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thanks just updating in minutesOriginally posted by: bfolnmdj
nyc bro !!!
im eager to read more !!
update soon 😊
thankss will update in minutesOriginally posted by: shalini_s
engaging CS.. waiting for the first part...
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thankss, that's for you to decide. will update in minutesHey Sohil,
Nice character sketch... look very interesting! This is going to be a romantic thriller, I suppose! 😃 Update soon!- Ishaan
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seems very intrerestin dear , eagerly waitin fo ur update ! =)
yeah it will be long and coming in minutes.Originally posted by: juhi_karneet
plzzzz update part 1 soon sohil n a long one ok nice story very much intrestin...........
plzz keep it long
thnx again
Really nice Character Sketch. You know, you reminded me of Sydney Sheldon (the top mystery novelist). Your prolgue writing and character defining, simply your writing reminded me of my favourite author.
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Part 1
Inder occupied the chair opposite to Raghav's and Raghav too sat down "so how come you are here Inder, now whose turn is it to be dead?" Raghav asked sipping his coffee "see this is not any usual kind of murder, we have to kill Damini, The Damini Gujral, the owner of Gujral Enterprises....." "And your stupid cousin" Raghav completed the sentence before him "yeah that too for my hard luck" Inder let out a sigh "so why do you need me, you could have finished off by yourself after all she is very close to you naa" Raghav asked quizzing "well I have already tried....." "And failed, so that is why you need me huh" Raghav said and chuckled while Inder glared daggers at him narrowing his eyes "no it is because I cannot do cheap acts to kill her, and every time I do it my way her support system saves her" "support system?" "yeah support system of 4 people, her best friends, always coming in my way" "so just get them killed too" "that's why I need you to do this as it will not awaken any doubts" Inder said after a pause "and I need your best man for this work as I don't want any mistakes" Inder completed firmly.
A guy dressed in a business suit is working on his computer diligently, but due to some noise his head lifts and he looks at the direction of the main corridor where a stylish and gorgeous looking girl is laughing over something as she is talking on the phone, he looks at her dreamily and her cute innocent and adorable laughter plays music to his ears and his smile widens as she comes closer to his cabin, but his blood boils when he sees another guy checking her out. He stands up angrily and walks out of the cabin to give that man a piece of his mind but crashes with the girl on the door as she was entering in. She falls in his arms and they share an eye lock none of them being able to lift their eyes of the other, suddenly due to the cracking sound from somewhere they remove their eyes and compose themselves, the man bends to pick up the things that fell from her hand and the girl slowly bends down gazing at him "I am sorry Roshni who actually main aise achanak se bahar aa raha tha toh maine tumhe nahi dekha aur......" While she is silent Roshni is picking up the fallen files still staring at him while he is looking downwards, their hands touch the same file at the same file and their eyes meet. Both of them see some unknown feeling erupt in them as they stare at each other Varun thinking aloud "yeh haath kabhi na chodne ke liye thaam lena chahta hoon par mujhe pata hai ke main is kaabil nahi ke tumhe who har khushi de sakun jo tum deserve karti ho" and Roshni "kaash Varun tum mera yeh haath humesha ke liye thaam lete par main jaanti hoon ke main tumhe deserve nahi karti" and thinking this they remove their hands and stand up composed. But suddenly the door opens and Roshni bangs into Varun's chest, and losing sense of anything hugs him tightly. Out of nowhere as planned by him Varun's hands too wrap around her, after standing like this for quite some time they move back, mouthing a sorry. Suddenly Roshni starts giggling at him and Varun is puzzled thought it gives him immense pleasure to hear and see her laugh. "kya hua has kyon rahi ho?" he asks confused and she laughs more and then moves close to him and picks out the pink pen that is pinned to his shirt and asks "tum toh bolte ho yeh ladkiyon ka color hai phir yeh pen kaise?" she says raising an eyebrow at him "who actually yeh tumne hi diya tha kal toh isiliye'.." and she says "arre haan maine hi toh diya tha" but then thinks something and pulls his cheeks "Varun tum bahut sweet ho mera diya hua pen bhi kitna sambhal ke rakhte ho" Varun smiles but then snatches the pen back "haan bahut sambhal ke aur rise main hi rakhoonga" and then walks out of the cabin smiling to himself while she looks to herself muttering "kaash tum mujhe bhi itna hi sambhal kar apne kareeb rakhte" but then hits her head, chuckles and goes inside.
It is evening time and all the four gather at the sports club there. Sameer glances at his watch and says "yaar Damini nahi aayi abhi tak" to which Roshni says "usko apni nayi gun mili haina tabse bas wahi practice kar rahi hai who" and Varun adds "do teen din me expert ho jaayegi who" Avni just says "phir nayi gun aur phir practice shuru".
A young girl is walking through the garden with one gun in her hand and a headphone in the other, her hair set loose and just ending a little below her shoulder. A small smile played on her lips as she saw the four people who were waiting for her from a long time. she reached them and put the gun and headphone on the table and then looked at them and before any of them could say anything she politely held her ears and said "sorry for being 5 minutes late, agli baar se aisa nahi hoga" and all smiled.
They took a seat beside each other and Sameer started "Damini why have you called us here is Inder up to something again" and Damini nodded "ab kya chahiye us Bandar ko, har waqt naak me dum karke rakhta hai kabhi chain se baithne nahi deta idiot" Roshni grumbled "aur who humse ghar par bhi toh baat kar sakta tha" Avni added "pehle hum unhi se sun lein ke kya baat hai" Varun said pointing to Inder who was coming their way.
Suddenly a splash in the pool which was near them made their heads turn towards the noise, after two minutes of looking, a hand came out of water holding a locket or sort of something. And soon a muscular, well toned athletic and well built looking guy came out of the water. He was only wearing denim jeans on the name of clothes, all of them looked at his handsome face as he turned to them exposing his abs and chest. Sameer and Varun were looking at the girls reaction rather than him, Avni was looking away embarrassed but Roshni was gaping open mouthed at him which made Varun boil in anger. But something hitched inside Damini as she carefully and slowly checked him out from top to bottom, well she was impressed by him if looks were everything and something else was there in the way which he carried himself with true dignity and self respect that attracted her to him.
But to their surprise, without even first look at them the guy walked away leaving Damini to mutter angrily "attitude toh dekho maharaja ka hai" and Varun snapped at Roshni who was still looking at his disappearing figure dreamily as Inder sat down with them. "toh Inder kyon bulaya tumne hume yahan?" Damini asked turning her frustration due to the lack of attention from the man on him as the tone she used was not enough polite to be considered polite "who maine tumhe yahan humaare naye security head aur tumhaare bodyguard se milne bulaya tha and you know he is better than what you asked for" Damini choked on the word better, she hadn't expected Inder to find one who could even match her expectations as she didn't need a body guard but on his insistence she had agreed and here he was saying he had found someone better in such a short span of time.
They reached the place where they were supposed to meet HIM, their new lamb for assault. As all new that no bodyguard was ever able to stay for more than at the most 1 week with them.
But who knew this one would turn their lives upside down, and then they would never be able to live as they did before. Maybe something that this new bodyguard had in him would make them change their mindsets. Do leave your precious comments.
_____________________________________________________hey, r u kidding sohil............dis was gr8.....loved the friends part, n prida's 1st meet......i'm guessin dat guy in the pool ws pri......waiting 4 the sparks 2 fly nxt!!...........lol,...lamb 4 assault...dat ws the best😆😆😆