I just finished reading half.....
People always have difficulty accepting paradigm shifts. Just because there is a set of norms to write a fiction doesn't mean you have congest urself inside those boundaries. Also I don't see anything wrong with him choosing to write about 9/11. He says there are lot of empty sheets that have copy-pasted useless monologues but it gave me the visual feel of Thomas Sr.'s notebook. It might not help with the story but i liked how i felt when i read them.
In my opinion, everything in the book can be justified... It isn't just a pseudo mish-mash... Everything conveys something, and I was impressed... more by the words of the book and the characters, but I didn't see the point of being critical about the other devices that the author has chosen to employ.
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