SR - One Shot - sleep tight - part 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Amazing piece of work.....👏👏👏 Too beautiful...... You really have a way with words.....I was transported into the world of Siddhima while I was reading........... Actually I am still there while I am writing this...... Please do continue....... Eagerly waiting for next part...... Thank you once again.....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ohhhhhhhh girl
ur os drives me crazy
cant get over it
love love love it
i wanted ur os never to finish
a big hug from me for writing such a master piece :)
gr8 job
n of course do continue n update fast

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Posted: 15 years ago
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please continue yaar....gr8 work...and plz pm me when u update it....plzzzzzzz i loved it!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome buddy awesome
plz plz plz do continue!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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TOO gud. kindly write next part ASAP. Eagerly waiting.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I thought unidentified object numbered 35913062 had exited Earth's orbit and was heading towards Mars. But now it seems that it has taken a U-turn, and is back. Did it forget something? Is it to rescue a desperate female fan lost on the Island of Hope? Is it for an encore? Is it because there is no Humor and Sarcasm chamber replacement for Mars35913062? Or has it returned to Earth to romance the idea of romance? If there is a next part we will know whether it has decided to stay, else we'll assume it found Earth too alien.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Mars,
just one word WOW!! 👏..take a bow my friend!!..i loved it!..it's awesome!! and so romantic!!😍..

i love the way Sid and Rids interact in your story..like a normal couple who are in love!..and who want to be with each other and show it!..and i like the way he mischievously pulls her leg(i don't mean it literally)😆..and the way she teases him!..i had this stupid smile in my face while reading it!! 😳..i can't stop blushing😳..please continue!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: CinciGal

I thought unidentified object numbered 35913062 had exited Earth's orbit and was heading towards Mars. But now it seems that it has taken a U-turn, and is back. Did it forget something? Is it to rescue a desperate female fan lost on the Island of Hope? Is it for an encore? Is it because there is no Humor and Sarcasm chamber replacement for Mars35913062? Or has it returned to Earth to romance the idea of romance? If there is a next part we will know whether it has decided to stay, else we'll assume it found Earth too alien.

Yes it had left Earth for Mars. Mars35913062 had to make its urgent replacement of the Humor and Sarcasm chambers as the ones available on the earth are produced in China and are not supported by any guarantee to withstand programs like DMG.

There was a point close to halfway between mars and earth that we received an advisory note about an earthling waving from Island of Hope. Since it was not feasible to turn back without the chamber replacement, we continued our journey, but appreciating the kindness and affection of the earthlings, the Humor and Sarcasm chambers were replaced in a record time of 69 tripnipstop that equals to 3 minutes of earth's time and this was carried out at the first pitstop just outside the last orbital loop. The mars watch has three minutes hands and two hours hand but no second hand.

Mars35913062 Romance chamber has the capacity to deal with 31 romances ie. 31 units. It so far has had only one interaction. That one interaction has been quite intense and consumed 4 units of romance. From the perspective of romance Mars35910362 has a reasonable capacity to continue for sometime without any need for replenishment.

Mars35913062 has had serious problems with romancing a stone on this earth. Martian physiology is user friendly once it comes to intimate relationship, where slap on the head O\ (foreplay) and shaking of the hands is all that is required to consummate a marriage.

I am not sure about the further stay as it is critically dependent on my planet-playmates present on earth. I cannot survive without them and like ET, I want to go home.


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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow..fab...awesome ...enchanting....lovely.....👏👏👏👏
You write so well ..wonder when KW said in free time they are at IF..Please Kw if you r here pls 4ward this to the cvs.NOW WE DEMAND THIS FANTASTIC SCENE>>SIDMA> rocksssssssss
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mars35913062

Jatin, I am happy that you liked it and more relieved that I edited it to your level of comfort, warna you would not have been able to give me a standing ovation. Thanks Mate for your support.😃

ye bhi amma ke darr se edit kya hai. agar ghaar se nikaal diya to barri museebat kahree ho jayegi.

I edited it to your level of comfort, warna you would not have been able to give me a standing ovation. 😆😉😃
My Level Of Comfort😉😆😃
Well Next part & Siddhima Suhaag raat,mera level of comfort Tumhe Standing Ovation de payega ya nahi,it really depends on the release of your next part.😉😆😃
Good Editing Skills.Clap
Well I want to say something to your Mom,
Well Aunty your Son is a true genius.So plzzzz Don't scold or Beat him.Aur Ghar se toh bilkul mat nikaalayga.😊
Your son has got a talent in Writing Beautiful Siddhima OS.So plzzzz Mars ko uska talent leverage karne ki permission do Aur hum sabko ko Mars ke OS ke Pyaar main behne do.😊
Waiting for Next Part.

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