 years ago

#572

Originally posted by: spvd
nice part but sujal left KMA.................thats the only thing didnt jibe well..................both are missing each other like hell..................hope they meet once more and they cant control their feelings and etc etc.............has got some kinds premonition??????????well cont soon dear...............

yup i told u naa sujal ke sapne sach hote hain

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bd670816

@bd670816

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Posted: 15 years ago

#573

lovely update neelu. hope they met soon

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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

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Posted: 15 years ago

#574

nice part Hope the two of them stop being so stubborn and accept each others love.

Dono jaldi se mil jaye.

please continue soon

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Purnima

@-purnima-

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#575

Nice update.. 😊....but a sad one... 😔...sk missing each other...dono ka kya hoga ?? Hope they meet soon....lets see wat destiny has planned 4 SK... Continue asap.. Gud to know ur exams going well... All the best 😊

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

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Posted: 15 years ago

#576

sorryyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy neelu main tere fic mein comments nahin kaar paaye but i must say all the parts are just sooooooooooooooo beautiful😊😊😊😊 but offcourse sad full of sorrow😭😭😭 yeh sujal kashish se itna pyaar karta haai😊😊 jealous ho sakta😉😉 but he cant confess his love to kashish😡😡😡 what type of idiot he is 😡sorry idiots are inteliject as we have seen 3 idiots so we cant compare sujal with any idiots 😛but really yaar is sujal ko kuch akal toh do 😒😒😔

plz bring back sujal into kashish life 😊

cont soon and sorry for late comments

love u neelu (all the best for ur practicals )😊

khub bhallo kore exams dish 😊aar plz aamar comments reply korish na holee i will get angry with u this time 😡😡

plz i have written fic on RN if u guys read it then i will be very much happy https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/fan-fictions/1405379/nafrat-3?pn=25& nafrat

Edited by ronojoy_ria - 15 years ago

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annanya

@zenia

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Posted: 15 years ago

#577

hey awsome part...

wen will they meet yaar...

want them to be together...

waiting 4 the next part..

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Sana

@sweetangel_25

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Posted: 15 years ago

#578

you wrote it very well neelu....their missing each other....every bit was good...informative in engg language...hehe...i was reading it again n again...specially kashish's part...how can he do this to her yr...atleast he is with his family n frnds...n busy with marriage preps....but she is all alone there...with tht void in her life....just existing...do something yr....kafi emotional part tha...actually...stagnant like u said...everything happening for the sake of it....bas every1s moving wid life....n why is he getting dreams of her in trouble....chuda scene was good ha....specially tht dream relation...i personally like chuda a lot....even though v dnt have it in our customs...lets hope kashish ka chuda bhi sujal ki mom he de...hehe...lovely part...cont soon...tc....

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amrutha,akhila

@ammuakhi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#579

lovely part yaar

both of them are missing each other terribily

hope they meet soonnnnnnnnnnnn

ammu

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nilanjana

@NilzStorywriter

Dazzler

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Posted: 15 years ago

#580

part 47

Naina looks at the lifeless kashish who is sitting all alone in a corner, lost in a thought.

'main di ko aise nahi dekh sakti , kuch karna hoga mujhe'

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There is a knock at principal's door.

Principal-come in

Naina enters his cabin.

Naina-sir, aapke pass captain sujal ka number to hoga naa.

Principal-par tumhe..kyun?

Naina-sir, aap bhi jaante hai naa sir aur kashish mam..kya aap nahi chahte wo dono mil jaye..?

Principal-haan par number se kya hoga?

Naina-kam se kam kuch to hoga, abhi to kuch bhi nahi ho raha hai.

Principal-hmm, waise abhi to captain apne ghar pe honge unke bhai ki shaadi hai naa.

Naina-to ghar ka hi number de dijie naa.

Principal gives her the number & naina happily goes to puja, huda, yudi alekh & ali to show it.

Puja-arre wah number –shumber mil gaya.

Naina-hana abb hum phone karte hain.

Ali-par phone kerke kahenge kya

Naina-pata nahi, par kuch to..i cant see her like this, main phone kar rahi hoon

She dials the number.

'Hello'

Naina-hello ! chirag sir aap? Main Naina.

Chirag-hey Naina kaisi ho?

Naina-main to thik hoon, par mam thik nahi.

Chirag-yahan hamare sujal ka bhi ye hi haal hai

Naina-to kuch socho naa, karo naa kuch unhe milvaane ke lie.

Chirag-milna to tabhi hoga jab tum yahan aao.

Naina-wahan hum? Delhi mein? Kaise?

Chirag-hey I got an idea.

Chirag tells her all the plan, & naina is happy to hear it.

Naina-plan to achcha hai, par faculty aur principal ko kaun manayega

Chirag-unse main baat kar lunga.

Naina-fine lets do it.

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kashish knocks a the principal cabin in the morning.

Principal-come in

k-sir aapne mujhe bulaya?

Principal-haan, main students ke lie kuch innovative karne ka soch raha tha. Kyun naa hamare behterin students ko, jinhone dosti aur bahaduri ki misaal di hai jaise alekh, naina, yudi ali, puja..inn sabko inama dia jaye.

k-inhe hi bass..? kaisa inaam?

Principal-inko educational tour pe Delhi dikhane le jaate hain, aur ye responsibility main umhe deta hoon, kashish.

k-Delhi? Iss waqt? Wahan to abhi bohot garmi hogi. Why don't you choose a hill station. Aur main? Akele? Koi male faculty bhi to saath mein..

principal-wo..nahi..wo..maine Delhi mein hotel bhi book kara diya hai..aur male faculty waise maine Abhimanyu ko kaha tha, par he is suffering from viral he cant go.

k-viral? Kal hi to main unse mili..tab to thik the.

Principal-nahi bass abhi ho gaya…wo get ready pack your bags..kal nikalna hai.

k-kal hi? Itni jaldi?

Principal-haan haan, sab book ho gaya hai tum bass jao.

k-ok sir

kashish goes