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Posted: 15 years ago
hey dear i read the entire FF till now.. and I really luved the story line..
truly amazing.....
mindblowing.......
plzzzzzzzz pm me nxt time
n cont soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awesome...

curious to know more..

update soon...

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pari lovely ff dear plzzzz add me ur pm list thanks
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hey pari
a really touching story
just read itr today
plz update soon and PM me
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Posted: 15 years ago
its awesome pari please inform me about your next update

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Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

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cant update now dear.... hope you will understand..... going thru many-many problems.........😭😭😭.... i visit india-forums these days to lighten my mood......😊,,

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it was awsome pari and plz inform me of ur next updates

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fabulous update,
i am sooooooooo sorry for commenting this late,
dying to read next part,
plzzzzzzzzz continue soon.....

Edited by shivangi278 - 15 years ago
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ohkk guys here is the update..... enjoy... agar iss ff ko bhul gye ho to first page pe index hai..... dekh lena......😆😆 phir bhi thodaa sa recap likhaa hai.......... plz comment.....

n: kya thik ho?? itni chotein aayi hai.... tum bhi na... kya zaroorat thi........

m: mein thik hoon nupur....... (he said in a very low pitch and extremelt low frequency)
nupur cried...... she bbroke down in front of mayank .......
n: why ??? why.... (she cried more..)
m: dont cry nupur....... i m ... ahhh.........
n: dont you dare say a word more...... either i will kill you......
i chuckled in tears and mayank smiled and nodded......

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hours passed ,,, nupur in mayank's ward..

they were not talking at all......... i wonder wat were they doing .. were they not getting bored.......!$@$#

i mean for how long u can look in sumones eyes.....

then i entered the ward.... and my all questions got the answer.....

the immense love pouring down their eyes was the answer.....

nupur was holding mayank's hand....... tears were still rolling down her eyes.....

i was so touched......

i hated myself that tym bcoz i was going to disturb them.. "UMM.. NUPUR..." i said..

n: hmm//

pari: actually... doctor said mayank needs complete rest and only this much of food, (i said handling over the paper to her) bcoz excess of oil and all will effect his health...

n: ya sure....

p: and...

n: hn?

p: wat did u think nupur??

n: wat?

p: this is the best tym to resolve the problems nupur..... i mean...

n: later... let mayank get well.....

i did not utter a word then..

nupur took care of mayank...... and that was the reason behind mayanks quick recovery...

mayank recovered..... and it was the 28th day of our trip.... it was a 31 day trip...... only 3 days left...... i was so sad that i was not able to unite this couple..... 3 days pari....... do sumthing....

wen suddenly nupur called me...... or rather shouted...... it was coming from my room..... i was in the halll..... i rushed to my room...

oepend the gate....... saw nupur there fuming with anger.......

n: wats this????

she asked showing me sum papers..

CRAP.......... shit..... how can i be so careless....... this is too much pari...... those were the photo copy of their diaries.......... NOOOOOOOOOOOOO

pari: i .. i.. can...

i noticed my voice cutting.. i tried to speak

p: i m.... i can explain.......

n: this is not the way how things shud be dealt....... how can u pari? how can//// how can u even think ki u can use our companys private photo copy machine for yur pursonal purposes?

p: i.....

WAIT........ WHAT???? OMG.... she did not read anything....... thank god.......... hushhh..... i to was dead then....

p: sory,, next tym it wont happen...... (i said almost snatching the papers from her hands and kept it in the cupboard and locked)

she was confused..... she was going to leave

p: nupur wait..

n: yes..

p: did u think abt that matter.......

n: pari... i...... dont think ki now we can..

p: plz........ atleast you shud clear the doubts.... i mean i dont wat is the problem btw you guys but....... (although i knew)

n: but pari..........

p: i know u are hiding sumthing from mayank....... go and tell her.....

n: but that is the truth which can break mayank...... from inside..

and she left.....

ENUF IS ENUF....... i cant believe ki this couple is soo unbelievable....

i went to the hall....... where mayank and nupur were present.. thank god that anji was sleeping in her room...... i was fuming in anger and i lost my control.... i directly went to the hall and blurted out things.... OHK THIS WAS MY SPEECH..

'' wat do you think of yurselves hn??? i cant beleive ki sumone can be this stupid...... (they both were lyk😲.. but still i continued) both u for the sake of the other left each other..... why can u not understand the depth of love and bonding u share is greater than all this rubbish..... now i m so sorry nupur but i hav to say this..... u know where nupur spent that money?? she spent it..."

b4 i cud complete mayank stopped me in betweeen..

m: "i dont wanna know... agar nupur nhi bataana chahti to...

p: yes wo nhi bataana chahti par wo tumhaare saath rehnaa chahti hai jo ki tab tak possible nhi hai jab tak tumhe sacchaai pataa nhi chal jaati..........

m: mein humeshaa se chahta hoon ki nupur mere saath rhe but she is too stuborn to accept it..

p: no she is not.... she respects you and yur words..... remember wat you said in that grand big meeting....

m: i dont care wat i said..

p: but she cares and..

n: stop it pari.. dont argue with him.

p: no nupur.... i have to.. not only with him but with u too....... tum soch bhi kese sakti ho ki mayank ko agar tum chod dogi to wo khush rahegaa..

n: mujjhe pataa hai wo mujhse pyaar kartaa hai.... par... agar usse wo baat .......

p: wo baat....... damed...... wo baat....... aaj mein bataati hoon wo baat kya hai.....

m: nhi........ mujhe agar wo baat pataa chalegi to sirf nupur ke muh se warnaa nhi..... nupur nhi chahti....

p: shut up mayank...... nupur tum hi bataado...... kyuki agar tum nhi bataaaogi to mein bataa doongi and baat mayank ko pataa chalni hi hai...... chahe tum bataao ya mein...... par mayank tumse hi sunna chahta hai....

m: aisaa kuch nhi hai... dont force her pari..

p: i will........ today i will.....

n: fine mein bataati hoon.........

BANG....... yes..... finally....... but poori baat meko bhi pataa nhi thi then its cool....

m: nupur tum nhi bataana chahti to..

n: nhi mayank aaj tumhe bataa hi deti hoon....... aur mujhe yakeen hai ki tumhe sambhaal loongi.......

m: thik hai...

n: 5 saal pehle..... jab tumne humaari puraani factory mein aag lagwaai thi.... kyuki usmein gandi quality ke goods aa gye the...... tab...... tab uss aag mein koi mar gya tha...............

m: WAT.......

N: haan......

m: kon maraa tha nupur?

n:; wo.. wo...

m: bolo nupur kon maraa tha?? (his voice was strong)

n: prithvi......

m: prithvi....... damini di ke husband......(he fell on the sofaa)

n: haan..... aur tum par koi police case na ho.... isliye mene wo pese....

m: damini di ko pataa hai?

n: hmm.. (she nodded in yes)

m: tumne mujhse yeh baat kyu chupaayi nupr????? kyu kyu kyu........ (and he started crying...... crying lyk a child........ nupur went and hugged him......... she was caressing him........)

p: aaj har kyu ka jawaab milega myank.... har kyu ka.......

nupur controlling her tears: kyuki........ tum bikhar jaate mayank...... tum bikhar jaate..... tum nhi sehen kar paate........

they cried for sum more tym.......

m: par... factory mein mene aag nhi lagwaai thi nupur... (he said still crying).... wo to... doosri company ne lagwaai thi....... mene sirf advise kiya tha..... claim unhone kiya....

n: sach mayank....... mujhe pataa tha tumse aisaa paap ho hi nhi sakta.......

and they were lost in each others eyes............... but again i had to break the eyelock..

p: mayank....... tum anjali ko nupur paas kyu chodkar gye mayank?? usse apne saath le jaate...... wo tumse bahut pyaar karti thi..... aur tum bhi to usse kitna pyaar karte the..... phir kyu nhi claim kiya court mein?? kyu......

m: kya claim karta pari?? yeh ki mere dil ko meri dhadkan se alag kar do??..nhi...... nhi kar saktaa tha mein aisaa......... nhi kar sakta tha..... (he was still crying)

nupur hugged him....... hugged him tight......

n: mujhe chod kar kabhi mat jaanaa mayank..... kabhi mat jaana...

m: hmm......

mayank then put her down and caressed her hair..... he catched her waist and pulled her closer....... pressed his lips aginst her.......

i know i shd not hav watched that...... but for me it was a story..... and story ka jab climax scene chal rha ho tab book band nhi karte😆

their kiss was getting deep...... nupur's hand were moving thru his hair........ and i was sooo happy for them........

finally they were out of breath and broke off........ then again they were lost in each others eyes......

p: ahem ahem,.,,,,

i tell you their expressions were nbelievable........ so horryfying....... nupur was blushing badly and bth were so embarraased that the whole blood of their body ccame to their cheeks.......

but i was i.........

p: ya to tum dono room mein chale jaao ya mein chali jaati hoon.......

and they were lyk.......... more embarrased.......... so much embarrased that...... they in order to rush collided in one another........

p: ya ya... i understood i shud leave

wen i was goin to leave..... they quickly left into their rooms....... OMG alag alag rooms mein...

p: guys ek hi room mein jaao..... warna phir se room se baahar nhi aa paaoge.....

i was so enjoying it...........😆

finally they went in one room.........😉

NEXT DAY........ our departure day..😭

on the airport.....

we four were now saying good bye..... actually only me to anji, mayank and nupur....

m: thanx a ton pari.... tum nhi hoti to..

p: dont worry...... its all f9.........

n: hope to see u soon......

p: ya sure....

i was going to leave but i stopped and turned,.......

p: ohkk.. this is sumthing i wanna return you.....

n: par yeh hai kya??

p: umm dekh lo..

and i ran from there......

it was the photo copy of their diaries.......

wen i was far enuf i turned and saw that they checked that it was their diary.

i turned......

and they were giving me angry glares and i was just smiling.... with a so-sorry face.......

and i left

after three days we met again...... for the last tym in one meeting...

and we talked

p: ohkk bye guys..

n: pari... tumne kya sochaa hai??? shaadi kab kar rhi ho?

p: koi ladkaa mill jaaye mayank jesaa.......

m: arrey mein hoon na..... koi aur kyu dhoond rhi ho?

n: hello..... mein yahiin khadii hoon........

p: wahii to gam hai... kaash tumse pehle mein mayank se mill leti.....

and the trio laughed......

and the story ended with a very happy note.................

ohkk so here the story ends........😭😭😭 mujhe pataa hai kaafi fataafat story end ho gyi.... but mere paas bllkul tym nhi hai and mere itne saare ffs pending hai to ek ek karke sab ko khatam kar rhi hoon😆...... ohkk plz do leave comments..... i know this part was not up to the mark but mere paas aur koi option nhi hai....... hope u will understand......

ohkkk will miss this ff.......

pari........ (comment karna mat bhoolna...)

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