FOUL IN LOVE-sk (last part)pg 111 - Page 57

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Posted: 15 years ago
aww she want pasta hahhahahaha sujal shuru ho jaao so sweet i am glad snoopy is fine thank you for update
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update neelu. loved it. loved sujalkashish scenes very much.
thanx for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
oh thats bad................spoonys having a surgery.......................sujal u r gone now....................kashish ne abhi se shuru kardi order dene ka and sujal now its really gonna be tiresome job......................cont soon dear........................
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part amazing itni tension may be kashish ko pasta ki padithi wowwww cont soonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
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Posted: 15 years ago

Part 17


Sujal reaches kashish's room with the pasta, but kashish is herself missing from the room.


He is wondering where she went from the room.


He starts searching for her.


His search ends at spoony's room where kashish is holding spoony's hand , who is now awake & mother daughter are chatting with each other happily.


Kashish is showing her happiness & affection from time to time to spoony in form of kisses.

S knocks.


Both kashish & spoony turn their gaze to him.


Today, kashish's smile does not fade after seeing him & spoony is as usual happy to see him.


Sp-magiciaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan !


She says with her usual happy grin.


s-how is this little brave girl?


Sp- I am goodh, jushth have thish bhandhagedh headh.


s-hmm


he turns his gaze to kashish.


s-main tumhare liye leke aaya aur tum yahan aa gayi.


k-haan, mujhe nahi khana tha, mujhe spoony ke paas rehna tha [she kisses spoony]


s-[s doesn't further argue, as he is hesitant that does he have the right to argue with her or not & looks at spoony] see, I got chocolate for you spoony.


He hands over the chocolate bar to her, who is delightd to have it.


Sp-thankyouuuuuuuu !


s-and, this one for mumma !


k-[she looks at s with astonishment] me?


Sp-for mommy?


s-yes, your mommy also loves chocolates like you, I know.


S moves his forward towards kashish with the chocolate, k accepts it.


Sp-oh magician , you know everyyyyyyyyyyyyything !


He nods smiling at sp.


s-somewhat.


While kashish takes a bite of the chocolate.


Sujal & spoony are happily chatting & playing with each other.


Sujal is playing childish games with spoony which spoony is enjoying happily.


She knows he wants to distract her from the pain that spoony must be experiencing.


While spoony & sujal are enjoying their time together, kashish is a mere spectator looking at them with a pleasant smile on her lips.


Her thoughts take her to the time when he spoony today, carrying safely in his arms. Taking full control of the situation , taking care of her & spoony. Remaing strong when she losed her control giving that essential support. First time she relied on someone & everything was perfectly taken care of.


k-emm..tumne wo pasta kahan rakh dia, mujhe bhukh lag rahi hai.


s-oh I will just serve you.


He gets a plate & serves her the pasta with a glass of juice.


Sp-finishhhhhhhhh the game , magician !


s-coming spoony !


he now goes & attends her daughter while she haves her meal & keeps on looking at the happy sight.


Edited by storywriter - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome part dear loved the father daughter relation part fantastic cont soonnnnnnnnnn...............😊😊😊😊👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwww sooooo sweet kashish ne pasta kha liya so sweet and nice i hope they told snoopy soon ab sujal is her father ...thank you for pm dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
oww, nice part neelu. sujal is so sweet. he takes care both of them.father daughter scenes is so sweet. cont.soon
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
kashish is melting and is not angry nor uncomfortable with sujal around...........cont soon..............
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Posted: 15 years ago
awsome part
superb
loved it
great going
plz continue soon

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