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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chandni! I didn't knw you write Fanfics yaar! Loving the character sketch. Please continue and add me in the PM list x x
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy dear,
when r u planning
to update next part
update soon


love
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice cs
dont 4get to pm me
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey very interesting concept.. do continue soon n plzz add me onto ur pm list..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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loved it plz pm me
and can't wait for the first part.
continue soon
love
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Part 1




Ridhima-"Papa mein ja rahi hoon sidhant ki saath" she said as she ran down the stairs. Shashank-"Teek hai, be careful" he said peeking out from the newspaper as he was sitting at the dinner table eating breakfast. Ridhima-"Ok papa bye" she said as she ran out the door.

Today was Ridhima's first day at FIDA which stands for Film Industry Desi Academy this school is where everyone goes to be in the film industry for Bollywood movies. She has been excited for this for her whole entire life since she was 5.


~ FlashBack ~
Ridhima-"Papa jab mein badi ho jata hoon, toh mein FIDA join karlunga" she said as she was reading a book while sitting in shashank's lap. Shashank-"Teek hai beta, i will be waiting for that day" he said as he kissed her on the head.

~ End of FlashBack ~

Ridhima-"where is he" she said as she waited in front of her house to be picked up. Ridhima-"I'm going to be late, I'll just start walking" she started to walk towards the bus stop. She knows that every time he is late she always has to take the bus. She got to the bus stop when she heard someone honking. She didn't bother to look. But that person just kept on honking, after hearing that person honk for 5 minutes she knew who that was. Ridhima-"Shut up Sid" she turned around immediately giving Sid a stern look. Sid-"I'm sorry Ridhima" he said getting out of the car. Ridhima-"Why were you late huh?" she said turning around looking out in the open road to see if the bus had arrived or not. Sid-"Sorry baba, I was late because um I was late" he said hiding something behind his back. Ridhima noticed this and walked up to him, Ridhima- "What's that" she said walking up to him and reaching behind him. He moved away quickly. Sid-"It's nothing" he said trying to escape Ridhima's searching hands. Ridhima-"You better tell me what you're hiding behind your back" she said backing away with her hands on her hips. After a while Sid gave up and showed her what he had in his hands. Ridhima- "Mera liye?" she said as she took the chocolates into her hand. Sid-"No mera liye, of course yeh tumara liye hai" he said as he looked at her smiling and opening up the chocolates. Sid- "Don't you think I should get something in return" he said as he moved closer to her. Ridhima-"Yes I think you should" she said as she moved closer to him. He put his arms around her waist and pulled her closer he leaned in and Ridhima closed her eyes. Sid- "What was that for?" he said after Ridhima gave him a slight slap on the cheek, it didn't hurt though. She was running to the car Ridhima- "Because we are getting late hurry up and get into the car". Sid looked her and started to laugh he ran to car, started the engine and they drove off to FIDA. Ridhima was only a few miles away from her dream.




Sid-"Ridhima wake up were here" he said as he parked the car in the parking lot. Ridhima woke up and undid her seat belt. She stepped outside and was surprised. Ridhima-"Wow Sid look, this school is so beautiful" she said spinning with her arms wide open and stopping with her hands clasped together. Students of every shape and size were walking and chilling with friends. The building were tall and yet unique. This was definitely the dream she was dreaming since she was 5. Sid-"Yeah it is very beautiful" he said taking their bags out. Sid-"Let's go" he said extending his hand out. She took his hand and they both walked into" the school. Since this was a new year at FIDA some people didn't know anybody. Sid and Ridhima walked up to a group of youngsters that were standing near the entrance.

Sid & Ridhima- "Hi are you guys new to this school" they said walking into the group circle. ?-"Yeah were new what about you guys" she said looking at them. Sid-"Yeah were new too by the way I am Sid and this Ridhima, my girlfriend" he said pointing to himself and then Ridhima. ?-"Hi Ridhima, hi Sid, I'm Muskann" she said as she giggled really weird. Ridhima and Sid looked at each other and started to laugh to. ?-"Don't mind her she laughs that way, by the way I'm Rahul" he said shaking their hands, but then was hit on the arm. Muskann-"Chop raho duffer kay ka" she said after hitting Rahul. Rahul-"Sorry Muskii maaf karde na" he said putting his hand around her shoulders. Muskann-"Teek hai" she said and raised on her tip toe she gave Rahul a kiss. Ridhima and Sid looked at each other and then at Muskann and Rahul. Rahul-"Oh sorry, we didn't tell you me and Muskann are also boyfriend girlfriend" he said releasing Muskann from his side hug. Muskann-"Oh yeah we forgot to introduce you to our other friends, this Sapna, Atul and Anjali" she said pointing to them as she said their names. Atul, Sapna & Anjali-"Hi guys" they said shaking their hands. The group talked for a while and then the bell rang for class. Sid & Ridhima-"Bye guys" they said and left for their classes.




Sid-"Bye Ridhima I'll see you after class" he said as he kissed her goodbye. Ridhima closed her eyes as he kissed her and he pulled away, her eyes were still closed and she slowly opened them to see Sid already walking away "Bye" she said softly so that only she could hear it. "I have this feeling that something or someone is going to change my life" she thought to herself as she walked into the classroom. While Ridhima was walking in someone had tripped her, within a second Ridhima was in someone's hands as she lost balance and he held her by her waist. Ridhima was holding him from the shoulder tightly with her eyes closed with fear as she was anticipating a fall but he held her. Ridhima slowly opened her eyes only to find him staring at her. Ridhima couldn't remove her eyes from him, he was just so handsome, but the moment broke when she heard someone laughing. He stood her up straight and let go of her. Ridhima fixed her hair and straightened her suit and walked over to an empty seat.

?-"Oh my god that was so funny Monica" she said looking at Ridhima and laughing. Ridhima noticed this and figured out that it was that girl who had tripped her. Monica-"I know Nikki that was too good, did you see her face when she fell" she said looking back at Ridhima and laughing. Nikki-"I know that was so funny, but she was lucky that Armaan was there to catch her or else" they tried to control their laughter as the teacher came inside.

Teacher-"Good morning students and welcome to your first day at FIDA, I am Mrs. Mehra". Student-"Good morning Mrs. Mehra" they all said as they took their seats. Mrs. Mehra-"Everybody I know this is your first day, but school is school so I will be introducing you to a project that will be due next Friday, this will be a partner project" she said handing papers to everyone. After hearing that it would be a partner project everybody started scanning the room for the partner they want. Mrs. Mehra-"Before you guys start looking for your partners I would like you to look at the person seating next to you because that will be your partner. Everybody looked at the person seating next to them. Ridhima looked to see who was seating next to her. Ridhima-"Tum" she said softly so only that person could hear. ?-"Ha koi problem" that person said looking at her and smiling. Ridhima-"No" she turned around and looked at the front of the classroom. ?-"Hi I'm Armaan" he said extending his hand out to her. Ridhima-"Hi I'm Ridhima" she said shaking his hand. They both let go of each other and looked to the front of the class. Mrs. Mehra-"Ok, I am going to come around with a bowl inside the bowl are pieces of paper that say what your topic is going to be about". Mrs. Mehra went around the classroom and finally made it to the last table, Ridhima and Armaan's. Armaan-"Go ahead" he said pointing to the basket as Mrs. Mehra came to their table. Ridhima reached in and pulled a piece of paper out, she unfolded it and read out, "Romance". Armaan-"Oh wow romance, my thing, you know people call me Mr. Love" he said looking at Ridhima, she couldn't happen to do anything, but to laugh. Mrs. Mehra-"Don't get to excited because it is not going to be that easy, whatever your piece of paper says you are going to have to do a skit on that so I can see your acting skills, since you are in FIDA" she said scanning all the faces in the classroom.

Armaan looked at Ridhima -"KYAAAAAAAAA" he said. Ridhima-"Kya hua" she said looking at him. Armaan-"Look babes mein tumari saath nahi kam karna hai, you're sweet and all, but you don't look like the romance type of person" he said as he got up and went up to Mrs. Mehra. Ridhima-"He doesn't even know me, like people say don't judge a book by its cover" she said to herself as she saw him walking up to the teacher. Armaan-"Mrs. Mehra may I work with one else, like Nikki" he said looking at Nikki and winking at her, Nikki smiled back and turned red. Armaan-"Why Mrs. Mehra I don't want to work with her" he said pointing his hand to Ridhima, Ridhima looked at him weird and he turned back to the teacher. He nodded his head and made his way back to his seat. Ridhima looked up at him -"Kya hua, teacher nai kya kaha". Armaan-"Kya hua, teacher nai kya kaha" he mimicked back to her as he sat down. Armaan-"I'm stuck with you" Ridhima couldn't help, but laugh. Armaan-"Why are you laughing?" he said giving her a stern look. Ridhima-"Nothing" she said controlling her laughter, "Anyways when you were up there complaining I thought about what our skit can be about" she said handing him the paper. As Armaan read the paper he started to smile at times and frown at times. After 10 minutes of reading it Armaan-"Kya bakwass hai yeh" he said handing it back to her "That's why I said you don't seem like the romance person". Taking back the papers Ridhima-"So what do you think we should do" she said setting the papers on the desk and looking at him. He got up and started to describe the way they should do the skit and he changed who it was going to be on to her surprise he changed it from Heer and Ranja to Romeo and Juliet. As he described how everything would be set up and their costumes, their lines, their expressions, he explained everything. When he finally finished he turned around to find Ridhima looking at him dreamingly. He walked up to her and snapped her back to her senses -"Kya hua" he said looking at her. Ridhima-"Kuch nahi" she said sitting straight. Armaan-"So what did you think of my idea" look at her. Ridhima-"I like it, but when shall we start rehearsals" looking at him. Armaan-"What about after school?" Ridhima-"Ok, but where?" Armaan-"In the theater room where else" Ridhima-"Ok" they both started to write the script out together they were confident that they would be the best. Mrs. Mehra-"Ok class I will see you next class, and remember these skits have to be at least 5 minutes long and we will be going to the theater on Thursday of next week for you guys to practice on the stage" she waved them out of the class.




Armaan-"Ridhima, 3:30 at the theater" stopping Ridhima before she could disappear into the crowd. Ridhima-"Yeah, Bye" she got lost into the crowd before Armaan could say bye. Ridhima's classes went well as the day went by. She had lunch with Sid and made new friends. Ridhima and Sid became good friends with Rahul, Muskann, Atul, Anjali, and Sapna. Finally it was 3:30 and time for Ridhima to head to the theater.
Ridhima-"Sid don't worry, tell Papa I will be late I have to practice to with my partner for our project" Sid-"Ok, but are you sure you don't want me to stay" kissing her forehead. Ridhima-"Yeah I'm sure I'll take a cab back home, don't worry" she gave him a hug and left. She walked into the theater, where it was dark, cold, and seemed evil. She could not see her own shadow. Ridhima-"Armaan are you here" she walked inside with her arms feeling her surroundings making sure she wouldn't bump into anything. Ridhima-"Armaan are you here "she managed to make her way up on to the stage. She walked around on the stage looking for the switch. Ridhima-"AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH" she bumped into someone and all of a sudden the lights went on.


Thank for reading i hope everyone likes the first part if u do press the like button and well let me know if you want to be added to the PM List and hope to get more readers, Thank You
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow nice update.. do continue soon..thanx a lot for the pm..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice
waiting 4 ur next part
update soon 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG! Yaar I Had The Best Tym Reading This!!..Continuee!!..LOL..Muski Character Always Makes Me Laugh...LOL..Yippee! I Am Looking Forward For The Rehearsal!!Continue And Of Course PM...UFF This Is Going to Be One Romantic Story! AR Forever!! <333
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20
hey chandni. i must say an awesome start to a ff. looking forward to love story of armaan and riddhima.
plz update soon.

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