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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: bfolnmdj

nyc bro !!!

im eager to read more !!

update soon 😊

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: shalini_s

engaging CS.. waiting for the first part...

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: gk_fan

hi sohil de update is to good

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: 1shaan

Hey Sohil,

Nice character sketch... look very interesting! This is going to be a romantic thriller, I suppose! 😃 Update soon!
- Ishaan

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: dikkoO


seems very intrerestin dear , eagerly waitin fo ur update ! =)

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: juhi_karneet

plzzzz update part 1 soon sohil n a long one ok nice story very much intrestin...........

plzz keep it long

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: sonyo

Really nice Character Sketch. You know, you reminded me of Sydney Sheldon (the top mystery novelist). Your prolgue writing and character defining, simply your writing reminded me of my favourite author.

Please update and add me in pm list

he is my fav too, that's why i put things in his way and some of it in mine.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 1

Inder occupied the chair opposite to Raghav's and Raghav too sat down "so how come you are here Inder, now whose turn is it to be dead?" Raghav asked sipping his coffee "see this is not any usual kind of murder, we have to kill Damini, The Damini Gujral, the owner of Gujral Enterprises....." "And your stupid cousin" Raghav completed the sentence before him "yeah that too for my hard luck" Inder let out a sigh "so why do you need me, you could have finished off by yourself after all she is very close to you naa" Raghav asked quizzing "well I have already tried....." "And failed, so that is why you need me huh" Raghav said and chuckled while Inder glared daggers at him narrowing his eyes "no it is because I cannot do cheap acts to kill her, and every time I do it my way her support system saves her" "support system?" "yeah support system of 4 people, her best friends, always coming in my way" "so just get them killed too" "that's why I need you to do this as it will not awaken any doubts" Inder said after a pause "and I need your best man for this work as I don't want any mistakes" Inder completed firmly.

"Why?, why Prithvi?" Abdul interrupted the conversation with a frightened and worried voice and a concerned expression on his face "no not Prithvi at all, that oaf can't even kill some normal human let alone these" "Inder don't you go there again I warn you" Raghav said in a scaring tone "and Prithvi is my best man for sure, till date he hasn't failed me in a single task, be it anything" Raghav completed proudly "it is because you never asked him to kill anyone" Inder retorted sarcastically "okay then done, in 3 months time Prithvi would have their necks in your pocket or...... I will have his in mine" Raghav said slowly with determination in his voice, "accha now tell me something about them for the last time at least" Raghav quipped and the room filled with evil laughs.
A handsome young man is walking down the office cabin and enjoying all the female attention he is getting through the dreamy stares of every girl, he winks at one and all the girls look down blushing leaving him to chuckle. But the moment he enters the cabin, someone holds him by the collar and pins him to the wall. But the man remains unaffected and instead holds the attacker tightly by the waist "waah aaj toh mera luck bahut accha hai, madam bade romantic mood me hain" he quips and gets an angry glare in return and the grip on his collar tightens "Sameer just stop it, main kisi romantic mood me nahi hoon. Aur who bahar kya ho raha tha haan?" now Sameer displays a hell shocked expression on his face "Kya? Kya ho raha tha bahar?" he asked surprised and looking out dramitcally "accha who jot um sab ladkiyon ko ankh maar rahe the maine dekha tha" she says angrily "arre Avni sabko nahi bas sirf ek ko baaki toh apne aap hi....." and Sameer bits his tongue as the bait is out of the trap "who....who.....Avni" he tries to think of an excuse but can't "who..Who kya Sameer?" Avni asks her temper rising "haan, who maine aankh isiliye maari taaki who mujhe ghoorna band karde, you know na main sirf tumhaara hoon toh koi aur ladki mujhe kaise ghoor sakti hai haina?" he asks making an innocent face but she would hear none of it "Sameer jhoot mat bolo main jaanti hoon ke main baaki sab ladkiyon jaisi nahi hoon, isiliye tum unhe hi dekhte rehte ho" a girl passing by the opposite corridor sees them and Sameer waves at her and she smiles and looks away, while Avni sees this and says "dekha abhi bhi tumhaara dhyan mere alawa sab jagah hai" she says sensitively and removes her hands from his collar, Sameer who has had enough of his play decides that the water level has increased to the head and speaks up "haan sahi kaha tumne, tumhaare alawa bhi sab jagah dhyan rehta hai mera" Avni looks up in shock and then angrily tries to struggle out of his grip but in vain as it is too strong for her, tired she hits him on the chest and stays still. Seeing her anger converting into surrender Sameer smiles a little "kyonki agar main sabki taraf dhyan na doon toh phir mujhe toh tum ghaas dalo gi hi nahi, 'Sameer chodo mujhe, abhi kaam hai, koi dekh lega'" he says imitating her "par haan jaise hi maine kisi aur ladki ko dekha tum daudti hui mere pass aa gayi aur meri biwi ki tarah mujhse pooch taach karne lagi" Avni blushes on the mention of 'biwi' and Sameer pats himself mentally grinning ear to ear "aur seriously pata hai tum sirf jab mujhse gussa hoti ho tabhi mere pass aati ho toh tumhe aise bulane ke alawa mere pass koi tareeka hi nahi rehta" and Avni looks at him blankly indicating him to continue "sach kahun toh Avni tum sahi kehti ho ke tum un sab se alag ho, who sab ladkiyaan sirf isiliye mere peeche aati hain kyonki main extra smart, handsome aur good looking hoon" he adds the extra words proudly smiling to himself "par tum sirf mujhse pyaar karti ho in looks se nahi, aur asli pyaar wahi hota hai jo bahari dikhawe se nahi ander ki sundarta se ho...jaise hum dono ka pyaar" he adds softly and she looks at him in awe and then puts her head on his chest "phir bhi tum mujhe itna pareshaan karte ho, tumhe pata hai ke mujhe kitna bura lagta hai jab tum doosri ladkiyon ko dekhte ho toh?" she says pouting like a possessive child who won't share his toy with anyone "haan pata hai, par tumhe nahi pata ke jab main subah uth te hi tumhe phone karke good morning bolta hoon aur tum bina ek baar bhi pyaar se I love you bole phone kaat deti ho toh mujhe kitna bura lagta hai. Avni main har subah sirf tumhaari awaaz sunkar aur tumhaara chehra dekhkar uth te hue apni zindagi bitana chahta hoon aur tum ho ke mere is pyaar ko irritation bol kar phone kaat deti ho, toh phir mere dil pe kya beet ti hai yeh socha hai tumne" he says softly and sensitively and Avni looks up at his innocent and genuine face and kicks herself mentally for cutting his phone in the morning just like that "I am sorry Sameer who bas aise hi mood off tha aaj isiliye" she says now hugging him warmly "ab jaake accha lag raha hai mujhe" Sameer says and a smile spreads across both of their faces "par abhi ek cheez baaki hai madam" Sameer adds naughtily and Avni blushes deep pink. "Sameer chodo mujhe koi aa jaayega" she tries to struggle with renewed strength and he leaves her this time without any problem. She is surprised at his gesture and looks at him confused "dekha jaise hi maine yeh kaha ke main sirf tumhaara attention lene ke liye doosri ladkiyon ko attention deta hoon tum phir mujhse door bhaag ne lagi, sach toh yeh hai ke tum meri bilkul parwaah nahi karti ho" he says in mock hurt and Avni smiles at his childishness and goes away "dekha na toh theek se good morning bola aur na hi roz waala I love you, dekhle beta Sameer teri is duniya me koi kadar nahi hai, bas naam ke liye hai tu Sameer the head of the marketing department of Gujral Enterprises, par teri girlfriend ki nazron me tu bilkul bhi important nahi hai" he says pouting when suddenly his phone rang, he picks it up without looking and the sweet voice on the other end says "I love you too aur good morning bhi" Sameer's heart does a joy dance and a fully wide smile spreads on his face as he turns around to see Avni at a distance holding the phone and smiling a genuine smile at him, as their eyes meet Avni sends him a flying kiss and Sameer catches it closing his palm in a fist to treasure it, he looks at her dreamily with his mouth open a little and falls against the wall keeping his fist on his heart muttering a soft "haiiiii", she blushes a little and disappears from his sight while he smiles at her to himself.

A guy dressed in a business suit is working on his computer diligently, but due to some noise his head lifts and he looks at the direction of the main corridor where a stylish and gorgeous looking girl is laughing over something as she is talking on the phone, he looks at her dreamily and her cute innocent and adorable laughter plays music to his ears and his smile widens as she comes closer to his cabin, but his blood boils when he sees another guy checking her out. He stands up angrily and walks out of the cabin to give that man a piece of his mind but crashes with the girl on the door as she was entering in. She falls in his arms and they share an eye lock none of them being able to lift their eyes of the other, suddenly due to the cracking sound from somewhere they remove their eyes and compose themselves, the man bends to pick up the things that fell from her hand and the girl slowly bends down gazing at him "I am sorry Roshni who actually main aise achanak se bahar aa raha tha toh maine tumhe nahi dekha aur......" While she is silent Roshni is picking up the fallen files still staring at him while he is looking downwards, their hands touch the same file at the same file and their eyes meet. Both of them see some unknown feeling erupt in them as they stare at each other Varun thinking aloud "yeh haath kabhi na chodne ke liye thaam lena chahta hoon par mujhe pata hai ke main is kaabil nahi ke tumhe who har khushi de sakun jo tum deserve karti ho" and Roshni "kaash Varun tum mera yeh haath humesha ke liye thaam lete par main jaanti hoon ke main tumhe deserve nahi karti" and thinking this they remove their hands and stand up composed. But suddenly the door opens and Roshni bangs into Varun's chest, and losing sense of anything hugs him tightly. Out of nowhere as planned by him Varun's hands too wrap around her, after standing like this for quite some time they move back, mouthing a sorry. Suddenly Roshni starts giggling at him and Varun is puzzled thought it gives him immense pleasure to hear and see her laugh. "kya hua has kyon rahi ho?" he asks confused and she laughs more and then moves close to him and picks out the pink pen that is pinned to his shirt and asks "tum toh bolte ho yeh ladkiyon ka color hai phir yeh pen kaise?" she says raising an eyebrow at him "who actually yeh tumne hi diya tha kal toh isiliye'.." and she says "arre haan maine hi toh diya tha" but then thinks something and pulls his cheeks "Varun tum bahut sweet ho mera diya hua pen bhi kitna sambhal ke rakhte ho" Varun smiles but then snatches the pen back "haan bahut sambhal ke aur rise main hi rakhoonga" and then walks out of the cabin smiling to himself while she looks to herself muttering "kaash tum mujhe bhi itna hi sambhal kar apne kareeb rakhte" but then hits her head, chuckles and goes inside.

It is evening time and all the four gather at the sports club there. Sameer glances at his watch and says "yaar Damini nahi aayi abhi tak" to which Roshni says "usko apni nayi gun mili haina tabse bas wahi practice kar rahi hai who" and Varun adds "do teen din me expert ho jaayegi who" Avni just says "phir nayi gun aur phir practice shuru".

A young girl is walking through the garden with one gun in her hand and a headphone in the other, her hair set loose and just ending a little below her shoulder. A small smile played on her lips as she saw the four people who were waiting for her from a long time. she reached them and put the gun and headphone on the table and then looked at them and before any of them could say anything she politely held her ears and said "sorry for being 5 minutes late, agli baar se aisa nahi hoga" and all smiled.

They took a seat beside each other and Sameer started "Damini why have you called us here is Inder up to something again" and Damini nodded "ab kya chahiye us Bandar ko, har waqt naak me dum karke rakhta hai kabhi chain se baithne nahi deta idiot" Roshni grumbled "aur who humse ghar par bhi toh baat kar sakta tha" Avni added "pehle hum unhi se sun lein ke kya baat hai" Varun said pointing to Inder who was coming their way.

Suddenly a splash in the pool which was near them made their heads turn towards the noise, after two minutes of looking, a hand came out of water holding a locket or sort of something. And soon a muscular, well toned athletic and well built looking guy came out of the water. He was only wearing denim jeans on the name of clothes, all of them looked at his handsome face as he turned to them exposing his abs and chest. Sameer and Varun were looking at the girls reaction rather than him, Avni was looking away embarrassed but Roshni was gaping open mouthed at him which made Varun boil in anger. But something hitched inside Damini as she carefully and slowly checked him out from top to bottom, well she was impressed by him if looks were everything and something else was there in the way which he carried himself with true dignity and self respect that attracted her to him.

But to their surprise, without even first look at them the guy walked away leaving Damini to mutter angrily "attitude toh dekho maharaja ka hai" and Varun snapped at Roshni who was still looking at his disappearing figure dreamily as Inder sat down with them. "toh Inder kyon bulaya tumne hume yahan?" Damini asked turning her frustration due to the lack of attention from the man on him as the tone she used was not enough polite to be considered polite "who maine tumhe yahan humaare naye security head aur tumhaare bodyguard se milne bulaya tha and you know he is better than what you asked for" Damini choked on the word better, she hadn't expected Inder to find one who could even match her expectations as she didn't need a body guard but on his insistence she had agreed and here he was saying he had found someone better in such a short span of time.

They reached the place where they were supposed to meet HIM, their new lamb for assault. As all new that no bodyguard was ever able to stay for more than at the most 1 week with them.

But who knew this one would turn their lives upside down, and then they would never be able to live as they did before. Maybe something that this new bodyguard had in him would make them change their mindsets. Do leave your precious comments.

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Edited by Sohil_Gupta - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
If i forgot to pm anyone i am very sorry please tell me and i will add you. do tell me if this part was upto your expectations as i think it is not that good as your response wanted it to be
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Posted: 15 years ago

hey, r u kidding sohil............dis was gr8.....loved the friends part, n prida's 1st meet......i'm guessin dat guy in the pool ws pri......waiting 4 the sparks 2 fly nxt!!...........lol,...lamb 4 assault...dat ws the best😆😆😆

Edited by davikrazzy - 15 years ago

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