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You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: ..pebo..
wen r u updating😭

Pebo its just been one day i updated last... I'll update asap....

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You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: ..pebo..
and wat abt your ff??

when are uppdating that😡

You rem that one?
I am kinda skeptical.. That ff is so not my writing style.... I am so not meant for FFs.. i can only write OSs or short stories...

So......

anyways will update forgive me asap..OK? Please don't be angry...
Love you..

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..pebo..

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Posted: 15 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: ak12

You rem that one?
I am kinda skeptical.. That ff is so not my writing style.... I am so not meant for FFs.. i can only write OSs or short stories...

So......

anyways will update forgive me asap..OK? Please don't be angry...
Love you..

dosti mein no sorry no thank you akansha sooooooooo.........

but i want extra long

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Faria Ferdousi

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Posted: 15 years ago

#164

Hey akansha

I read ur update just now.

And I m speechless after reading it.

How can someone wrote such a beautiful way.

U r just brilliant.

The way u describe the whole thing-hats off to u.

I just loved it.

i can easily feel the pain og nups that she got from mayu

U know what –after reading it I hate Mayank like anything.

How could he do this with nups and arjun.

I cant c mayur in separate , I alwaz want to c them together- but in this ff I don't know why but heart saying that nups shouldn't forgive Mayank.

He deserves all the pain that he gave nups.

He left nups n arjun just for build up his carrier.

i hate him , i hate him , i hate him😡

Super-duper update akshi

just amazing

plz update next part soon.

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The-chosen-one

@The-chosen-one

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Posted: 15 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: ak12

yeah ok... i get it now,...
dragging will leave the basic essence and feel of ss...

and wat about ff huh?!? u are skeptical about continuing it?? don't u dare!!
u shud give try on different writing style too... that way u'll grow better as a writer... its tough but still i think u'll be able to do that...
yess same here.. relatives now, tomorrow... and god knows till when...?
thats why me too could write nowadays
ok... take ur time
and try ur best
love you too....

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Mahima

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Posted: 15 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: ak12
Hello friends...

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hey all..
Thanx for reading this and liking it.. Next is the last part.. Will post it soon.....
Thanx to all the silent readers too..Love ya people...

Loads of love,
akansha

your update deserves the perfect comment.....

it is really awesome......

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fahi

@fahi91

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Posted: 15 years ago

#167

Hey Akanksha...

I didn't recieve a pm for this update so only just read it. 😳

Amazing update.. written so well... was so sad.. Mayank's words were so hurtful so dnt blame Nupur for the way she reacted.... but then he felt ashamed of himself and tried to come back.. does Nupur know this?. Does she know he tried but his contract stopped him?

enjoyed reading.... and honestly i was on the verge of crying... i had a lump in my throat reading this.. 😳it was sooo sad and so wonderfully written. 👏

Update soon. 😃

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You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: fariaa70
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Hey akansha

I read ur update just now.

And I m speechless after reading it.

How can someone wrote such a beautiful way.

U r just brilliant.

The way u describe the whole thing-hats off to u.

I just loved it. Thank you farii.... I am humbled...
i can easily feel the pain og nups that she got from mayu

U know what 'after reading it I hate Mayank like anything. Don't hate Mayank dear, You know with what struggles he grew up..Its natural for him to crave luxuries...

How could he do this with nups and arjun. He just made a mistake..

I cant c mayur in separate , I alwaz want to c them together- but in this ff I don't know why but heart saying that nups shouldn't forgive Mayank. Aww... I ve never ever got such extreme reviews... Anyways, Dear.. I want to tell you something...If mayank made a mistake..Nupur also made a small mistake... She shouldn't have cut contact with him for as many as three years... Though she knew that whatever he had said was in anger..Agreed, that she was angry but then was her reason enough to give up on love as divya di said... And mayank has always loved her...So.......

He deserves all the pain that he gave nups. He has also gone through the same pain for three years... Each day he died of his guilt...You know, galti sehne wale se jyada galti karne wala pain feel karta hai..( Its not my dialogue..But its true...)

He left nups n arjun just for build up his carrier. Yes he did but that was a bad decision. Not that he doesn't love Nupur and arjun..
i hate him , i hate him , i hate him😡

Super-duper update akshi Thanx.. Well i never told you but i kinda find my nick very sweet...
just amazing
plz update next part soon. Next is the last part.. Will update soon..
Farii... I want you to read divya di's and my discussion on Page 19 of this thread.. I think tumhara mayank ke upar gussa thoda shant ho jayega...Pleaseeeeeeee Aur mayank to maaf kardo.. Woh dil se sorry keh raha hai.. Duniya mein jitne bhi sorry hai.. woh sab sorry keh raha hai...

Loads of love,
Akansha

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You-Know-Who

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Posted: 15 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: pagli91
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Hey Akanksha...

I didn't recieve a pm for this update so only just read it. 😳 Oh i am so sorry...

Amazing update.. written so well... was so sad.. Mayank's words were so hurtful so dnt blame Nupur for the way she reacted.... but then he felt ashamed of himself and tried to come back.. does Nupur know this?. Does she know he tried but his contract stopped him? No. Nupur doesn't. You will come to know about it in the last part... Sometimes our harsh words take us away from our loved ones...

enjoyed reading.... and honestly i was on the verge of crying... i had a lump in my throat reading this.. 😳it was sooo sad and so wonderfully written. 👏 thanx i am happy i could bring it out the way i wanted..

Update soon. 😃 Will do..

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adi_gupta

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Posted: 15 years ago

#170

hi anksha

sorry or not commenting on part 4

i read all these two parts five or six time you know aknsha after reading both parts i am commenting today .......
i love arjun's effort it was not easy for him to forgive but atleast he is trying to do this and rati is helping her it was nice......
the movie and thier effort is lovely may be it will help them....
but the pain inside nups heart this is only nups know and i feel its depth is more than maynk's regret or his effort....it is very difficult to live in this word for a lady whose husband was not with her.....and nupur face this it was ..the most painfull thing and i salute her for showing her courage......
the way they both need for each other yes it is right and what nupur did was also right she need time too.......for everything......

and regarding to part 555555

akansha you did a brilliant job every word and emotion was just touching.........the reason why maynk left was ....
he was just in deep thought and may be a fight betwen his heart and soul.....where he choose his mind.or say he gave importance to his money mind .and lost his own words and broke the trust too.and ya doing this ii hate maynk tooo.........
and don't think forgiveness .......
he hurt nups love ........
he gave importance to money more than his love........
the pain he gave her was much more than anything..........
i want maynk also feel the pain which she face.......
when she was there with her son to fight alone.......
ya maynk too fel the loneless but it is difficult for a girl to face everything in this world of men.and i think he have to work hard for appolize.........
nupur is right and arjun too........
whatever arjun said i am very happy he supporeted his mother............
and akansha your words was just amazing ........
he did not kiss nups tears ........her heart was hurt by this act .........that time he only need money and it was morepainfull
he left nupur when she need him more..........
i don't know whether nups will forgive him or not no clue.....
but your word was faboulos and i love it..........