Tuhi Mera Jahaan (AR) Part 14 UPDATED 19 Sept 2013 - Page 30

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: janu1610

awesome part.............love it to core......

thanks for pm.
love
ritu

thanks janu ...
well ..kaise ho
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: ryka_27

nice part...

RM banter is good..

cont. soon with longer part..

thnx for the pm...

thanks ..i will 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: amruta04

hey nice part loved it do continue soon take care and thanks for the pm.

thanks ..i will try
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: -Khushboo-

Lovleyy Part..

But Too Short...
Gr8 Wrk..
Thanxzz For The PM 😊
-Khushboo-

thanks 😉
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Miracle_sweet

AWESOME UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

sorry for the short comment actually i have a presentation for geo tomorrow so yeah!!!!
Love you
Mira

thanks mira and no problem
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 6 ( Armaan speaks with heavy voice because of his accent)

Rahul moved toward her but before he could touch her Atul who happened to be trying to solve their problem yelled STOP IT BOTH OF YOU
Due to noise Ridhima got conscious and looked around and Muskaan ran toward her as also Atul too ran toward her but rahul came to Armaan and took the needle from his skin as she doesn't need more blood ...while Ridhima who jerked and sat straight up

R ' Muski woh bacha kaha aur main yaha kaise ayyi

M ' ridzi woh bacha bilkul theek hai aur apni mom ke paas hai ... aur tu kya sooch rahi thi agar tujhe kuch ho jata ha... kya juruat thi superwomen banye ki aa jatti truck ke neeche(ridhima looked down as she doesn't want to face her) toh mera kya hota achha huya ki armaan ne tujhe bacha liya warna..

R- (Confused) Armaan

Ra ' ha arey jisne tujhe bacha tha...

Ridhima remembered the blue eyes boy who she was staring at.

R - Arye jad aya kaha hai woh..blue...

M ' kya?? chado...woh b jayi hai aur tujhe blood b diya hai (but before she could say anything they were interrupted by their pager's and all three left saying bye and ridhima still haven't seen armaan as he went to the washroom as he got his needle out

Anjali came and saw ridhima who was lost in thoughts about armaan..about how he saved her and now also gave her the blood why was he doing that and she remmembered when he touched her she felt spark in all of her body she never felt this before and she didn't knew why she felt protected and secure in his arms...it was like magic she couldn't pinpoint what kind of feeling she felt when ever she think of him it was like her body was on heat but Anjali broke her trance

An ' look who do we have here challo achi baat hai aaj ghar par tumare darshan nahi hoge aur hum chan ki need soyege...par muhje yeh samaj nahi ayyea ki tum bach kaise gayi ...kher anyway abb bach gayi ho parkas tak tck tck tck saying that she left Riddhima in tears

Armaan who was coming from the washroom has listened and saw everything as his eyes moved from Anjali who left to ridhima he saw the tears in her eyes who she was trying to hide or preventing from falling...Armaan so wanted to slap that Anjali but he knew he always respect girls so and he also knew Riddhima is his first proerty ..and he was shocked when she become my responsibillity and how but he felt sense of belonging when he thought Riddhima is his responsibility he felt happines in his body

Anjali left as her pager rang and Armaan came and sat on the chair beside her bed...

Ridhima who was lost in the came in present due to noise which armaan made while sitting...

R ' APP!!!

A ' Why were you waiting for someone else...

R ' nahi i mean app yaha...

A ' soocha ki apna thank you tu leta jaoo

R ' sorry no i mean thank you very much appne mujhe bacha kar bahot bada ehasaan kiya hai

A ' your welcome Signore

R ' What

A ' I mean you're welcome young lady (smiled at her)

Ridhima doesn't know what to say she was just fiddling with her fingers and armaan was just looking at her with lost eyes ... After when nobody said anything so armaan tried to start the conversation.

So I heard that you are a doctor here said Armaan breaking the silence between them...

Ridhima looked up... ji... oh i mean ha intern hoo internship kar rahi hoon

A ' (Smiled) well then Dr Ridhima right... (Ridhima nodded) so how is it to be a doctor..

R ' Actually to be honest being doctor is really fun ... there is a time when you face up and down in your career but the fun part is that app bahot se logo se milte hain ache borre. Ridhima Looked up and saw armaan was looking at her without blinking his eyes and as ridhima saw toward him she also got lost in his eyes ... they were still staring until ... our beautiful gang Atul , Muskaan and rahul decided to break they eye blink compition and they came inside as they had break now..

Hello ji ... Muskaan just came rushing in the ward and put her elbow on armaan's shoulder and all looked at her except Armaan who was feeling as he is also a member of their gang like apnapan... as armaan smiled then nobody objected as they all know who can stop Muskaan from doing something...

Ra ' how are u feeling Armaan

A ' Actually good I didn't knew that this incident will bought many friends in my life and that so quick..

Ra ' Quick...

A ' hmmm actually I just came to India in the morning...and it is quick ...

M ' so kitho ayea subah (even ridhima wanted to ask same thing)

Armaan was about to answer but awww too bad his phone rang.

A ' (Answering the phone...) Hello

A ' Yes Mr Sharma

A ' Actually I am in sanjeevani hospital.

A ' Oh this is the one...

A ' For how much... okay don't worry my manager will transfer the money in your account and i will dig the past records by myself... And Mr. Sharma can you fix an appointment with Real Estate for tonight... thank you

Armaan hang up and everybody looked at him

A ' What...

Done guys sorry always chota part deti hoon

but next part will on tuesday promise and lamhe also wil be up on tuesday

Next Part

thanks Love Heaven/jannat DO COMMENT
Edited by HeAvEnS - 13 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Yay! me first this time...Heaven thanks for updating..and yeah as always it's a fun-filled update..AR interaction is so cute..Armaan's character is so charismatic and the AR eye-lock was..😛 our gang are amazing and their scenes with one another and with AR are the best thing i like in ur FF..thnxx for the great scenes

but yes..very short update (but if forgive you..😉) and glad to know you're updating this one and Lamhe on tuesday..can't wait for the update :P
Edited by i_clueless - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesomeeee update
it was short bt its ok
contineu soon
n thanks for pm
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Posted: 15 years ago

HEY !

LOVELY PART ! JUST LUVVVVVVVVVED IT !
GOOD GOING........THANX FOR THE PM.......
PLS DO CONTINUE..................
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: i_clueless

Yay! me first this time...Heaven thanks for updating..and yeah as always it's a fun-filled update..AR interaction is so cute..Armaan's character is so charismatic and the AR eye-lock was..😛 our gang are amazing and their scenes with one another and with AR are the best thing i like in ur FF..thnxx for the great scenes

but yes..very short update (but if forgive you..😉) and glad to know you're updating this one and Lamhe on tuesday..can't wait for the update :P

yeeah u r first
welcome
thanks glad u loved it
AR hayye
even i think so 'GREEK GIFT"
well thanks i love UR COMMENt it is really sweet and yes i wil update this on tuesday
thanks Love Heaven and then i hope i would be forgiven

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