Its True Love. .. .That Never Ends! ❤️- Page 31

Originally posted by: -Sid-

as far as i can see, it is a wonderful story line. and a very apt way that you have written it. very hooking story. do continue soon and please pm me.

Originally posted by: nidhi4gud

Thanks Sid. 😊

Originally posted by: -Sid-

you are welcome

should i post my descriptive comment on the story till now???😕

Originally posted by: -Sid-

well firstly i liked the way you started with the diary entry and disclosed only what was needed for the part. describing her feeling in as less words as possible. coz for a good writer that counts.

then your precaps are amazing. holding onto this piece and lead one to think endlessly about what is gonna happen next. but then you come up with something that has not been yet thought off and give it in a unique way.

the parts were fully written, not missing anything in them, right from the start, shriya's feeling for shaan and his hatred for ayush, then the flashbacks here and their. her mom's feelings, ayush's feelings and the pure love of shriya for shaan.

then the past being revealed slowly was extremely well written as well. As all stories go, this one also has a rough patch but slight differently. Ayush being the attitude and hidden from truth character expressed his anger aptly and at the same time shriya being head over heels in love with him gave the perfect scene. then the cupid's entry and their love story blossoming is a perfect going. loved the way they interact like mature people.

well a few things i noted.

avni ran after she sprained her leg.🤣🤣

the length's are very less.

but over all it is very good and delicious piece of story.

Originally posted by: Jiah.Angel

Hi :)

Sorry, em late! 😕 Anyway, it's terrific! You know that, dun you? Story aye bhaad mein . . main toh tumhare writing style pe fida hun! 😆 Kash, aise acche ladke bhi hote! 🤣

Continue ASAP! And try your hand some other ventures too, OSes likh ya phir ek naya FF . . 😉

-Kanky

Originally posted by: nidhi4gud

Oh My Gosh!! I cannot believe you paid so much of attention to each and every bit of it!! Its just unbelievable for me!! It feels as if I have just started afresh!
*Avni was pretending to have sprained her leg.😛 I mentioned a 😆 there.
*I am sorry about lengths, actually what happens is I myself get bored to read a lengthy FF update cause there is so much to read by so many friends. So, I make it short.😆

Thanks a lot for such a precise description of your views about the story. 😊 You really lifted my spirits.

Cheers,
Nidzi.