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Kripa stayed to their house till late at night. Angad was worried about her and didn't know where she went. He calls to khaana house and rahul tell him that kripa is not there he got even more worried. He hears a car voice and goes to the window and sees kripa coming out of a car. Kripa was coming toward the house when a guy came out and run to her and handed her something.
R: kripa u forgot rohits milk bottle
k: oh thank you
R: good nigh
K: u to
They both hug and raj leaves. Angad was watching them and got jealous and angry.
A: thinking) who is he and what is kripa doing with him?

K: was about to go to her room when angad goes to her)
A: kripa where were u..I was worried all day…and who is the guy u came with
K: its non of ur business who I go out with
A: kripa who was that guy?
K: angry and lies) my boyfriend. Do u have problem with that
A: kripa u cant go out with another guy will ur still married to me
K: I know that… that's why soon im divorcing u
A: shocked) what?
K: u heard me right…my lawyer is making the papers and soon I will divorce u….
A: kripa….
K: goes inside her room and shuts the door tight.)
Angad leaves back to his room and sits on the bed.
A: thinking) no I will not let kripa divorce me..she is only main and always will be…how should I tell that that baby is not main…..

Next morning kripa wakes up and runs around the house looking for rohits pacifier becz rohit was crying.
K: aaaaa where did I put it…plez jaan be quit I will find it…mama is sorry…mama is trying her best plez jaan don't cry…
Kripa almost misses up the whole room putting the blanket up and throwing things down trying to find his pacifier….
K: oh god plez help me where is it
Angad passes by her room when he sees her massing up her room and yelling at her self where did she put the pacifier…
A: kripa
K: really mad and screams) what?
A: chill yaar don't need to scream
K: im sorry plez angad leave me alone im not in mood to fight go away…(continues looking will rohit cry's more.
A: walk toward rohit)
All of sudden rohit stops crying. Kripa looks behind her and sees angad sitting next to rohit and rohit had his pacifier
K: where did u find that?
A: it was by his shoulder
K: ufff ( hits her hand on her forehead) god im crazy…..

Angad was about to pick up rohit when kripa takes him away
K: don't touch him….how many times should I tell u that
A: kripa plez….he is my son…
K: excuse me ur son..since when did u excepted him….listen angad I told u im not in mood of fighting plez go away…
A: I will kripa but plez take care of ur self…u havent slept for few days and ur face is all white…plez kripa take care of ur self…

K: why do u care
A: kripa plez
K: ufff..(takes rohit with her and leaves down to the kitchen.
Kripa places rohit on his little seat will she makes breakfast for her self. Kripa was cocking when rohit cry's she burns her hand
K: ouch…..(runs to rohit not worrying about her self and picks him up trying to calm him down) don't cry jaan…mama is here don't cry….(rohit stops crying and kripa puts him down and goes back to her cocking. Rohit was playing with his food and making mass. He keep taping on his food and splash all of it on his face and laughing at him self. Kripa looks at him and laughs)
K: awww look at my cute baby…lets see how he test ( takes a little of food that was on rohits cheek and puts it in her mouth)mmmm…testy…wow my jaan is so sweet

Angad was standing by the door and watching her all the time smiling to him self. Kripa kisses his cheek and leaves to cut some vegetable. Angad quickly comes close to rohit and kisses his cheek where kripa kisses. Kripa didn't see him becz she had her back to them.

Angad sits on the table and takes some bread applying some honey on top. The phone rings and kripa picks it up.
K: almost screaming) hi raj
Angad puts the food in his mouth when he hears raj's name he chocks and starts coughing
K: hold up ….( takes a glass of water and hands it to angad)
K: here
A: takes it) thanks
K: whatever…(back to her phone) how are u yaar…no way really…when….aww that's sweet…sure I will come….u wana hear his voice…sure wait…(goes to rohit)rohit beta raj wanted to hear ur voice say hi (rohit was still playing with his food and laughing and makes cute voice) (to raj) did u hear it he said hi….how is everyone there….yes me and rohit will definitely come….bye….I love u to
A: really jealous and burning in anger)

Kripa was talking to raj becz raj invited her to his party that chandini and raj put…at the end kripa said I love u to not to raj but when she said bye to raj his son got the phone and said I love u that's why kripa said I love u to back and angad thought she said to raj.

K: puts the phone down and smiles to her self)
Kripa sits next to rohit and eats her food will feeding rohit to and talking about raj with rohit
K: u wana see them…we are going to their house tonight ok but first u have to take bath then wear ur cute cloths just like u cute and then we will go there….
A: what time will u be back
K: around 1 am
A: why so late
K: u have problem with that
A: doesn't say anything)
K: actually im not coming back…we will come home the next day
A: where are u going to be
K: raj's house
A: who's raj
K: know she is angry and says it on purpose) the guy that I came with last nigh….
A: kripa I want to talk to u
K: I don't want to
A: its important
K: I don't care
A: kripa I need to talk to u now
K: I don't have time…
A: kripa..
K: ufff…(picks up rohit and leaves to her room)
A: angry) damn it….I have to talk to her before she does something that I will lost her…

Kripa puts rohit on the bed and puts a music on and starts dancing
K: goes close to rohit and offers her hand) my I have a dance sir
Rohit starts taping on her hand with both hands and laughing
K: smiles and picks him up on her arm and starts dancing.

She laughs and dances with him till she gets tired…she takes him in her arms and stands by the window watching outsaid….a bird comes and sits by the tree that is close to the window
K: look at that bird
R: starts jumping trying to reach for the bird)
K: kisses his head) no jaan u cant get it…I will buy u one how about that…
Kripa sits on her bed and playing with rohit. Rohit was playing with her hair when he says his first word
R: mama
k: shocked and really happy) say it again
R: smiles big) mama
K: hugs him and runs down. She couldn't believe him talking and he is only 3 months old

Angad was sitting on the couch watching tv when kripa runs down really happy
K: almost shouting) angad u wont believe it he just said his first work…he said mama…look…rohit beta say it again
R: mama
K: kisses his cheek) see oh god im soo happy can believe it…( throws rohit up and catches him and kisses his cheek again)

Angad stands there watching her going crazy from happiness and smiles to him self. After few seconds kripa coms back to sance that she was talking to angad and looks at angad who is smiling at her….her face from happy changes to hate and she walks to her room back slamming the door again. Angad feels sad but was happy seeing kripa so much happy. Kripa gets to her room and starts jumping in joy. Kripa sits rohit on the small tub for him and puts some toys around him so he could play will she is washing him. Rohit starts splashing water at kripa and kripa laughs back
K: naughty boy…

After giving him bath she puts his good cloths will he falls a sleep. Kripa takes shower and comes out till rohit wake up. She changes her cloths to beautiful purple sari. She closes her hair up from rohit pulling it. Rohit was a wake and playing with toys will making cute noises.
K: turning around) how does mama look on this cloths
Rohit was playing and didn't know what she was saying

K: I know mama is always hot (laughs to her self)
Kripa picks up rohit and goes down. Angad was watching movie when he sees her. She looked really beautiful and he couldn't take his eyes off her.
A: u look really beautiful
K: I didn't ask
A: I was talking about rohit
K: looks at him angry

The phone rings and angad picks it up
A: hello
R: is kripa there
A: who is this
R: my name is raj…who is this
A: im angad
R: oh angad…hi how are u
A: do I know u…
R: not really didn't kripa tell u about me
Kripa grabs the phone from his hand
K: hi raj…yes we are on our way….sure..bye

Kripa leaves to her car and puts rohit in his car seat and drives off. Angad was really jealous and wanted to see this raj. He fallowed kripa to where she was going. Kripa stops her car by jeweler place and gets off. She inter the store with little rohit. Raj goes to her and both sit the chair will raj was putting ring on her finger to which one she liked. Angad watched them and was even more mad thinking that they are selecting ring for their wedding.
A: no way I cant believe this…is kripa really going to marry him….shit I have to do something before she is completely his….daman this raj….

In the store
R: yaar which one do u think will chandini like
K: get a batter one
R: thanks for helping me select ring for her…
K: anytime…so are u going to give her tonight on ur anniversary
R: yes I cant wait till to see her reaction….
K: laughing) u batter not missed it like last time when u first tried to propose to her and before handing her the ring the ring fall on ur vine
R: laughing) no way…this time I will make sure there is no vine under her hand…..how is this ring (shows a beautiful ring to her
K: its beautiful
R: should I take this one
K: yes
R: thanks (kisses her cheek)
Anagds mouth drop open and he holds his fist really tight
A: how dare he kiss her….and kripa she is smiling back to him that means she like him back…oh no what should I do…

R: hey isn't angad coming
K: vo actually he was busy
R: common plez call him I want to meet him
K: I cant..
R: plez kripa…
K: sigh) ok fine I will
R: I will pay the lady until then u call him ( he leaves)
K: calls angad)
Angad picks his cell and looks at it says kripa
A: confused) how come kripa called me…is she going to tell me that she is getting engaged today….
A: hello
K: angad
A: yea
K: vo…
A: nerves) what is it kripa
K: raj asked me to call u to the party to…can u come
A: kripa vo…
K: plez angad don't refuse raj insisted a lot and I said u will come
A: ok sure I will be there…
K: gives him the address)
A: ok I will be there in few mints
A: what does raj want…does he wants me to be there when he is announcing his engagement

At the party kripa was waiting for angad. Angad inter looking hot like always. Kripa goes to him.
A: smiling to her) hi
K: whatever lets go..I need to introduce u to raj
A kid comes running to kripa
K: this is rajs son ajay
A: shocked and thinking) he has a son and kripa still wants to marry him
Raj comes toward them
K: raj this is angad and angad this is raj
R: shakes hand with him) hi nice to meet u
A: acting normal)hi… nice to meet u to
R: so this is angad u where always talking about
K: smiles to him
A: thinking) what does he mean taking about me…did she tell him that im bad and that's why he is willing to marry her…
R: I will be back excuse me ( goes to greet other guests)
A: jealous) he is a nice guy
K: yes he is a lot….I will be back excuse me ( kripa goes to see chandini who was getting ready in her room)

Raj and angad talk.
R: so how is ur work going
A: its great…how about urs
R: its good to…im kind of busy most of the time but still take time off for her
A: thinking) how dare he talking in front of me and saying that he takes off time to meet kripa
Kripa and chandini comes down from stairs
R: isn't she beautiful
A: looks and sees kripa coming down…he gets angry more thinking he is talking about her…
A: smiles to him) yes she is
R: excuse me ( he goes up and takes the mic…
R: ladies and gentlemen…thank you for coming today and celebrating our 3 year of marriage anniversary
A: confused) what is he talking about…
Kripa stand next to angad smiling watching raj.
Raj makes an announcement and goes close to chandini and kneels down.
R: I know that im already married to u but today I want to propose to u again like I did 3 years back but this time with out making any mastic
K: laughs remembering)
Raj proposes to chandini and asks her if she would be with him in all 7 ganam. Chandini wipes her tears and says yes. Raj takes out the ring and slips it on her finger and everyone claps will they hug. Kripa claps to will angad was confused and shocked.
K: aren't they cute
A: they are married
K: yes that's raj's wife chandini…today raj asked me to help him select ring for her….today its their marriage anniversary…
A: thinking) thank god…I was almost having heat attack when he propose…god why was I thinking of kripa wrong…I hate my self..how can I be so stupid
K: shakes him) angad
A: coming back to earth) huh? What?
K: common I will introduce u to chandini
K: chandidni this is my husband angad…and angad this is chandini…my best friend…we all three worked together 3 years back…
A: smiles to her and shakes hand) congratulation
C: thank you and nice to meet u
A: same here…
k: excuse me…
C: where are u going
K: rohit might be woken up I need to go and check on him
C: ok

Kripa runs up to the room and angad fallows her. When kripa reaches to the room she sees rohit still sleeping. She goes close to him and kisses his forehead. Angad comes close and sits next to her.
A: kripa I want to talk to u…
K: angad plez at least don't ruin my mood today
A: kripa plez
k: whisper) shhh…rohit is a sleep…

At the party angad wanted to talk to kripa a lot but she keep ignoring him. After 4 hours later finally angad decided to take kripa outside….by raj's house there is a beach. Rohit again went to sleep and kripa came down after putting him to sleep.
Angad sees her and grabs from her hand dragging her toward the beach
K: angad stop this leave me…
A: ignoring her and dragged her to the beach a little far away from the house
Finally he stops and hold from her shoulder.
A: kripa I want to talk to u right now
K: stop it angad I said I don't want to… leave me
A: holds her tight) kripa plez I beg u listen to me once
K: looks at him angry) what is it say it faster I don't have time….

A: kripa u don't know the truth about me…when I left to U.S that was becz my friend called me…
K: I don't want to hear it
A: u have to kripa plez… that night I got a call from my friend when I was dancing with u…she told me that she was giving birth to rohit….the doctors already warned her that when she give birth to this baby she wont survive becz she was sick… that night I left and when I reached there that was the fist time I saw rohit in her hand and she was crying….before she died I promised her that I will take care of her child…she didn't have anyone…her husband died a year back…her husband and her helped me a lot…when I wanted to bring rohit home I didn't know if u will be able to except him becz I was afraid that u might say that u don't know his parents and might never give him love that he should get….I had to lie to u that he is my son becz I knew that if u know that u will except him but I was afraid that u will go away from me…I decided that I will do this drama for few day until u really love him and cant live with out him…than after that I would tell u the truth and u will not be able to disown him…im sorry kripa I hurt u soo much but I had no other choice( crying) im sorry kripa

K: crying also) did u really think that if u brought him home I would not except him becz he is someone else son….angad I though u knew me batter…I never cared who they are I always excepted people…when I didn't know priya I still made her my sister…after so much pain Mishti give us..I still forgive her becz I could never hate anyone….specially a child…what kind of love do u do to me that u don't even trust me…
A: im sorry kripa…I didn't know what to do that time…pelz forgive me kripa….
K: looks away still crying)
A: kripa plez…
K: walks back toward the house and runs to the room to rohit….when she inter she finds rohit just woke up crying. She rushes to him and picks him up in her arms calming him down) shhh beta..mama is here don't cry.( hugs him and cry's again)
Angad walked at the beach for few more mints thinking how to get kripa back.


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mindblowing; its awesome no words at all plzzzzzzzzzz continue yeh dil mange more
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wow..........pls cont soon.........and hurry 😛
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cant wait to see if kripa forgives him.. plz cont. soon
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gr8 part!!!! cont. soon
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