MN FF - Pride and Prejudice. . (Ch 5 - Pg. 37) ❤️ - Page 15

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Posted: 15 years ago
'Blue eyed guy' sounds really cool... Want to know more about him... with Nupur... And ya.. I loved the last line!
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely update...
cont soon...
sorry for da late reply...
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesum update kanky dear...👏.
really luvd d nupur's attitude 😳......
nupur in green saree...aww.😍.
mayu.. as usual in sadu avatar...😆
luvd d way he askd nupur 4 last dance on kahin toh.☺️...
luvd d update soo much.....
can't wait 4 next part...
pls update soon.🤗..
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: aishluvsmayur

Wow!!! Its really nice...

Umm... I wanted a favour though... I have never read Pride and Prejudice before... So... umm... I'm lost with that story... But seeing that your story sorta requires that story... could you brief me with it?

I'd tell you that when we chat.. 😆
Thanks!! 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: samratrocks

lovely update...

cont soon...
sorry for da late reply...

Never mind..
Thanks! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: mjhtmayurluver

awesum update kanky dear...👏.
really luvd d nupur's attitude 😳......
nupur in green saree...aww.😍.
mayu.. as usual in sadu avatar...😆
luvd d way he askd nupur 4 last dance on kahin toh.☺️...
luvd d update soo much.....
can't wait 4 next part...
pls update soon.🤗..
-supriya

Thanks a million friend!! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
that's just beautiful. I like it alot more because it's from nupur's POV so hopefully less mrs. bennet i.e. Nupur's mom. thanks a lot for your pm. and plz keep sending pm because I don't want to miss a update
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Nirjhor105

that's just beautiful. I like it alot more because it's from nupur's POV so hopefully less mrs. bennet i.e. Nupur's mom. thanks a lot for your pm. and plz keep sending pm because I don't want to miss a update

Sure!! 😉 Thanks a million! 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Senny

Hey jiah great job man.

Thanks! 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
Heylo guys!! 😊 I'm sorry for updating late. I hope you haven't forgotten this FF. Anyway, here is the update. 🤗 I'd be glad if you guys like it. Please please please comment and HIT THE LIKE TAB!! 😳😆

Chapter 2

I could see my Armaan in the blue eyed guy. His eyes had magic in them, just like Armaan's. I was smitten. His hand was there on my waist and I could feel something I never felt in these two years. But I couldn't see love in his eyes. And then I realized it wasn't my Armaan. Now, I was in tears and therefore I immediately made him loosen his grip and leave me. "I'm sorry, did I hurt you or something?" he questioned. "No, I need to go. And you did nothing. Chill. Bye!" I said and left, leaving him all confused.

* * *

Gunjan has been living with us for three years almost now. Her parents were in Manhattan. Mom treats her like her own daughter and so does Dad.
Dad has a library of his own at home. He and me are very fond of reading. We were both peacefully reading our respective books when Gunjan came in to seek permission for SOMETHING from Dad.

Gunjan: Uncle, do you mind if I go to dinner at my classmate Samrat's place?
Dad: Of course not. But love, be back as early as possible. 😊
Gunjan: Sure Uncle, thanks. 🤗

Heck! What was that?? Goodness, what did I just hear? Gunjan's going to Samrat's place. Whoa!! I told her to stay away from him.
He's the most amiable she's ever come across" . . I know BUT she doesn't realize such amiable people can be cheats sometimes. And besides, Samrat's sister, Suhaani hates Gunjan. I asked her not to go after she took Dad's permission but she didn't listen to me.

* * *

I was peacefully sitting at the corner of my bed with my eyes closed trying to remember the days I used to be one of the happy go lucky kind. When I had a reason in life to be happy for. I was smiling, I always did . . whenever I thought of Armaan. But the smile didn't last long for the moment I opened my eyes . . I could clearly see what the reality was or rather IS.
I switched off the lights and went to bed, I had completely forgotten Gunjan was still not back home. My cell phone rang, I picked it up however, I didn't who it was. It was a guy.

Guy: Nupur Kashyap?
Me: Yeah.
Guy: Gunjan's at my friend, Samrat's place right now. She's kind of unwell. Moreover, she's got her leg fractured. I'd send you the car tomorrow. Please come here. She's not in the condition to travel.
Me: Boy!! I'd be there by tomorrow. Thanks!

And I hung up. I rushed to my sister's room where both Mom and Dad were sitting, Dad reading the newsletter and Mom talking random stuff with my sister. I told them Gunjan won't be back home anytime that night for she had fractured her leg and I'd be leaving the next day for the place she was in.

* * *

I woke up at sharp six in the morning and guess what? The car was already there. I mean, six o'clock . . . that's kind of strange. I hadn't come across anyone so far as punctual as I am. I got dressed in a one-shouldered Kurti and legging with my wet hair left open. I picked up my wallet and cell and made way to the car. It took me three hours to reach Pune from Mumbai. Samrat owned a farmhouse in Pune where they were for a holiday and had called Gunjan over for dinner.
As soon as I entered the premises . . I could see Samrat and the blue eyed guy along with Suhaani sitting in the garden. Where the siblings were busy chatting and the blue eyed guy was busy with his cell phone as if no one was there. Samrat saw me and got up to welcome me in. Suhaani smiled and tried pretending she cared, but I knew what she actually felt therefore, not being welcomed by her was so not a problem. The blue eyed guy was now done with his cell and was gazing at me. I looked away because I found it uncomfortable, you know. He kept looking at me for like the next ten minutes. Just then Samrat patted him on the shoulder, "Mayank!! Hello?" he said and he came back to senses. I could sense my cheeks getting red and that was stranger.🥱
I made way to the room where Gunjan was sleeping peacefully with her plastered leg and some injuries around the arm and one small wound on the forehead. I was there with her the whole day. We had food at night in there. And all she could talk of was . . Samrat.

Gunjan: Samrat's such a fine fellow, you know. He took my care before you were not here. However, I dun like his sister much. She doesn't like me, I assume.
Me: You assume? I'm sure, my dear.
Gunjan: Hmmm!! By the way, you know something . . she likes Mayank.
Me: The blue eyed guy?
Gunjan: Yeah, wohi.
Me: Oh, okay.

I behaved as if I was least bothered and indeed, I wasn't a bit interested. Though, I was like really happy to know that my opinion about Samrat was wrong.
I went out to have a walk when Gunjan went to bed. I had a cup of coffee in a cafe close to the farmhouse. Farmhouse ke paas Cafe? Strange enough, huh? 😆 Anyway, on the way back to the room . . I realized there was no current and I was very scared as I'm kind of scared of darkness. I still tried moving forth . . I bumped into someone, had no idea who it was. I fell on that person and he landed on the floor, me being on top of him. I was so dreadfully scared that I instantly hugged him, crying and in between the sobs, saying, "Armaan!"
We were both in the same position for the next ten minutes. The current came, the lights were on now. We got up and I realized it wasn't Armaan, it was Mayank, the blue eyed guy. "Mayank!" he corrected me and left. 🥱 How can someone be this curt, I don't understand. 😕

* * *

Next morning, they were all seated in the living room. I didn't go there the previous day. I saw a piano in there. I asked if I could play it.. I started playing my favorite tune. Kuch Kuch Hota Hai's theme.
When I was finished, they all praised me. Mayank didn't say anything . . though THOSE BLUE EYES were killing me . . and I failed to resist. I was getting lost in those eyes. I could see through his eyes. I don't know as to why but I always felt there was something in that curt guy that had a deep connect with my soul.

"Ms. Kashyap. You are quite a good piano player. I'm sure in some years, you'd become perfectly trained." Mayank said breaking me out of the deep thinking session. And I was like . . "Umm, yeah . . why not! And who'd train me to become better? You?" I had managed to get angry by then. "Don't get me wrong girl. All I meant to say was that you'd become an awesome piano player if you learn more." he behaved like I HAD misunderstood his statement. But then how rude was that? Anyone SANE on earth would feel just the way I did.
And yet again . .he proved me wrong . .he was one extra vain fellow whom I misunderstood for a while to be like my Armaan.

Love,
Kanky 😳

Edited by Jiah.Angel - 15 years ago

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