Trained To Kill.... An LNMDJ FF (Part 3 Pg 43) - Page 20

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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow, what an update. And first meetings. Man you truly have impressive writing, do come with a mysterious novel in future. And by the way, Sydney Sheldon is male and he has wrote novels besides telly plays. Your writing verymuch resembles his way..
Anyhows, impatiently waiting for the next part. Do come soooooon
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sohil_Gupta

thankss i am glad you liked it



omg...next part will b full of him....yh..😳
btw bhaiya....provide his pics to.....shirtless one😆....and sum oder too...😆😆😆😆
ab toh aapko jaldi cont karna hiiiiiiiiii hogaaaa😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sohil_Gupta

thanks i am glad you liked this.
don't worry you will soon love this inder😉
the man was prithvi itni jaldi kaise bhaav deta😆


thanks bro aur haan prithvi damini ko kese bhaav de sakta hai right....
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Sheetal.Gera


thanks bro aur haan prithvi damini ko kese bhaav de sakta hai right....



righto....woh toh mujhe bhaav dega naa...😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago

Note:-

Edited the parts and story somewhat.

Edited by Sohil_Gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: juhi_karneet

heyy bro loved the full part but SAVNI part was sooo sooo soooo sweet yaaa.
really superb FF...........plzz do continue soon..........

n hun add me to ur pm list ok

byee n thnx again for the treat n savni romantic scene

kash hame aisa savni scene lnmdj main milta.............

thank you juhi,
i am very happy that you liked it.
will continue asap.
added you
nahi mila toh yahan milega, coz yahan who sab milega jo wahan miss hogaya😉😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Nachiket94

First of all sorry for the late comment. Was busy....

Great opening. A complete Bollywood style part. Masti, romance, suspense and what not....you had everything in it!

Well good to see how all the eyes behaved when Prithvi got out of the pool!!!😆 Seriously that was a smashing scene!!!😆

So, no BG stays for more than a week han??? Well this one's Prithvi and so he has to stay in their life!!!


Hoping that the next update is around the corner.....!!!😃

it is alright nachi it happens.
yeah i love such kinda fancy entries😉😆
if anyone would have seen they would have behaved the same😛
but i am glad you liked it.
yeah this one is special isin't he??😉
yeah i am updating soon😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: marie1994

sorry for late comment sohil
loved ur 1st part,savni scenes were too good

i didn't mind so don't be sorry.
i am very glad you liked them
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sonyo

Wow, what an update. And first meetings. Man you truly have impressive writing, do come with a mysterious novel in future. And by the way, Sydney Sheldon is male and he has wrote novels besides telly plays. Your writing verymuch resembles his way..

Anyhows, impatiently waiting for the next part. Do come soooooon

thanks i am glad you liked the part. now don't flatter me too much😆
oooopss sorry actually i never found out if it was he or she, just read some of his novels, and assuming as per the name i thought it was a she😕. but now you broke my heart💔🥺 as i had fallen in love with the writer, who suddenly turned out to be a guy😲. but never mind better luck next time😉😆
will continue asap
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aparajhita



omg...next part will b full of him....yh..😳
btw bhaiya....provide his pics to.....shirtless one😆....and sum oder too...😆😆😆😆
ab toh aapko jaldi cont karna hiiiiiiiiii hogaaaa😆😆

yeah it will be only him.😉
sorry apsy pics nahi mili
will continue asap😃

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