SANRAJ*Moment** WATCHING Part 6** (P48 Pg143) - Page 63

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mani10

Such a nice episode,pure and innocent love between Santu and DM.Wish they would show something like this in the show.I love the way you narrate the scenes,filled with detail ,every emotion beautifully described.Keep them coming!

Mani

Thanks Mani, really appreciate your kind words, encourages me to write more.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: SanRajDeewani

Even though i don't watch the show.. I read your FF still Shah..🤗
It was just brilliant.. love your writing.. =)

😲 I'm rubbing my eyes, is it true - joking na know what you mean Bandini not what it used to be the good old days, but thanks for checking it out Sanj 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
Oh Shahara ....i'm in seventh heaven reading such lovely moments and so much love between Sanraj....iur writing is so amazing ...... 🤗 🤗 for u .....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Shahara3



<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" color="#660099" size="2">😲I'm rubbing my eyes, is it true - joking na know what you mean Bandini not what it used to be the good old days, but thanks for checking it out Sanj 🤗</font>

Anytime for you.. =) By the way.. I will PM you soon, just a little busyy.. :D

*ps.. my new FF on LTL is up.. Its called Vital Signs.. <3 Have a look if you get chance.. 😆 🤗 Thanks.. x x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
just read your previous paart and i agree with sukhi when she said
Oh my gosh..

So touching, 😳
so romantic, ☺️
so beautiful 😳

LOVEDDDD it!!!

Thank you so much! 🤗
PArt 26 -
OMg DM explaining how santo lloks is just special to the core - loved it
im liking this lil romance between them
and DM needs santo for his work😆😳
once again shah u have won my heart
sorry for reading them late mwah xxxxxxxx
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Posted: 15 years ago
Suraj enters the room at the wrong time...😆😆 Ur such a mindblowing writer...the way u describe each scene is simply amazing...😊
I'm completely fida!!! Well next epi. wld be dhamkedar wit moti being around Sanraj...😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awww shah...amazing...ur always rocking...kaddank talk abt sanraj was wowow...ya no1 cud 4get thr first love...baa always scolded babuji...poor babuji...nd awwww Cute santu...shes worried abt her tummy...cho chweet...hw cute dm replied her shes the most beautiful women in the world...again suraj interruptd dm's romance,.OMG...nd the way dm said wen ur married,u'll knw abt it...hahaha...realy dear cho chweet,naughtx,funny...post ur next soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
🤗Thanks guys for all your comments means alot to me 🤗🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago

Salaam Friends

Hi guys I'm back with more of our favourite Jodi our Dufford couple SANRAJ!

Sanraj story continues from the

Part 26 ~ Thoughts from the Heart ~ Pg80

list of all my ffs on pg1
and here goes.................

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SANRAJ SURPRISE
🥳🥳🥳PARTY 🥳🥳🥳
PART 27
Champa and a few of the other servants hard at work cleaning for the surprise party, Champa kneeling down polishing the furniture looks up and sees Khaddank coming to the door, she smiles and gets up calling Baa. Baa got a call from Shanky the night before telling her that he and Khaddu will be making a surprise visit and not to tell anyone, Baa kept the secret but told only Champa as she wanted her help to get the house in order. Baa welcomes Khaddank and gives them her blessings. Bapuji and Moulik hear Khaddu's voice and laughter and come out of the sitting area next to DM's library where they were talking about Cricket and hug Khaddank and love the surprise visit. Thoral upon hearing Suraj running through the corridor holding Santu's hand yelling "Khaddu Di and Jiju have come, Khaddu Di and Jiju have come" come out their room and follow down the stairs with DM following calling out to Suraj to be careful and not to run. Khaddank both take SANRAJ blessings and Khaddu hugs Santu.

Santu: Khaddu, Jamairaj why didn't you call and let us know you were coming, its been so long since you were here but its good you came.

Khaddu: Maa I didn't know either until Shashank told me this morning and we are here for a reason giggling

Santu: Khaddu what reason? Tell me.

Shanky: Uh uh, Santu we just come, come sit and lets just talk Shanky nudging Khaddu, DM is watching thinking these two are up to something.

DM: Jamairaj bhess bhess bhess, what are you two cookin up????

Khaddu: Nothing Dad, tell me are you taking care of Maa or are you busy with work all the time like Shashank, he brings his work at home and ignores me?

Suraj: Di, Pappa always brings work home all the time, today Pappa would not let go of Maa's hand and let her leave the bedroom because he needed Maa to help him with his work but I wanted Maa to come and see you, then Pappa said to leave Maa and that when I get married and have children and then I'll know what he means. Di I dont understand, what work does Pappa need to do that he cannot do without Maa, Maa does not work in the factory???

DM: Shoo bolicheh tu, je man me avi bolicheh dufford!

DM is embarrassed and trying to shut Suraj up and so is Santu, Baa, Hiral are laughing.

Santu: SuSuraj....erm....Pappa has a lot of work so...erm... Maa was helping him, go and call Birwa and tell her that Khaddank are here.

Suraj: Ok Maa.

Baa: Areh Dharamraj, I forgot to tell you, Guruji called and asked for you and Santu to go to the Mandhir after lunch he wants to talk to you about the Naming Rasam and when a good date will be, so you and Santu go.

DM: Guruji called? Ok me and Santudi will go. OK sit and talk, I'm going to go and finish my work.

Baa: Do you want Santu to help you Dharamraj?

DM walks off as if he did not hear anything, Baa just laughs.

EVENING - M'MANSION

DM and Santu get out the car from after meeting Guruji and walk to the house, the doors are open but the lights are off at the front of the house and its hard to see, Santu holds on to DM's arm whilst he leads her.

Santu: Malik, where is everyone and why are the lights off, do you think the electricity has gone?

DM: I don't know but lets get in and I'll find out.

Once SANRAJ walk in, the lights turn on and SURPRISE!!!!!!!!! and hundreds of red and pink rose petals fall on SANRAJ, everyone rushes up to SANRAJ congratulating and surprising them, SANRAJ take blessing from Baa and Bapuji and everyone hugs Santu, whose extremely happy and shocked. DM watches Santu who is thrilled with the surprise and it makes him happier. Baa goes over to DM and pats him on the arm.

DM: Whats all this?

Thoral: Pappa its yours and Sassumaa little surprise party to say congratulations on the pregnancy, that there will be another Mahiyavanshi member on their way to us soon and we planned to throw this party when we found out Sassumaa became pregnant at the hospital but theres not been a good time and we wanted to do it before Sassumaa's Godh Bharna Rasam. How did you like our surprise then??????

DM: Dikra bohot achi surprise.

Khaddu: You both go and get dressed your clothes have been put out for you in your room and come down quick, we have other surprises for you.

DM: Chal Santudi, lets get dressed.

Santu puts on her saree whilst DM puts on his Kurta both gifted to them by Khaddank both matching outfits in red with similar work. DM dressed goes and combs his hair whilst Santu applies her makeup both standing infront of the mirror in their routine when getting dressed and ready for a party, DM puts out his hand and Santu passes him his aftershave, Santu hand him a safetypin and he joins her paloo to the back of her saree and ties up her blouse at the back. Santu goes to put on her jewellery but DM stops her and walks over to the wardrobe and brings out a box and opens it.

DM: Today I want you to wear this set that I purchased for you and was going to give it to you at your Godh Bharna Rasam but as today its a special occasion, I want you to wear it.

Santu: Malik its beautiful but you didn't have to, I would have worn one of the other sets that you gave me, you dont need to buy me anything.

DM: I specially bought this for you and I don't need a reason to buy you anything do I, I'm your husband and it makes me happy to see you dressed in nice sarees, jewels and when I see something I like and it suits you, I don't think, I just buy it but can I say one thing.

Santu: Kya?

DM: Even without this jewellery, you are looking beautiful in this saree and one of my favourite color on you, red makes you more beautiful, do you know what color of red means?

Santu: Kya Malik?

DM: Love and you look like a bride, my bride.

DM moves closer to Santu and caresses her face looking down into her eyes and Santu looking up into his. DM takes the earrings and puts them on each of her ears gently, he takes the necklace and puts it round her neck and the challa on her head clipping it into her hair, straightens the bindi and takes some sindoor from the pot and fills Santu's maang with it. Takes a step back, looking admiringly at Santu, hands on his hips...

DM: Ek dom sundoor (very beautiful) chal, lets go downstairs and enjoy the party.

Santu: Malik, I want to say something to you also, you look handsome, you always do but this red kurta makes you more....dashing like a groom, my groom.... Santu blushes

DM smiles at Santu and takes her hand and they walk to the party. Hiral and Khaddank are already in their disputes what they are going to do and then the girls decide singing starts first:-

Thoral: ye kaisa ladka hai - what sort of boy is this?

Hiten: ye kaisi ladki hai - what sort of girl is this?

Thoral: isaka mai kya karu - what shall I do with him?

Hiten: is se mai kya kahu - what do I say to her?

Thoral: ye ladta hai - he fights with me

Hiten: akadti hai - she irritates me

Thoral: jhagadta hai, - he harasses me,

Hiten: bigadti hai - She gets upset
deewana hai, deewaani hai - He's crazy! She's crazy!

Thoral:

hay hay re hay ye ladka hay hay re hay - Oh my, this boy

karta nadaania - why does he do these

kyo puchho to hay - stupid things?Go ask him!

kabhi ye ham se ladta hai - sometimes he fight with me,

kabhi jhugadta hai - sometimes he quarrels

koi paas is ke na aana -don't come near this one

ye ladka hai deewana hai deewana - this boy is crazy, he's crazy

Hiten:

hay hay re hay ye ladki hay hay re hay - oh my, this girl

karti nadaania - go ask her why

kyo puchho to hay - she does these stupid things

kabhi ye ham se ladti hai - sometimes she fights with me,

kabhi akadti hai - sometimes she irritates me.

karo dure se chedakhani - tease her, but only from a distance

ye ladki hai deewani, hai deewani - this girl is insane, she's insane!

is ki baate yehi jaane - only she understands what she says

koi bhi to jaane na - nobody else does!

aisi vaisi, kaisi hai ye - she's like this,then like that,

koi pahachaane na - no one can figure her out.

to bhaago O yaaro - so run for your life, friends,

kar na de shaitaani - because she's up to some mischief!

ye ladki hai deewani, hai deewani - this girl is crazy, she's crazy!

Khaddu:

ye ladka hai deewana, hai deewana - this boy is crazy, he's crazy!

aate jaate - he comes and goes,

chede ham ko - he harasses us,

ki maane na ye kehana - he won't listen to what we say

dekho dekho - look out, look out,

paagal hai ye - this one's insane!

ha, bachake zara rehana - yes, keep clear of him

ye aisa hai phir bhi - he's everything I said

apana is ko maana - yet still he's dear to me

ye ladka hai deewana, hai deewana - his boy is crazy, he's crazy!

Shanky:

ho, ye ladki hai deewani - hey, this girl is crazy,

hai deewani - she's crazy!

is ki baate yehi jaane - only she understands what she says

koi bhi to jaane na - nobody else does!

aisi vaisi, kaisi hai ye - she's like this,then like that,

koi pahachaane na - no one can figure her out.

to bhaago O yaaro - so run for your life, friends,

kar na de shaitaani - because she's up to some mischief!

ye ladki hai deewani, hai deewani - this girl is crazy, she's crazy!

Khaddu & Thoral:

ye ladka hai deewana hai deewana - this boy is crazy, he's crazy!

SANRAJ, Baa and Bapuji are sitting together watching clapping and laughing and then all of a sudden they hear a familiar voice....

Moti: Whats going on?

Baa: Taru.....

DM: Motiben, your here...

DM remembers that Moti phoned yesterday, he cut the line and he has not called her back, he was going to visit but told Kanji not to let her come to the house as he was busy and he did not want Santu to contend with her whilst he was not there. Santu gets up holding on to her stomach. Moti just stares at Santu, shocked looking at Santu's tiny bump, to her stomach to DM confused. DM gets up, stands tall and walks over to Moti and then Moti feels like her world is spinning and then...thumppppppp...the mansion shakes...Moti faints on the floor. Everyone runs to Moti, Champa runs to DM and hands him a jug of water, DM sprinkles water on Moti, she gains consciousness, looks at DM and then at Santu and faints again. Champa tips the whole jug onto Moti, thinking whoops and watching, here we go...... Moti screeches and flaps her hands about. DM and Hiten help Moti up and take her over to the sofa where she lays with her eyes closed mumberling some words.....

Champa: Malik, mujeh mufkoro, I thought Benbaa might wakes up with more water..... in a lower voice Hitler has come, lets see what drama she does now and what Malik does. I just hope Benbaa does not upset Malkin.

To be continued.....

Precap.....Moti has lost her voice......

Suraj takes advantage of a mute foi......

DM tells Moti hes happy to be a dad again and she a foi 😕............

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Edited by Shahara3 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
dear Shahara3
thank you for your beautiful and funny ff especially suraj 😆
i am waiting for next part😍
best wishes


Edited by bahane - 15 years ago

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