Trained To Kill.... An LNMDJ FF (Part 3 Pg 43) - Page 20

Originally posted by: Sohil_Gupta

thankss i am glad you liked it

Originally posted by: Sohil_Gupta

thanks i am glad you liked this.

don't worry you will soon love this inder😉

the man was prithvi itni jaldi kaise bhaav deta😆

Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera

thanks bro aur haan prithvi damini ko kese bhaav de sakta hai right....

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Edited the parts and story somewhat.

Originally posted by: juhi_karneet

heyy bro loved the full part but SAVNI part was sooo sooo soooo sweet yaaa.
really superb FF...........plzz do continue soon..........

n hun add me to ur pm list ok

byee n thnx again for the treat n savni romantic scene

kash hame aisa savni scene lnmdj main milta.............

Originally posted by: Nachiket94

First of all sorry for the late comment. Was busy....

Great opening. A complete Bollywood style part. Masti, romance, suspense and what not....you had everything in it!

Well good to see how all the eyes behaved when Prithvi got out of the pool!!!😆 Seriously that was a smashing scene!!!😆

So, no BG stays for more than a week han??? Well this one's Prithvi and so he has to stay in their life!!!


Hoping that the next update is around the corner.....!!!😃

Originally posted by: marie1994

sorry for late comment sohil
loved ur 1st part,savni scenes were too good

Originally posted by: sonyo

Wow, what an update. And first meetings. Man you truly have impressive writing, do come with a mysterious novel in future. And by the way, Sydney Sheldon is male and he has wrote novels besides telly plays. Your writing verymuch resembles his way..

Anyhows, impatiently waiting for the next part. Do come soooooon

Originally posted by: aparajhita

omg...next part will b full of him....yh..😳
btw bhaiya....provide his pics to.....shirtless one😆....and sum oder too...😆😆😆😆
ab toh aapko jaldi cont karna hiiiiiiiiii hogaaaa😆😆