NEW MAYUR SS.JAB CHALI SARD HAWA Last prt on pg 84 - Page 24

hey kulsium awesum promo yr loved it
oh to mayu apni nahi dulhan ko chor k jarha hai
hope k use bhi saath jald hi lejaye
loved the whole promo
cont sooooooon
and very biggest
best of luck

and hopeu will win

Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

awesome promo yaar

so sweet of you to post it

the initial part of promo was rocking

mayank's act was the cutest

and second part was interesting

wonder when nupur will go to shimla

luv

mahima

im glad u lykd d promo...abt nupur going 2 shimla..aage dekho hota hai kya.. 😉

Originally posted by: Tapoor

Nice promo
do cont soon

thanx dear
Wil continue soon.

Originally posted by: Divya_kaldivya

nice promo dear!!!!!

thanx divy di. 😊

Originally posted by: -afsha-

<font color="#9900ff" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Hey the promo was nice</font>

<font color="#9900ff" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Really waiting for the update</font>

<font color="#9900ff" size="4" face="Comic Sans MS">Update soon</font>

thanx dear...wil continue soon.

Originally posted by: sizzlingsis

hey kulsium awesum promo yr loved it
oh to mayu apni nahi dulhan ko chor k jarha hai
hope k use bhi saath jald hi lejaye
loved the whole promo
cont sooooooon
and very biggest
best of luck

and hopeu will win

aww mayu apni nai naveli dulhan ko chod k jaraha hai..waise tension mat lo bahut jald nupur ko b leke jaega. 😃

Originally posted by: kulsumd

im glad u lykd d promo...abt nupur going 2 shimla..aage dekho hota hai kya.. 😉

agar manzil (mayur scenes) ki ghadi na naam intezzaar hai toh woh bhi kar lenge

PART 5
Mayank enterd d room n saw nupur sitting on d bed lykd how newly bride used 2 sit on her suhaagrat(oops nupur is newly bride na)

Mayank's pov.
I enterd d room.,no bhabi pushed me inside d room n closed d door 4m outside..so i have no option left neither dan proceeding towards nupur..i saw nupur sitting on d bed...she raised her head, shaayad usne darwaza band hone ki awaz sunli thi isilye wo mere taraf actually darwaze ki taraf dekh rahi thi...
Oh gosh shez looking beautiful...dat maroon lehenga suit her perfectly...we were having eyelock, hum dono ek dusre ki aankhaun mein khoye huwe the...den bhabhi's words rang in ma head.."JO BHI KARNA HAI ANDAR JAKE KARO NUPUR TUMHARE SAAMNE HI BAITHI HUI HAI."
i smiled remebering those words....den ma heart 2ld me "mayank tu aisa kuch bi nahi karsakta tumhe tumhara mission yaad haina."after hearing those lines which ma heart vz telling me sumthing stuck in ma mind..i started 2 shout little loud..
M:bhabhiii meri goliyaan kaha hai...
Nupur who vz lost in ma eyes got shocked...i can clearly see those mixed expression of shocked n scared on her face..then i heard d voice of bhabi who vz telling me dat tablets are in drawver..i moved towards d drawer n started to searched d tablets lyk mad people....i can clearly watched d feeling of disappointment 4m her face who vz now ready 2 cry.,.i started 2 shout at her.
M:tum aise kyun dekh rahi ho mujhe kabhi dekha nahi mujhe ya phir kisi ko goliyaan khate hue nahi dekha...jao aur apne kapde badlo...she didnt move...den i pulled her 4m d bed n show her way 2 d bathroom...

Nupur's pov.
I came out 4m d washroom wearing ma night dress n saw him sleeping on d couch wearing his nytdress...seeing him automatically ma tears started rolling 4m ma eyes...

Wo mujh se mill ke mujh ko aise tanha chod deta hai.,
Jaise Koi par kaat k parinda chod deta hai.

Jab kisi ne kahien punche hai kisi k aansuu..
Par mere hamsafar ne laaye meri aankhaun mein aansuu.

Kyun aur shikwa karun mein apni taqdeer par.
Shayad gam jheelna hi likha hai meri taqdeer mein.

Nupur slept while crying n thinking abt her fate.

Mayank heard d voice of sum1 weeping so he woke up 4m d sleep n saw nupur sleeping peacefully on d bed but he can clearly see d marks of tears on her cheeks...seeing nupur his heart melt..he moved forward near bed n sat on d floor near nupur he wipe off her tears n kissed her forehead..n den came bck 2 d couch..mayank in his heart..."Nupur im sorry mein tumhe rote hue nahi dekh sakta par ye sab mein tumhare liye kar raha hun..sirf ek mahine ki baat hai uske baad tumhare aankhaun mein kabhi aansu nahi aayenge."saying this he 2 doose off 2 sleep.

Haey frndz here is d 5th part of d ss...dis part z imp 4 d story....mujh pe gussa mat hona k mein ne mayank ka character thoda change kiya...aur im sorry mein promo ka 2nd part is update mein shaamil nahi kiya...par agli update mein pakka add karungi...nupur ki shaayiri kaisi lagi zarur batana haan n forgive ma mistakes i wrote dis part in hurry..do comment n critisize.

Luv
*kulsum*

great update
loved it
but why is mayank behaving like this
do cont soon

Originally posted by: fanofmjht

great update
loved it
but why is mayank behaving like this
do cont soon

thanx dear..y mayank behaving lyk dis itz sheecret. 😉